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M5E1 - BUSINESS COMMUNICATION & REPORT WRITING
ENS ENGLISH DEPARTMENT
Heba El-Hendi
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Ch 8-Negative Messages Objectives 1. Understand what is a negative message2. Understand the indirect plan and its advantages for
negative messages 3. Understand the five guidelines for using the indirect
plan 4. Practice by writing a negative message using the
indirect plan
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Objective 1: Understanding a negative message
A negative message is one that is likely to be viewed as unpleasant, disappointing, or unfavorable by the receiver.
A refusal of a request that has been made by you or your organization
Challenging to compose
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Objective 2: Understanding and using the indirect plan
Indirect plan: opens on neutral ground or on a point of agreement and then leads into the main idea later in the message.
Advantages of the indirect plan: Enables receiver to……Accept negative information Maintain a satisfactory relationship with you
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Objective 2: Understanding and using the indirect plan , contin….The negative sentence or section is followed by reasons
explaining refusal/unfavorable information.
Prepares reader for negative information
Goal: achievement of a positive receiver reaction
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Objective 3: How to use the indirect plan
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The Indirect Plan• Determination of content by asking yourself :
What ideas can I use in the opening to establish coherence and build goodwill in this particular situation?
Why is it in the receiver’s interest for me to refuse the request or present the unfavorable information?
Is there an alternative course of action that I can recommend to this receiver?
What friendly message can I convey in the off-the-subject close?
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Indirect Plan: Opening Buffer
Must: provide coherence, build goodwill, be positive, maintain neutrality, and introduce explanation.
One to three sentences
Providing Coherence: tying the negative message to a previous interaction (conversation, a point of agreement, prior transaction, etc).
Example: Thank you for interviewing with us for the program director position
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Indirect Plan: Opening Buffer Contin…
Build Goodwill: use courteous, polite words such as thank you, please, and I appreciate.
Positive words, avoid negative Helps set a favorable tone and makes message more acceptable to reader
Maintains Neutrality: Do not suggest negative information in the beginning. It should not be a yes or a no.
Introduce explanation: The last sentence of the buffer should have the indication of the explanation. This method sets up for the logical explanation and helps provide
coherence.
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Indirect Plan: II. Logical Explanation
After the opening buffer and usually one paragraph
The reasons should show how the negative information will be in the best interest of the receiver
Reasoning then should be: calm, convincing, and pleasant by using the “you-viewpoint”
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Indirect Plan: II. Logical Explanation Contin Beginning of logical explanation should use coherence
techniques relating it to the opening.
Should be composed with the receiver’s interest or benefits as the focal point
Use rules of emphasis: Start with emphasizing the points most favorable to your
receiverLeast favorable information should be deeper in the
paragraph
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Indirect Plan: II. Logical Explanation Contin Positivity: logical explanation should be positive and
negative words should be avoided
situation vs. problem needed change vs. correction
avoid: failure, cannot, trouble, inadequate, and defective
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Indirect Plan: III. Negative Information
Consists of the request refusal, unfavorable decision, or other disappointing information
Receivers will be expecting this information if the opening buffer and logical explanation were effective
Goal: present negative information in a format that is
clear to the receiver by explicitly stating the decision or implying.
Depends on situation
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Indirect Plan: III. Negative Information Contin….
Example of implying negative information “Smoking is permitted in the hallways only”
Explicit: “Smoking is prohibited in the classrooms and offices”
For effective communication of negative information, it is better to say what can be done rather than what cannot be done.
Explicit terms “therefore, the committee has not approved your application for
admission” leaves no doubt in the receiver’s mind
*depends on culture
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Indirect Plan: III. Negative Information Contin….
De-emphasis techniques: Place negative information in middle of a paragraph Never have negative information in a separate paragraph Negative news may be followed by an additional reason
or suggested alternative(s)Negative news should be given in as few words as
possible Can place negative news in a dependent clause.
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Indirect Plan: III. Negative Information Contin….
Be positive and avoid negative words.Say what can be done Avoid apologies
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Indirect Plan: Follow-up and Friendly Close Constructive Follow-Upprovide other solutions to the problem, if possible. suggest other alternatives
Friendly CloseGoal is to move the receiver’s mind away from the
problem Be warm, friendly, and optimistic
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Objective 4: Differentiate between poor and good negative messages
• Kerbs Furniture has manufacturing plants in six locations within the United States. Its Georgetown, Texas, plant manufactures collective reproductions and has been operating for 35 years. It currently has 150 employees who have excellent fringe benefits and earn above-average salaries for the Georgetown area. Krebs began its operation in Georgetown with 12 employees and steadily grew to more than 250 employees. About five years ago competition in producing collectible reproductions, especially from international companies, increased tremendously. This competition forced Krebs to downsize its workforce to its present size of 150 employees. Now Krebs’ management, realizing that it cannot compete with the lower production costs due to the low wages that international companies pay, has decided to close its Georgetown plant at the end of the year. Your task is to write a memo conveying the negative information to the employees and, at the same time, to make the information acceptable and maybe even desirable for them.
