July Newsletter 1.2
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JULY 2014 Vol 1.2
I romant ic ized you to the point where the kn ives you pressed in to my skin began to look l ike Cupid ’s a r rows.
- Unknown
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IN THIS ISSUE
Life on the Dark Side
o Lana Sky
That Thing Called Love o L.F Goodfellow
In Another World o Simone Coleman
The Effects of Rewriting o Imogen Isles
What is Love? Baby, Don’t Hurt Me o Mira Toria
The Vault
Survivor Quiz
JULY 2014
VOL. 1 ISSUE. 1
JULY 2014
VOL. 1 ISSUE. 2
What’s new in the MALICE world?
In this issue, we are introducing a new author and putting hints to a password that will allow you to access the vault.
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Check it out and be sure to check out your favorite MALICE authors as well as new ones!
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When you’re dealing with romance, this character crafting business gets even more interesting because
you have to somehow find a way to make two completely different characters compatible—at least
enough to take their pants off—and, of course, I like to complicate things a bit.
One of the first stories I even wrote was entitled Bloodlust, and was the second book within a crazy series
that featured everything from witches and vampires to bloody war and intrigue. The rest of the series fell
apart, but this one story has stayed stuck within my mind simply because of the volatile relationship
between the two main characters:
- Miranda is a stubborn, borderline neurotic witch who feels betrayed by a beloved friend and at
her wit’s end. She’s a bit reckless, unstable—oh, and she hates vampires enough to sacrifice
herself just to see them all fall.
- Aternan is a stoic vampire warrior with a dark past who would do anything to protect his
people—mainly from Miranda. She may be his captive, but he doesn’t underestimate her for a
second.
Their hatred for each other is all the more complicated by the contrasting relationship of their two friends:
Faye a renegade witch, and Garret, the once irredeemable vampire warrior and Aternan’s right-hand man.
On the surface, these two would never in a million years seem compatible—and that’s the fun part. As a
writer, I like crafting relationships built on trust, which is one of the hardest things for anyone (be them
fictional or not) to forge with another person. A little bit of shaky trust can overcome any differences
overtime—along with a healthy dose of blood, lust, magic, violence and intrigue, of course.
Every writer differs on how and where they like to insert trust or the other elements of building a romantic
relationship—I on the other hand tend to wing it and hope for the best. Sometimes, a series of random
encounters and mistakes make for the best stories.
FUN FACT ABOUT LANA SKY – SHE HAS WRITTEN OVER FIFTY STORIES (AND STOPPED COUNTING)
Whenever I begin a new story, one of the first things I
establish is the main character. Who are they? What
do they look like? How do they think? What drives
them? What causes them to fail?
Plot, pacing, story Arc, and all that other stuff is
important, but for me the most important force driving
a story forward are the characters themselves. Mainly,
how they react, think, feel and learn within their
unique world and situation.
I never gave up trying to write a romance novel. Instead I wrote it my way and steered away from a
typical romance book. While I tested the waters of darker elements with The Wolf Cave, or Forever
Tainted, the book that I really went all out with was His to Keep.
I have no idea how to justify this book. I wanted to write romance, and brought forth this demon. It was
my way of saying I cannot write normal, and I never want to. I am not one of those authors who plan
precisely how their books go. I write in the moment and come up with an idea on the spot. But I always
knew His to Keep was the first draft, and that once I had the basis of the story down, I could go much
further.
So while I am still re-writing and bringing this book to another potential, I ask myself how I can validate
romance in this His to Keep. It is not your everyday love story, not by a long shot, but there is love in it
between two characters. How can you possibly write dark with romance in it? Wouldn’t love be a lie?
Wouldn’t it be unbelievably stupid for a main character in such a position to open her heart like that?
My answer is no. Since when is falling in love with someone that easy? Does loving someone have to
always be explained? For Ava, falling in love was ultimately her survival.
It’s extremely exciting to re-write this tale. As of now, all characters in the story all play a crucial part into
the horrific events our main character goes through. The Father Aaron storyline has been changed. The
Callum storyline has changed. I am simply adding onto the crazy by writing new scenes and breathing life
into all the characters.
It is a book about finding love in the most strangest of places and using that as a beacon of hope when all
else is lost.
FUN FACT ABOUT L.F GOODFELLOW – SHE NEEDS A CUP OF TEA WITH EVERY CHAPTER SHE WRITES!
Someone once suggested I write a romance novel. A book filled
with love, hope and the journey of two characters. I tried—and
failed, epically.
Why?
Because I don’t have it in me to just write a normal book about
two normal people in a normal relationship that has a few
bumps. I can’t, simply because once you go skipping into the
darkest corners of your imagination, it is very hard to come back
out and write something normal.
FUN FACT ABOUT SIMONE COLEMAN – SHE STARTED WRITING . . . TWILIGHT FAN-FICTION!
My favorite part about beginning any story is the
world-building involved. This can take me anything
from two weeks to five months, but I always feel
better prepared jumping into a story once it’s out of
the way.
