My results for my front page have now improved:

• More space is now filled with more cover lines and text.

• The overused text in black boxes and the mast head on the scroll has been removed for a more professional look.

• The image is now in the foreground, showing that the house style is always the same but the singers image is what instead changes.

• The barcode has been placed in a more acceptable position, with a more acceptable size.

• There is now a banner at the very bottom of the page to include more conventional artists in my magazine.

• The positioning of the cover lines have now been improved so now they do not overlap the males face.

My results for my contents page have also been improved to achieve a more professional looking magazine:• I have removed the image of my front page at the top of

the contents to have more room for names of articles and other pages of content.

• The typography has been changed; The sizing of the word Issue 1 has been changed to a smaller font in the middle of the box.

• The ‘Rewind Review’ has also been changed so it is now a list with the page numbers next to them.

• The pages numbers have now been changed for a more conventional magazine layout with more appropriate page spreads.

• The sizing of photos have been changed and have now also been included with captions upon them.

My double page spread has also gone through some self and peer improvements to see how I could possibly make it better:• A black box has now been included to include a

passage about the interview• A feature box has also been included in the top

left corner of the spread.• Other smaller items like the line spacing, and

‘Rewind interview’ box have also been changed.• Originally the pull quote was on the image across

the centre, but has now been changed to appear through the centre of the text.

Over all my double page spread is my most favourite page and also my audiences.

This is due to the use of character development I have used. This means that I could adapt my own rock star in my own way and create his own image and story to fit the magazine. e.g. the use of the black and white imagery.