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Welcometomyonlinecourse!
Yourpurchaseentitlesyouto1correctionwithme.
ItismypleasuretoofferyoumyIELTSexpertisetobesthelpyouimproveyour
writing.Ihavepersonallyhelpedover1,000,000studentsachievetheirIELTSgoals
bothinmyclassroomandthroughmyonlinevideosandIamconfidentafter
workingtogetheryouandIwillgetyourIELTSscorewhereitneedstobeforyouto
besuccessful.
Howdoestheprogramwork?
Inthisonlineclass,youandIwillwork1-on-1toperfectyourwritingabilitiesfor
theTask1andTask2portionsoftheIELTSexam(eitherAcademicorGeneral).On
thefollowingpagesofthisdocument,youwillfind10sampleAcademicTask1
questions,10sampleGeneralTask1questionsand20sampleAcademicorGeneral
Task2questions.Youwillchooseanyofthesequestionstorespondto,writeyour
response(pleasesaveasaWord.docor.docxfile)andsubmitittomeviaemail.I
willpersonallyreadyourwritingandsharewithyoumythoughtsonhowyoucan
improve.Youhaveasmuchtimeasyouneedtosubmityourworktome.All
responsesaresenttoyouviaemailwithin24hoursofyourinitialsubmission.
Beforewebegin
Hereareafewtipstohelpyougetthemaximumbenefitfromourtimetogether:
1.PleasereviewmyfreevideosonmyYouTubeaccountregardinghowtoproperly
composeyourresponse(dontwasteyourtimeandmoneyhavingmeteachyouwhatyoucanlearnbyyourselfviatheseonlinetutorials!)
2.Besurethatanyworkyousubmittomehasbeencreatedunderexam-like
conditions.Thismeansallottingyourself20minutestorespondtoanyTask1
questionand40minutestoanyTask2question.3.AlthoughIacceptscannedcopiesofwrittenwork,youllfindmycommentsmucheasiertounderstandifyoutypeyourresponse.
Now,withoutfurtherado,
letsgetstarted!
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Task1Questions(Academic)Question1ThefollowingtablefromStatisticsUKmakesclearinternetusagedemographicsintheUnitedKingdom.Writeabriefreportdescribingthetrends.
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Question2ThefollowingchartsoutlineconsumptiondifferencesbetweenmenandwomensurroundingValentinesDay-relatedpurchases.Writeabriefreportofatleast150wordsdescribingtheinformationdepictedhere.
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Question3ThefollowingchartsdepictthetypicalAmericandietin1990and2005.Writeareportforauniversitylecturersummarizingtheinformationpresented.
1990
2005
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Question4ThispiechartoutlinesconsumptionintheUSAfortheyear1999.Writeabriefingtooutlinetheinformationpresentedhere.
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Question5Thetwochartsshowchangesinthenumberofmotorvehicleaccidentsinselectedcountriesbetween1997and2000,andtherateofdeathsinmotorvehicleaccidentsforthosecountries.
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Question6ThebelowchartillustratesmarriageanddivorceratesintheUKduringthelatterpartofthetwentiethcentury.Composeanarticleinatleast150wordsoutliningthetrendsdepictedhere.
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Question7BelowisasummaryoftrainusageintheLondonUnderground.Summarizetheinformationpresentedforauniversitylecturer.
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Question8Write150wordsillustratingtheinformationpresentedinthetablebelow.
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Question9ThischartillustratesNorthAmericanfishingstatisticsforthefourthquarterofthetwentiethcentury.Summarizetheinformationpresented.
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Question10Summarizetheinformationpresentedbelow.
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Task1Questions(General)Question1Youhavehadabankaccountforafewyears.Recentlyyoureceivedaletterfromthebankstatingthatyouraccountis$240overdrawnandthatyouwillbecharged$70
whichwillbetakendirectlyfromyouraccount.Youknowthisinformationisincorrect.Writealettertothebank.Explainwhathashappenedandsaywhatyouwouldlikethemtodoaboutit.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteyourownaddress.Beginyourletterasfollows:
DearSir,
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Question2Youhavewonagrantfromthegovernmententitlingyoutoreceive$40,000tohelpfundascienceprojectyouhavebeenworkingonwithasmallteam.Thismoneyiskeytothesuccessoftheproject.Mrs.TraceyPolin,agovernmentexecutiveworkingintheScienceandResearchdepartmentofyourcountrysgovernment,wasinstrumentalin
helpingyourteamreceivethismoney.Writealetterthankingherforhereffortsonyourbehalf.Writeatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Beginyourletterasfollows:
Dear.......................,
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Question3Youhavereceivednoticethatyourapplicationforapositionwithacompanyinyourcityhasbeenrejected.Thereasonforthisrejectionisnotentirelyclear.Themajorrequirementslistedforthepositioninclude:
havingadegreeinComputerScience havinghadatleast2yearsofexperienceworkingatahigh-techfirm beingmobileandabletotravelaspartoftheposition
Youfulfillallthreerequirementsandfeelyouwerebyfarthebestcandidatefortheposition.Writealetteraskingforclarificationonthecompanysdecision.Writeatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Beginyourletterasfollows:
Dear.......................,
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Question4Your-haveafull-timejobandarealsodoingapart-timeeveningcourse.Youarefindingitincreasinglydifficulttocontinuebothcommitmentsandhavethusdecidedtodroptheeveningcourse.Youhaveonlycompleted4weeksofthe18weeksrequiredforthecourse.
Writealettertothedirectorofthecourseexplainingyourdecisiontostop.Inyourletterinclude:
adescriptionofthesituation anapologyforaskingforearlyexitofthecourse apoliteinquiryintowhetherpartialrefundofthecoursefeeis
possibleWriteatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteyouraddress.
