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P O L I T I C A L E N G A G E M E N T A C T I V I T Y : W R I T I N G T H E R E P O R T
I B G L O B A L P O L I T I C S
W W W . G L O P O I B . W O R D P R E S S . C O M
ContentsIntroducing the report and assessment criteria
Structuring the report
Criterion A: Identification and justification
Criterian B: Explanation of the engagement
Criterion C: Analysis of issue
Criterion D: Synthesis and Evaluation
Command terms
Final thoughts
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At the heart of experiential education are three key
elements: Content, experience and reflection
Morten Asfeldt
Using this guide
This booklet provides guidance on writing the report component of your Political Engagement IA
for Global Politics.
There is no prescribed structure for the report so you are free to
structure your report in a way that you feel best helps meet all
of the assessmemt criteria.
However, you are reminded that the PEA Internal Assessment is
worth 20% of your final grade for Global Politics(25% at SL) so it is
something you should take seriously and try to produce the
best report possible.
Equally, it is worth remembering that, while the engagement and
complementary research are also compulsor components of
this IA - and it will be impossible to produce a successful report
without having completed these two components - the report is
the only component that is formally assessed
CREDIT: Guiding Questions for each criteria provided by Chiel
Mooij, UWC Maastricht.
T H E R E P O R TP O L I T I C A L E N G A G E M E N T A C T I V I T Y I A
As you know, there are three
components to this internal
assessment: Complementary research;
the engagement and the written report
of 2,000 words
The written report is the only part which
is formally assessed so it is important to
to get it right and make sure you you
are hitting all of the criteria as set out in
the subject guide
F O U R A S S E S S M E N T C R I T E R I A
Your report will be assessed against
four different criteria:
1. Identification of issue and justification
(4 marks)
2. Explanation of engagement (4 marks)
3. Analysis of issue (6 marks)
4. Synthesis and evaluation (6 marks)
Writing a successful report means that
you must consider how you structure
your work to ensure you consider all
four criteria.
Whilst there will be a certain amount of
description required in order to explain
what you did on your engagement you
must be careful to ensure that your
report is primarily analytical and
evaluative rather than descriptive if it is
to successfully meet the IB criteria
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There is a word limit of 2,000 words for
the report. This is not as much as it may
seem so it is important that you avoid
waffle or saying something that is not
directly related to the assessment
criteria.
N O P R E S C R I B E D S T R U C T U R E
The IB do not prescribe a particular
structure for your PEA report. However,
feedback from IB moderators for this
component indicate that the report
must be seen as holistic.
This means you should not simply
divide your report up in to four different
sections based on the four different
criteria.
A good guiding principle is ensure your
report is divided into paragraphs rather
than sections.
Remember that your report must be
largely analytical and evaluative in
nature and must synthesise what you
learnt through your engagement with
what you found out through your
complementary research
Remember, the overall word limit for
your repor is 2,00 words so keep it
concise and to the point
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Was the organisation effective? Had the
holistic criteria been turned into
separate sections (which goes against
the nature of the criteria)?
- Was the word count stated on the
report?
- Was referencing done correctly and
did the report include a bibliography?
GUIDING QUESTIONS
C R I T E R I O N A : I D E N T I F I C A T I O N A N D J U S T I F I C A T I O NP O L I T I C A L E N G A G E M E N T A C T I V I T Y I A
Key questions to consider:
Is there a clear explanation of why this
particular political issue and
engagement are of interest to the
student?
Is there a clear link between the
engagement and political issue on one
hand and the course content on the
other hand?
W I L L T H E E X A M I N E R B E A B L E T O A N S W E R Y E S T O T H E S E Q U E S T I O N S ?
TOP LEVEL DESCRIPTOR FOR
CRITERION A
The political issue explored through
the engagement is clearly and
explicitly identified. There is a clear
explanation of why this engagement
and political issue are of interest to the
student. There is a clear link between
the engagement and political issue on
one hand and the course content on
the other
If you cannot answer 'yes' to these
questions then how will the examiner
be able to?
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GUIDING QUESTIONS:
CRITERION A
- Was the political issue clearly identified and specific enough for a 2000 word report? - Was the engagement connected to the political issue and both of them to course content? - Was the personal interest explained (beyond ‘I have always been interested’ or ‘this sparked my interest’)?
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'Was the engagement connected to the political issue and both of
them to course content?'
C R I T E R I O N B : E X P L A N A T I O N O F E N G A G E M E N TP O L I T I C A L E N G A G E M E N T A C T I V I T Y I A
Key questions to consider:
Is the description of the engagement
and what the student actually did clear
and relevant for their chosen political
issue?
Is there a clear explanation of the ways
in which the student's experiences
informed his or her understanding of
the political issue?
I F T H E A N S W E R T O T H E S E Q U E S T I O N S I S N O T H E N Y O U R R E P O R T I S N O T R E A D Y
TOP LEVEL DESCRIPTOR FOR
CRITERION B
The description of the engagement
and of what the student actually did is
c;lear and relevant for their chosen
political issue. There is a clear
explanation of the ways in which the
student's experiences informed his or
her understanding of the political issue
If you cannot answer 'yes' to these
questions then how will the examiner
be able to?
