MAF D Student Model Essay - Aggressive Motorists

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MODEL ESSAY Aggressive Motorists The number of vehicles on the freeways and roads of Malaysia is increasing at an alarming rate. This influx of motorcycles, cars and lorries is creating hazardous conditions. Moreover, riders and drivers are in such a rush to get to their destinations that they become angry or impatient with other road users who are too slow or who are in their way. Aggressive motorists react foolishly toward others in several dangerous ways. One way an angry motorist may react is to cut off another driver. This is a dangerous practice sometimes resulting in collision. It also has the potential to disrupt the flow of traffic and to block feeder roads. We would do better to practice cooperation on the roads, rather than a ‘me-first’ attitude. Another reaction of an aggressive motorist is to tailgate the other vehicle. This is not only rude but also intimidating and dangerous. The practice results in insufficient reaction time and an inadequate view of the road conditions ahead for the tailgating driver. The consequences could easily be a ‘nose-to tail’ collision if the front vehicle brakes, turns or swerves. In addition to cutting off and tailgating other vehicles, aggressive drivers often use rude language or gestures to show their anger. This phenomenon has become most grave in the United States of America where they have the added complication of enraged drivers with guns. When I recently commented on the apparent politeness of drivers in the US my American friend replied that this was due to drivers’ fear of enraging an armed motorist. Fortunately Malaysians need not fear such extreme reactions, however we still need to be wary of an aggressive driver who unleashes profanities or obscene gestures. They are an indication that the motorist has stepped outside his social and cultural bounds which usually curb such behaviour. We are well UPPER INTERMEDIATE ENGLISH, MAF D, WRITING ESSAYS 30

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Aggressive Motorists

MODEL ESSAY

Aggressive Motorists

The number of vehicles on the freeways and roads of Malaysia is increasing at an alarming rate. This influx of motorcycles, cars and lorries is creating hazardous conditions. Moreover, riders and drivers are in such a rush to get to their destinations that they become angry or impatient with other road users who are too slow or who are in their way. Aggressive motorists react foolishly toward others in several dangerous ways.

One way an angry motorist may react is to cut off another driver. This is a dangerous practice sometimes resulting in collision. It also has the potential to disrupt the flow of traffic and to block feeder roads. We would do better to practice cooperation on the roads, rather than a me-first attitude.

Another reaction of an aggressive motorist is to tailgate the other vehicle. This is not only rude but also intimidating and dangerous. The practice results in insufficient reaction time and an inadequate view of the road conditions ahead for the tailgating driver. The consequences could easily be a nose-to tail collision if the front vehicle brakes, turns or swerves.

In addition to cutting off and tailgating other vehicles, aggressive drivers often use rude language or gestures to show their anger. This phenomenon has become most grave in the United States of America where they have the added complication of enraged drivers with guns. When I recently commented on the apparent politeness of drivers in the US my American friend replied that this was due to drivers fear of enraging an armed motorist. Fortunately Malaysians need not fear such extreme reactions, however we still need to be wary of an aggressive driver who unleashes profanities or obscene gestures. They are an indication that the motorist has stepped outside his social and cultural bounds which usually curb such behaviour. We are well advised to keep our distance from such drivers and not answer them back.

Although traffic police have warned motorists against aggressive driving, the number who act out their angry impulses has not declined. Rather, in Malaysia we have observed a trend towards a greater number of traffic infringements and accidents related to road rage, intolerance and impatience. Too many innocent lives have been lost or impaired due to impatient drivers speeding or attempting to overtake only to run head-on into an oncoming vehicle. Motorcyclists in particular have earned a reputation for being foolhardy on the roads. Furthermore, the attitude of drivers towards motorcyclists had deteriorated to such an extent that the authorities ran a public relations campaign to try and influence motorists to be more thoughtful.

To conclude, aggressive motorists are endangering everyone because they create hazardous conditions by acting and driving foolishly. They should control their anger and learn to drive safely. After all, the lives they spare could well be their own.

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