Incorporating Quotations Into your own writing --Part 1
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Incorporating Quotations Into your own writing --Part 1. CCU Writing Center. What is incorporation?. Inserting a quotation into your own writing. Making the quotation a part of your own writing, not just something added to it. Example: - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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Integrating Quotations
Incorporating Quotations Into your own writing--Part 1CCU Writing Center
1What is incorporation?Inserting a quotation into your own writing.Making the quotation a part of your own writing, not just something added to it.
Example:
In a recent study on the effects of coffee drinking, researchers at the National Institutes of Health found that one cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).
2The Article
3The Whole PassageEven moderate coffee consumption was linked to better survival odds. Drinking a single cup per day -- which was much more common than a six-cup-a-day habit -- was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women.
Source: CNN.comhttp://www.cnn.com/2012/05/16/health/coffee-drinking-longer-life/index.html?npt=NP1
4Avoid these strategiesNot Incorporated:Moderate coffee drinking might actually be healthy. Drinking a single cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).Poorly Incorporated:Scientists recently discovered something surprising about coffee, Drinking a single cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).
5ComparePoorly Incorporated:Scientists recently discovered something surprising about coffee, Drinking a single cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).Fully Integrated:In a recent study on the effects of coffee drinking, researchers at the National Institutes of Health found that one cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).
64 Principles AttributionIdentify who said or wrote it.LimitationFind the unique words and phrases that you could not adequately paraphrase.IntegrationInsert the quotation into one of your own sentences. Dont just add it on at the end of a sentence. Never insert a quote by itself as its own sentence.DocumentationIdentify where you found the quotation. (Formats vary.)
7AttributionPresident Obama said, _____.Conways Chief of Police commented, _____.The judge referred to the law as _____.A student at the game felt that _____.The Chair of the department called the decision, _____.
8Synonyms for saidaskedaddedannouncedassertedadvisedaffirmedansweredacknowledged
Can you think of five more? Ten more?
9The basic form_________ said/wrote/texted, __________.
The lawyer claimed, ________.My teacher asked, ________.One student wondered, ________.
10LimitationOriginal Text:Even moderate coffee consumption was linked to better survival odds. Drinking a single cup per day -- which was much more common than a six-cup-a-day habit -- was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women.
Quotable Part:associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women
11IntegrationThe sentence should sound correct if you took the quotation marks away. Do not just add quotations at the end.
Well Integrated: The mayor called the situation hopeless and beyond repair.
Poorly Integrated: The mayor described the situation, It is hopeless and beyond repair.
12DocumentationWhere did the quotation appear?When was the quotation published?What page did it appear on?What web site did you use to find it?Who wrote or said it?
PLEASE NOTE: Formats vary. Consult your assignment sheet, syllabus, or instructor.
13Internal CitationIn a recent study on the effects of coffee drinking, researchers at the National Institutes of Health found drinking one cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).
14Works Cited Page EntryGardner, Amanda. Drinking Coffee Linked to Longer Life. CNN.com. Turner Broadcasting System.17 May 2012. Web. 18 May 2012.
15All four partsAttributionLimitationIntegrationDocumentation
In a recent study on the effects of coffee drinking, researchers at the National Institutes of Health found that one cup per day was associated with a 6% lower risk of dying among men and a 5% lower risk among women (Gardner).
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