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Prompt ExerciseRemember:
Determine appropriate content, write an effective opening buffer, provide a convincing logical explanation, give negative information positively, assist the receiver with constructive follow-up (if possible), and build goodwill and a friendly close.
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Chapter 9: Persuasive Messages
Objectives: 1. Describe a persuasive message. 2. Understand the purposes of a persuasive message. 3. Know the four specific guidelines for using the indirect
plan for persuasion. 4. Practice the new methods.
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Objective 1: Describe a Persuasive Message
• A persuasive message is a request for action when you believe the receiver may be unknowing, disinterested, or unwilling. It is also a communication maneuver trying to change the opinion of the receiver.
• • Objective of persuasive message is to get the receiver to
read/listen to the entire message AND have the receiver react positively to the request.
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Objective 1: Describe a Persuasive Message
• Will be viewed neither as positive nor negative by the receiver.
• Used for both internal and external communication
• Internal: speech asking employees to volunteer, requesting initiation of a policy, requesting donations for a charity your company endorses
• External: sales message- a communication that has a description of a product, its benefits, available options and models, price, and related services.
• ***Most common***
• Request to respond to a questionnaire, letters requesting employment with an organization.
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The Purpose of Indirect Plan for Persuasive Messages • Should be used for messages attempting to convince the
receiver to take an action.
• First present the benefits that the receiver may gain from fulfilling the request.
• Puts the receiver in the proper frame of mind to consider the request.
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The Purpose of Indirect Plan for Persuasive Messages • Ensure that the reader reads the benefits first.
• Requires use of more words than the direct plan
• If positively constructed in the ‘you-viewpoint’, the receiver will more likely be in a positive mood and consider the rest of the message
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Objective 3: Four Specific Guidelines for Using the Indirect Plan for Persuasion
• Before implementing the plan, analyze your recipient, and use the ‘you-viewpoint’ to stress the receiver’s interests and benefits
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Objective 3: Four Specific Guidelines for Using the Indirect Plan for Persuasion
• I. Attention• A. attract the receiver’s attention in opening sentence• B. cause the receiver to read or to listen to rest of message. • C. be positive and brief. II. Interest • A build attention gained in the opening • B. show benefits • C. Motivate receiver to continue reading III. Desire• A. Build on receiver’s attention and interest by providing proof of benefits. • B. Re-emphasize benefits to the receiver • C. Downplay any negative points or obstacles. IV. Action• Motivate receiver to take immediate action• Be positive • Make action easy
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Indirect Plan • I. Attention: attract the receiver’s attention in opening
structure
• Increases the chances that the receiver will continue to read/listen to the entire message and then take desired action
• Opening should be concise and positive that intrigues the receiver’s curiosity
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I. Attention: • Types:
• Mechanical devices (color or drawings)• Use the receiver’s name in the sentence • Rhetorical questions Interjections •
• Must consider the ‘you-viewpoint’ • Can use any gimmicks but should not give receiver the
impression that he/she will be mislead • “Your investment of $10 may grow to a million dollars by
the end of the year”
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II. Interest
• Must hold receiver’s interest of his/her attention is gained through the opening
• Maintained when the receiver sees benefits for himself or herself
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III. Desire • • After gaining attention and interest, offer proof of the
benefits for the receiver
• Purpose is to motivate the receiver to take requested action
• Facts and figures can be valuable but should not be overused
• Attempt to anticipate the receiver’s negative reactions
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IV. Action
• Ask the receiver to take immediate action
• Action requested of the receiver should be a logical next step
• Ensure that minimal effort is required for receiver to take the necessary action
• State clear date if needed by a certain date
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Objective 4: Practice new methods
• Jeri Matthews has been a computer specialist for Samson Foods Distribution in Jackson, Tennessee, for seven years. Samson Foods is opening a new distribution center in Little Rock, Arkansas, this fall. The vice president for operations recently spoke to Jeri about the new facility. At that time, he did not tell Jeri about the responsibility of her transferring to Little Rock. Now, he would like Jeri to make a lateral transfer to Little Rock and assume the duties of computer analyst. It would not be a promotion for Jeri nor would there be an increase in pay; however, the company will pay moving expenses and a relocation allowance. Jeri would have to move to a new city and get a system operating for the new distribution center.
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