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GUIDING QUESTIONS: CRITERION B
- Did you provide insight into your actual experiences (beyond ‘I interviewed…’), reflecting on how you approached the engagement (preparing for the interview, reflecting on answers or non-verbal communication)? - Were lessons learnt shared and were these relevant for the political issue? - Did you show insight into your engagement throughout the report?
WHAT DID YOU DO? WHY IS IT RELEVANT? WHAT DID YOU LEARN?
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C R I T E R I O N C .A N A L Y S I S O FI S S U E P O L I T I C A L E N G A G E M E N T A C T I V I T Y I A
Key questions to consider:
To what extent does the student
analyse the political issue?
To what extent does the student justify
his or her main points?
T H E S E A R E T H E Q U E S T I O N S T H E P E R S O N R E A D I N G Y O U R R E P O R T W I L L B E A S K I N G T H E M S E L V E S
TOP LEVEL DESCRIPTOR FOR
CRITERION C
The political issue is explored in depth,
using the key concepts of the course
where relevant, and the response
contains clear critical analysis. All, or
nearly all, of the main points are
justified.
This means you must also consider
these question carefully when writing
your report
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GUIDING QUESTIONS:
CRITERION C
- Was the analysis of the political issue descriptive or analytical? Did you accept the information provided through the engagement (or additional sources) at face-value or did you approach it more critically? - Did you make explicit course connections, through the use of concepts, theories or other prescribed content? - Did you provide justification for the use of data, course concepts and theories? If you stated, ‘from a realist perspective..’ or ‘this is an example of soft power’, did you show insight into where your understanding of these course connections came from? - Did you use additional sources throughout the report?
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GUIDING QUESTIONS:
CRITERION D
- Did you show synthesis between engagement and additional academic sources throughout the report (which is expected) or only in the final section or not at all? - Were findings from engagement cross-referenced with additional sources and vice versa? - Did you explore the political issue from different perspectives, either through the engagement or through additional academic sources (e.g. theoretical perspectives)? - Was the conclusion consistent with the findings in the report and was it focused on the original political issue?
WERE FINDINGS FROM ENGAGEMENT CROSS-REFERENCED WITH ADDITIONAL SOURCES AND VICE VERSA?
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C R I T E R I O N D . A N A L Y S I S A N D E V A L U A T I O NP O L I T I C A L E N G A G E M E N T A C T I V I T Y I A
Key questions to consider:
To what extent does the student
synthesise his or her experience and
research in the discussion of the
political issue?
To what extent does the student show
evidence of evaluation, underpinned by
his or her experiences and adequate
research, to allow multiple perspectives
on the political issue?
T H E S EQ U E S T I O N SM U S T G U I D EW H A T Y O UI N C L U D E I NY O U RR E P O R T
TOP BAND DESCRIPTOR
The student's experiences and more
theoretical perspectives are
synthesised so that an integrated and
rich treatment of the political issue
ensues. Conclusions are clearly stated,
balanced and consistent with the
evidence presented. There is evidence
of evaluation of the political issue from
multiple perspectives
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What do we mean by...Analysis and Justification? In this case, analysis means you have broken down the political issue in order to bring out the essential elements; identified parts and relationships between different parts and and interpreted information to help reach a conclusion. Justifying your main points means saying why you think these points are worth making and using supporting evidence to back up what you are saying
Synthesis and Evaluation Synthesis, in the context of your Political Engaement Activity, means that you have considered
what you have learnt through carrying out your engagement and compared it to what others have said about the same political issue. To put it in simple terms, you are comparing the
results of your enagement with the results of your engagement. Do they both tell you the same thing? If not, why not? Do different people have different views? If so, why do they have
different views? Evaluation refers to you making judgements about the views of others - assessing the
strengths and weaknesses of their arguements and ideas
Conclusion Come to a decision. You set out to explore a political issue when you began this project. Say - but keep it brief - exactly what it is you have achieved and found out
REMEMBER TO CHECK THE GLOBAL POLITICS SUBJECT GUIDE
COMMAND TERMS
Sentence Starters: My findings as a result of my engagement contrast with the theory developed by...
Support for this view can be found in the work of...
An alternative perspective can seen in...
The work of X supports / contradicts this view...
The weaknesses / strengths of this arguments can be summarised as....
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Some final thoughts...
You must connect your analysis to the key concepts of the Global Politics course. Not only must you connect your analysis to the course concepts, but you must do so
in a way that shows you understand those concepts
You must use complementary sources (properly cited in a consistent and recognised format) throughout your report. This is an academic report and you are therefore expected to use academic sources as evidence to support the points you make in your report
You must make it clear where the points you are making come from. Are they a result of your engagement? Are they are a result of your complementary
research? Are they your own thoughts and conclusions? If it is not obvious where your points come from it is unlikely you will be given
credit for them,
It may seem like an awful lot but 2,000 words is actually very few in which to hit all of the criteria expected by the IB. Draft and redraft your report as many times as necessary. Be brutal. If you can't say exactly how something is helping you to meet the criteria then get rid of it. Cut the waffle and the padding.
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