From a reader’s perspective, intensive world-building
can be a magical experience. If a reader can immerse
themselves inside the world within which your story
exists, it’s much more likely they’ll never want to
leave. Good world-building brings your fictional world
to life. Reading about badly plotted paranormal and
fantastical elements can be quite jarring to your audience and unless you’re writing a parody or an obviously
humorous story, you’re better off erring on the side of realistic. There’s no hard and fast rule of world creation, but
here’s how I like to do things:
1. Create a Culture
Culture is a huge part of world building. Most of my paranormal novels take place within the same world, so
I’ve had to create different cultures for different creatures, and define how they interact with each other and
how their societies function. Are your werewolves a secret from humans? Are they sequestered away? When
they’re not running around on four legs (or even when they are), what are their hobbies? Where do they live?
How do they acquire an income? What differentiates them from humans? Sometimes you’ll find that answers
to these questions slot cleanly into the human world (your werewolves could run a bank, for example), but
other times, you’ll get to be creative.
2. Question Everything You Create
For example, you’re writing a book where the central conflict is a war between two different factions of
werewolves. Why are they fighting? When did the fighting start? Maybe they’re fighting over a talisman that
belonged to the moon gods. Great—explore the moon gods. Who are they? Why are they important to your
werewolves? Why are they fighting over this talisman? Questioning your world building is a great way to set
limitations for yourself and prevent little plot hole accidents that might have otherwise tripped you up. So
your werewolf protagonist can transform on nights where there’s no full moon. Why? Is he the only one who
can do it? Is that significant to your plot or is it something you should reconsider?
3. Make your world-building relevant to the story.
What is the point of a long, boring monologue about the moon gods when your story is about a werewolf on
trial for eating a human girl? Do the moon gods participate in his trial? Does their talisman aid in his release at
some point? No? Then don’t bother with the history lesson. If the moon gods are relevant to your
werewolves’ religion, then a sentence about their existence is all you need. Don’t dump information on
people; small allusions give the impression of a larger, detailed world.
FUN FACT ABOUT IMOGEN ISLES – SHE WRITES MOST OF HER DIALOGUE IN THE SHOWER ON A SHOWERPROOF NOTEPAD!
FUN CHARACTER FACTS:
Emma doesn’t know how to
drive. She never learned
because her dad feared she’d
have an epileptic fit and lose
control of the vehicle.
Zac is a borderline alcoholic.
Zac is a transfer from the Mid-US
Region, located in St. Louis, MO.
Sam was born with an extra
finger on his left hand, though it
was removed shortly after his
birth. For most of his youth, his
mom called him Lang (short for
Phalange), but the nickname
died when she did.
Daphne and Zac were a long-
term relationship until one of
Zac’s cases went sour, and he
had the collector’s equivalent to
a mid-life crisis.
Sirius can sing like nobody’s
business and finds far too much
pleasure in showing everyone up
in karaoke.
At first, writing Zac and Emma’s story was simply because I HAD to get it out. They were caged animals, violently clawing their way out of my brain until I threw my arms up and unlocked the door. I had no publishing goals, no real interest in showing others my stories, but the more I delved into their tale, the more I realized that their story wasn’t right. It wasn’t what they were telling me to write, it was what I wanted to read. It was the easy version of their story. This is what Rewriting has always meant to me. It’s getting deeper to the truth of the tale. So, I spent the next year in a cycle of listening and rewriting, listening and rewriting, and it continued until they told me to stop. To be honest, they still haven’t told me when to stop, and part of me fears they never will, but it is my duty as a writer to simply get a reader as close to their truths as I possibly can. Well, along the way of these heavy rewrites, a lot of their situations changed. The core of their scenes remained the same, but the supporting walls around them had to be broken down. So for fun, I thought I’d let you in on some of those changes. Some of them are severe, but you can sort of track the process of how Thread has become the story it is today, and how exactly Emma and Zac have become well, Emma and Zac.
PLOT CHANGES:
There were originally three different versions of Thread, and all of the top four characters have had at least one name change. (Zacchaeus was originally Treiger and Jimmy. Emma was Hollister/Hailey and Evelyn. Sirius was Lucius. Sam was both Tom and Bridger.)
In Thread’s original version, the title was Ghost, and it’s safe to say it was heavily Patrick Swayze-inspired. ;D
In the second version of Thread, Zac was a guardian angel, but that didn’t fit right with Zac’s personality. His emotions ran too deep for what I imagined a guardian angel was like. He was something darker, something deeper, and when I realized that he deemed his profession as legal murder, he revealed he was a soul collector.
Sam Thoreau was originally an art professor named Tom. He was incredibly sexy, but I felt the teacher/student element detracted from what was really important in the novel.
Emma wasn’t always epileptic. She had visions of random deaths and moments in time, but the touch-induced seizures weren’t a part of the story. But I felt Emma needed a stronger reason for being so shut-off from the world and why she avoided people like the plague, other than family loss being her main cause of suffering. So I was messing around with different transitions, and that’s how the introduction scene between Emma, her dad, and Erica were created.
Troy was always a doctor, but in all the original versions, he was her eldest brother. Originally, Emma’s family consisted of five members: Dan (her father), Lisa (her mother), Troy, Reid (middle brother), and herself. After a lot of debate, I chose to kill my darlings. The story had far too many characters that didn’t serve purpose. So, I combined Dan, Troy, and Reid into Troy Sinclair, the man we currently know as Emma’s father.
