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Webinar - Blue - May 2010

How to Write
Compelling
Subject Lines

Amanda

Subject Lines:

The Key to Getting Subscribers to Open

Step 1.

Getting Your Mentality Right

Step 1.

Getting Your Mentality Right

Step 2.

Sitting Down to Write

Subject Lines:
Gateway to Your Messages

Step 1: Getting Your Mentality Right

Step 1: Getting Your Mentality Right

The Job of Your Subject Line

Step 1: Getting Your Mentality Right

How Much Difference
Does It Make?

It's what's inside that counts, but for those sitting on the fence...

Step 1: Getting Your Mentality Right

How Much Difference
Does It Make?

Get them over the fence and into your field

Strategies

Step 2: Sitting Down to Write

6

Write Your Headline First

Step 2: Sitting Down to Write

Strategy #1

You have the benefit of expressly fulfilling the compelling promise you made with the headline, which ultimately helps to keep your content crisp and well-structured.

- Copybloggers Brian Clark

Choose Evocative Words

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Strategy #2

Certain words can turn dry topics like writing, personal finance, small business and marketing into something that makes you feel a frisson of excitement.

- Ali Luke, Aliventures

Romantic & Heroic Words

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Strategy #2

secret

king, queen, princess, prince

temptation, forbidden

cloud, moon, stars

heaven, paradise

magical, enchanted, bewitched

battle, fight

dragon

enemy, nemesis

quest

treasure

war

copyblogger.com

Power Words

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Strategy #2

For Energy

http://www.tripwiremagazine.com/2011/02/power-words-and-templates-for-writing-killer-headlines.html

For Lists

For Mystery

top 10

ultimate

reasons

only

underground

top secret

classified

confidential

stunning

boost

hilarious

savvy

Your Site Keywords

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Strategy #2

Focus on What
You're REALLY Delivering

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Strategy #3

What do you get when you get a pizza?

The TRUE Ingredients of Pizza

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Strategy #3

Does your email deliver any of these?

Email Mad-Libs

Using a Subject Line Template

Step 2: Sitting Down to Write

Strategy #4

Jon Morrow's Headline Hacks

Copyblogger's Magnetic
Headlines Series

Chad White's
Subjectivity Scanner

Ex: Can't Keep Up? 11 Ways to Simplify Your {BLANK}

Online Testing

Yahoo's Email Visualization Tool

Step 2: Sitting Down to Write

Strategy #5

visualize.yahoo.com

Online Testing

Perry Marshall's Readability Tool

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Strategy #5

Write for a middle
school audience

http://www.perrymarshall.com/grade/

Split Testing

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Strategy #6

vs

To Set One Up...

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Strategy #6

1. Minimum # of subscribers: 100

2. Use AWeber's Broadcast Editor

3. Visual Website Optimizer's
Significance Calculator



What to Test

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Strategy #6

Length

Personalization

Appearance

Placement of Company Name

Is It Time for New Contacts?

Brown Eyed Girl Could Be About YOU Get the Contacts!

Jared, Is It Time for New Contacts?

READY FOR NEW CONTACTS????

Brown Contacts Now Available

Ready for New Contacts?

Foureyes, Inc: New Contacts Just Arrived!

New Contacts Just Arrived!

In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality









In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens






In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters





In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters

2. The Writing Process

- write headline first

In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters

2. The Writing Process

- write headline first
- choose your words strategically

In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters

2. The Writing Process

- write headline first
- choose your words strategically
- focus on what you're really delivering

In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters

2. The Writing Process

- write headline first
- choose your words strategically
- focus on what you're really delivering
- use a subject line template

In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters

2. The Writing Process

- write headline first
- choose your words strategically
- focus on what you're really delivering
- use a subject line template
- test with online tools

In Summary

1. Adjusting Your Mentality

- gateway to your emails
- focus on getting opens
- your goal is to sway the fence-sitters

2. The Writing Process

- write headline first
- choose your words strategically
- focus on what you're really delivering
- use a subject line template
- test with online tools
- run a split test for best results

A Little Guessing Game

Don't Kill the Romance: 7 Email Marketing Buzzkills to Avoid

Crystal, Don't Kill the Romance: 7 Email Marketing Buzzkills to Avoid

vs

Which one won?

AWeber Blog

Don't Kill the Romance: 7 Email Marketing Buzzkills to Avoid

Crystal, Don't Kill the Romance: 7 Email Marketing Buzzkills to Avoid

vs

+26%

X

Let's Play Again

Its FREE. All the tiny houses on our site and more

It features all the houses on our website plus more

vs

Which one won?

Tumbleweed Tiny Houses

Its FREE. All the tiny houses on our site and more

It features all the houses on our website plus more

vs

+26%

X

And One More Time

Is There a Flaw in 99% of Blogs?

Is This the Future of Pro Blogging?

vs

Which one won?

Viperchill

Is There a Flaw in 99% of Blogs?

Is This the Future of Pro Blogging?

vs

+7.7%

X

Resources

Copyblogger's Headline Series
http://www.copyblogger.com/magnetic-headlines/

Jon Morrow's Headline Hacks
http://headlinehacks.com/ and http://headlinehacks.com/watch-aweber-replay/

Triple Wire Magazine's Power Words
http://www.tripwiremagazine.com/2011/02/power-words-and-templates-for-writing-killer-headlines.html

The AWeber Blog
http://www.aweber.com/blog/email-marketing/twitterize-your-email-subject-lines.htmhttp://www.aweber.com/faq/questions/122/ (how to set up a split test)

Visual Website Optimizer's Significance Calculator
http://visualwebsiteoptimizer.com/split-testing-blog/ab-testing-significance-calculator-spreadsheet-in-excel/

Which Test Won
http://whichtestwon.com/