Beginyourletterasfollows:
Dear.................,
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Question5Yourcityhasstartedanewprogramtohelpmodernizethecity.Aspartofthisprogram,officialsareaskingthegeneralpublictosubmitsuggestionsoutliningareasthecitycanimprove.Writeapolitelettersuggestingthecityenforceanewlawrestrictingdriversfromhonkingtheirhornsafter8pm.Youshouldalsothankthe
officialsfortheirproactiveeffortinreceivingfeedbackfromcitizensofthecityregardingwhatneedstobeimproved.Writeatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Beginyourletterasfollows:
Dear.......................,
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Question6Youhavepaidforanitemtobeshippedfromaforeign,English-speakingcountry.Thedeliveryarrived4weekslateandwassupposedtoincludeahandbookdescribinghowtoassembletheproductbutthisismissing.Tomakemattersworse,onekeycomponentoftheitemisdamaged(partno.A305).Writealetterofcomplaint
outliningtheeissuesandsuggestinghowthissituationcanberectified.Writeatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteyouraddress.
Beginyourletterasfollows:
Dear.................,
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Question7Yourentahousethroughanagency.Theheatingsystemhasstoppedworking.Youphonedtheagencyaweekagobutithasstillnotbeenrepaired.Writealettertotheagency.Inyourletter
1.introduceyourself2.explainthesituation3.saywhatactionyouwouldliketheagencytotakeWriteatleast150words.
YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Beginyourletterasfollows:
Dear.......................,
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Question8YouhaverecentlywatchedanewprogrammeonTV.YouliketheprogrammebuthavejustdiscoveredthattheTVstationhasmovedittoalatertime,whenyoureunabletowatchit.WritealettertotheTVstation.Inyourletter:
Describewhyyouliketheprogramme Explainwhyyoubelieveitshouldnotbeonatalatertime SaywhatactionyouwouldliketheTVstationtotake
Youshouldwriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Startyourletterasfollows:
DearSir,
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Question9Yournewroommateisnotdoinghischores.Writealettertohimcomplainingaboutthissituation.Inyourletter:
Describehismessinessandpoorhygiene Complainabouthislackofconsideration Saywhatactionyouwouldlikehimtotake
Youshouldwriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Startyourletterasfollows:
DearSir,
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Question10Youlostyourwalletonthetrain.Noonehasfoundityet.Writealettertothestationmasterofthelocaltrainstation.Inyourletter:
Describeyourwalletandwhatwasinit Requestinformationabouttheirlostandfoundservice Saywhatotheractionyouwouldlikethestationmastertotake
Youshouldwriteatleast150words.YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses.
Startyourletterasfollows:
DearSir,
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Task2Questions(AcademicandGeneral)Question1-Theageofinformationtechnologyhastakenalotofpeoplebysurprise.Whileithasbecomeawayoflifeforsome,othersknowverylittleaboutit.Eventuallywewillhaveapolarisedsocietyandthiswillleadtoserioussocialproblems.Forman
opinionbasedontheinfoaboveandwriteawell-reasonedessay.Question2-TheexpressionNever,nevergiveupmeanstokeeptryingandneverstopworkingforyourgoals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Question3-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Withthehelpoftechnology,studentnowadayscanlearnmoreinformationandlearnitmorequickly.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
Question4-Awardsandprizesaregivenforexcellenceinvariousfields.Dothese
awardsandprizesserveausefulpurpose?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
Question5-Somepeoplethinkthathumanneedsforfarmland,housing,andindustryaremoreimportantthatsavinglandforendangeredanimals.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththispointofview?Whyorwhynot?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
Question6-Whatisaveryimportantskillapersonshouldlearninordertobesuccessfulintheworldtoday?Chooseoneskillandusespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.
Question7-Resolvingproblemsbetweenindividualsorgroupsisimportant.Whatshouldbeconsideredorkeptinmindinresolvingproblemsbetweenindividualsorgroups?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
Question8-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Self-confidenceisthemostimportantfactorforsuccessinschooloratwork.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.
Question9-Whydoyouthinksomepeopleareattractedtodangeroussportsorotherdangerousactivities?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportouranswer.Question10-Whichismoreimportantforsuccess:thenaturalabilityyouarebornwithorhardwork?Explainyouropinion,usingspecificreasonsandexamples.
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11-Somepeopleprefertogetupearlyinthemorningandstartthedayswork.Othersprefertogetuplaterinthedayandworkuntillateatnight.Whichdoyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.
12-Whataretheimportantqualitiesofagoodsonordaughter?Havethesequalities
changedorremainedthesameovertimeinyourculture?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.13-Somepeopleprefertoworkforalargecompany.Othersprefertoworkforasmallcompany.Whichwouldyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.
14-Peopleworkbecausetheyneedmoneytolive.Whataresomeotherreasonsthatpeoplework?Discussoneormoreofthesereasons.Usespecificexamplesanddetailstosupportyouranswer.
15-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Face-to-facecommunicationisbetterthanothertypesofcommunication,suchasletters,email,ortelephonecalls.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.16-Somepeopleliketodoonlywhattheyalreadydowell.Otherpeopleprefertotrynewthingsandtakerisks.Whichdoyouprefer?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyourchoice.17-Somepeoplebelievethatsuccessinlifecomesfromtakingriskorchance.Othersbelievethatsuccessresultsfromcarefulplanning.Inyouropinion,whatdoessuccesscomefrom?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
18-Whatchangewouldmakeyourhometownmoreappealingtopeopleyourage?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.19-Peopleattendcollegeoruniversityformanydifferentreasons(forexample,newexperiences,careerpreparation,increasedknowledge).Whydoyouthinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.20-Nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.Hasthischangeimprovedthewaypeoplelive?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.