FUN FACT ABOUT MIRA TORIA – SHE HAS A PET PEEVE WITH OVER-THE-TOP CHEESY NICKNAMES LIKE ANGEL!
What exactly is love? It’s something we have all dreamt about, listened to songs about, watched movies on, read endless poems and stories on but yet, no one has the perfect formula for what love is. Everyone has a different definition of it – what we want it to be – but why is that? Why is this thing called love so hard to define even though we all want it?
I personally think this is why the topic of love is still around today – because even though no one has a hard and fast rule about it, the concept of love is fascinating. We know the general formula for relationships in movies and books – boy meets girl, they fall in love, a big climax with something world shattering, they resolve their differences and then we have a sunset kiss tying everything up in a neat package ready to go. We know this is going to happen (generally speaking anyhow) so why is it that we’re still gravitating towards the topic? To me, it’s because when we write about love, it can have the basic formula, but it’s so flexible because we can add in factors that make the story unique. They say you never fall in love the same way with different people and I believe that. But then that begs to question – how many ways are there to fall in love? There are so many different ways you can make characters fall in love. It can be a gradual fall, where everyone but them can see it happening and when they realise it, they’re in too deep to stop. It can be one of those moments where people have eye contact and chemistry happens. No matter their initial reaction, just remember you have to give us a reason to believe that the characters have a reason to want to continue talking to one another! You can only tell your readers there’s chemistry before they demand to see the chemistry they’re being told is happening. My short story, Say Something, is about childhood loves. A love that can either fade away as we grow up and just be a passing memory, or something that we hold onto because there’s something so pure about being loved by your first. Addison, my main female character is left with a fleeting memory of her first love, Carver, and though she grows up and seemingly forgets about him, there’s something in her that clings onto the memory. This story is different from the usual ‘fluff’ I write because I’m trying a different way of showing how obsessive, selfish and magical love can be. There aren’t any obvious heroes in love, there hardly is ever, and in Say Something, love can be as unforgettable as it is unforgiving. ----- If you’re interested, this was my playlist while writing the story.
- All I Want – Dawn Golden - Say Something – A Great Big World ft. Christina Aguilera
PASSWORD– IN ALL CAPS, THE LAST NAME OF THE AUTHOR WHO SAID FALLING IN LOVE WAS FOR HER CHARACTER TO SURVIVE
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MALICE
Lana Sky
Mira Toria
Imogen Isles
Simone Coleman
L.F Goodfellow
QUESTIONNAIRE
ANSWERS
Out of all the authors
listed here, how
many do you think
are using pen names?
A: We are all using
pen names
Which author has
been made fun of by
the UPS man because
of the sheer amount
of books she had
purchased?
A: Imogen purchased
so many books, the
UPS made said she
was keeping the
delivery business up
herself!
Which author do you
think has had the
experience of using
sticks to ward off
angry badgers?
A: Simone has a tip
for travellers who
may encounter
badgers – do not
engage them! They
are cuter in cartoons
than in real life!
MALICE QUIZ!
WHO’S WHO!
MIRA TORIA
Editor in Chief and
Production Director
LANA SKY
Managing Editor
and Public
Relations Director
IMOGEN ISLES
Graphic Director
SIMONE COLEMAN
Music Director and
Graphic Assistant
L.F GOODFELLOW
Photography
Director
MARIELLE PERIKLY
KOKOSIDOU
Ornamental
Designer
1. You’re trapped in the basement with a psychotic priest! What do you do? a. Scream for help! b. Check out the hottie in the room with you – locked in a
basement with him isn’t bad at all. c. Find a sharp object to kill yourself with. d. Punch the priest and then confess your sins.
2. You find out that there is a cure for your disease but you have to do one of the following – a. Sell your soul. b. Travel back and forth between the world of life and death –
because damn is that collector fine. c. Forget it – you’ll just chance it and hopefully die a peaceful
death! d. Bite a werewolf and then run for your life!
3. You have to pick your poison – which one do you choose? a. Beg for another option besides death! b. If the hot guy dies – you’ll die willingly with him! c. The bullet in the brain – it’s the quickest! d. Psyche out the person and then run for the door!
4. The boy you have a crush on is coming up to you! What do you do? a. Check his pulse – because you can never be too sure. b. Ask him if he’s a soul collector because your soul is up for the
taking. c. Bumble around because you’re getting tongue tied! d. Run away screaming because you want to make an
impression.
Mostly A’s – A die hard survivor! You’re ready for almost everything except death and will do anything to get out of it. Mostly B’s – A survivor of love! As long as there’s a cutie next to you, you’ll do what it takes to survive! Mostly C’s – An unwilling survivor! If there’s pain and prolonged torture, you’d prefer to put yourself out of your misery ASAP! Mostly D’s – A survivor of opportunity! Your motto? If there’s a will there will always be a way!
What Kind of Survivor Are You?
She was chaos and beauty intertwined.
A tornado of roses from divine.
-shakieb orgunwall