Making (and taking) the Cake

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English 101 Honors Summer Reading and Writing Seminar: Food Network Style Just call me boss because my writing is like the icing on top of Mrs. Sullivan’s half birthday cake!

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Making (and taking) the Cake. English 101 Honors Summer Reading and Writing Seminar: Food Network Style. Just call me boss because my writing is like the icing on top of Mrs. Sullivan’s half birthday cake!. What do we like to do? REVIEW… REVIEW!!!. Yesterday, you were like Mike…(chael)…. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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English 101 HonorsSummer Reading and Writing Seminar: Food

Network StyleJust call me boss because my writing is like the icing on top

of Mrs. Sullivan’s half birthday cake!

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What do we like to do? REVIEW

…REVIEW!

!!

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Yesterday, you were like Mike…(chael)…

You were practicing critical thinking during the day and continued working on how to communicate that thought last night…

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Tuesday, you can be like Mike…(chael)…

So you will perfect your craft and bring your “A” game to class on Tuesday—and celebrate your Sullivan style success!

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Practice like you perform.Perform like a champion.

PRACTICE is where you perfect

your FORM, make mistakes,

and grow as a learner.

FORMATIVE Assessment = 10%

of your grade.

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Practice like you perform.Perform like a champion.

PERFORMANCE is where you

put the SUM of your efforts

to the test and reveal your

true success. SUMMATIVE

assessment = 90% of your

grade.

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The “Write” RecipeThe key ingredient to any tasty treat is

the glue that holds it all together…

The “T” (the actual cake) is the glue that holds the entire masterpiece

together.

The “T”opic and “T”ransition sentence lets your audience know what they will be enjoying without actually saying “this cake used ½ cup of sugar, 3 cups of flour, 2 egg beaters—”…you get the idea.

Instead, it uses its strong flavors to make a claim about it’s flavor and ingredients.

The “T” (the actual cake) is the glue that holds the entire masterpiece

together.

The “T”opic and “T”ransition sentence lets your audience know what they will be enjoying without actually saying “this cake used ½ cup of sugar, 3 cups of flour, 2 egg beaters—”…you get the idea.

Instead, it uses its strong flavors to make a claim about it’s flavor and ingredients.

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Let’s Look at Last Year’s Finalists…

With his admirable example, Doc reveals to Peekay and readers alike that true knowledge is not learned from books, but instead, stems

from what the mind already knows.

Through her struggle to find love in a house full of pain, Lily

shows readers that family is defined not by a roof but by a

relationship with oneself.

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The “Write” Recipe.Yet another key ingredient to any tasty treat is the little extra’s that add flavor

and enhance the foundation….

The “E” (fabulous filling) is the necessary “filling” that makes your

cake anything but average, and your claim anything but false.

The “E”xample sentence supports your original cake (or claim) and makes it taste that much better…without it would be too plain!

The “E” (fabulous filling) is the necessary “filling” that makes your

cake anything but average, and your claim anything but false.

The “E”xample sentence supports your original cake (or claim) and makes it taste that much better…without it would be too plain!

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Let’s Look at Last Year’s Finalists…Doc explains to Peekay that a “brain has two functions; it is a place for original thought, but also it is a reference library,” reinforcing the idea that true knowledge comes from what is

already known within (Courtenay 102).

August helps Lily to realize that all people must “find a mother inside {themselves}…even if

{they} already have a mother, {they} still have to find this part

of {themselves} inside” (Kidd 201).

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The “Write” Recipe.The V.I.P. ingredient that puts the icing

on the cake is analysis!

The “A” (icing on the cake) is the critical element that transforms a

plain cake into a delectable masterpiece, leaving everyone’s

palate satisfied.

The “A”nalysis sentences are vital to any recipe because they offer your own personal wisdom, insight, and ideas, further evaluating how your example justifies your original claim…or why your filling compliments the frosting.

The “A” (icing on the cake) is the critical element that transforms a

plain cake into a delectable masterpiece, leaving everyone’s

palate satisfied.

The “A”nalysis sentences are vital to any recipe because they offer your own personal wisdom, insight, and ideas, further evaluating how your example justifies your original claim…or why your filling compliments the frosting.

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Let’s Look at Last Year’s Finalists…Knowledge, then, doesn’t come from teacher’s lessons or textbooks, but from the information

deep inside us, information that can be discovered with the right experience and

proper exploration.

Like Lily, those struggling to find a place in their family must first

overcome the struggle to make peace with themselves. A person must be

confident in their own identity in order to become an intricate piece to a

whole puzzle; they must believe that the piece fits, and then, with true ease

and minimal effort, it will.

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Now, young grasshopper, show that cake who is

boss.

Our Billy’s going to be

the next William

Cakespeare…I just know

it!

Aw man, Billy always

gets the best

assignments! I want to

bake a writing cake

for Mrs. Sullivan’s

class!

Mmm..meat.