How do you write effective body paragraphs for an argumentative essay?
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How do you write effective body paragraphs for an argumentative essay?
In this lesson you will learn how to draft body paragraphs by introducing and explaining
your evidence while using transitions between sentences
and paragraphs.
Let’s Review
Planning To Write
Drafting the Essay
Finding Supporting Evidence
Choosing a topic
A Common Mistake
Body paragraphs do not build on each other in supporting the claim.
Claim
Reason
Reason
ReasonReason
ClaimReason
Reason
Core Lesson
Convert boxes and bullets to full sentences while explaining how the evidence supports the topic sentence.
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2
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Use transition words to improve flow.
Write concluding sentence for the body paragraph.
Core LessonHow do I structure a
body paragraph?
Major Reason # ____ = Topic Sentence
Evidence
Evidence
Evidence
Conclusion
Core Lesson
For many people in Africa, there is an urgent need for clean drinking water, one of the essentials for life. • Less than 1% of the world’s fresh water is available for
human consumption (waterinfo.org)• 80% of disease in developing countries is caused by poor
drinking water (WHO)• 884 million people lack access to clean drinking water, 3x the
population of the US (water.org)• Over 40% of those without water live in sub-Saharan Africa
(UNICEF)• 10 African countries only have enough clean drinking water
to support half their population (Water Facts)
Core Lesson
Only 2% of the water on Earth is fresh water and out of that only 1% of it is able to be drank (waterinfo.org).
The World Health Organization estimates that about 80% of all disease in developing countries is caused by this lack of access to clean drinking water.
Less than 1% of the world’s fresh water is available for human consumption (waterinfo.org)
80% of disease in developing countries is caused by poor drinking water (WHO)
How do I convert my evidence into
meaningful sentences?
Core Lesson
For many people in Africa, there is an urgent need for clean drinking water, one of the essentials for life. Only 2% of the water on Earth is fresh water and out of that only 1% of it is drinkable (waterinfo.org). The World Health Organization estimates that about 80% of all disease in developing countries is caused by this lack of access to clean drinking water. There are 884 million people around the world that do not have access to clean drinking water, which is a number three times the population of the United States (water.org). According to UNICEF, over 40% of those without water live in sub-Saharan Africa. There are actually ten African countries that only have enough drinking water to support half of their population (Water Facts).
Do all parts of my paragraph support the topic sentence?
Core Lesson
For many people in Africa, there is an urgent need for clean drinking water, one of the essentials for life. Only 2% of the water on Earth is fresh water and out of that only 1% of it is able to be drank (waterinfo.org). The World Health Organization estimates that about 80% of all disease in developing countries is caused by this lack of access to clean drinking water. This seems especially dangerous when considering that there are 884 million people around the world that do not have access to clean drinking water, which is a number three times the population of the United States (water.org). According to UNICEF, over 40% of those without water live in sub-Saharan Africa. In fact, There are actually ten African countries that only have enough drinking water to support half of their population (Water Facts). In order to prevent disease in Africa, access to clean water must increase through improved sanitation.
For many people in Africa, there is an urgent need for clean drinking water, one of the essentials for life. Only 2% of the water on Earth is fresh water and out of that only 1% of it is able to be drank (waterinfo.org). The World Health Organization estimates that about 80% of all disease in developing countries is caused by this lack of access to clean drinking water. This seems especially dangerous when considering that there are 884 million people around the world that do not have access to clean drinking water, which is a number three times the population of the United States (water.org). According to UNICEF, over 40% of those without water live in sub-Saharan Africa. In fact, There are actually ten African countries that only have enough drinking water to support half of their population (Water Facts).
For many people in Africa, there is an urgent need for clean drinking water, one of the essentials for life. Only 2% of the water on Earth is fresh water and out of that only 1% of it is able to be drank (waterinfo.org). The World Health Organization estimates that about 80% of all disease in developing countries is caused by this lack of access to clean drinking water. There are 884 million people around the world that do not have access to clean drinking water, which is a number three times the population of the United States (water.org). According to UNICEF, over 40% of those without water live in sub-Saharan Africa. There are actually ten African countries that only have enough drinking water to support half of their population (Water Facts).
How do I write a conclusion that will help to lead into the next
paragraph?
How do I use transitions to improve flow between
sentences?
Core Lesson
Convert boxes and bullets to full sentences while explaining how the evidence supports the topic sentence.
1
2
3
Use transition words to improve flow.
Write concluding sentence for the body paragraph.
In this lesson you learned how to draft body paragraphs by introducing and explaining your evidence while using
effective transitions between sentences and paragraphs.
Guided Practice
Practice by using the information below to create your own body paragraph.
With sanitation being a problem, it causes an unclean environment for people to live in, which then causes health related risks. • Fecal matter is the top contaminate to water sources (water.org)• 50% of the world’s population does not have proper sanitation (Blue Planet)• In the past 10 years, water related diseases have killed more people than
World War Two (waterinfo.org• Each year, 3.575 million people die from water related illnesses (water.org)• Proper sanitation cuts down cases diarrhea by one-third (UNICEF/WHO)
Extension Activities
Extension Activities
With a partner, find an op-ed article in the local paper. Read the first body paragraph and break it down into a box with bullets. Did the author effectively support the reason for his/her argument? Why or why not?
Extension Activities
Extension Activities
On your own, think about a time you really wanted to do something. Come up with one major reason you think you should have been able to do it. Write a body paragraph that presents your reason in a clear and concise way. Then, have a partner check that the evidence supports your reason in a focused manner.
Extension Activities
Extension Activities
With a partner, draft a paragraph for a topic you’d like to argue. Use the steps to develop a topic sentence along with supporting evidence. Together, decide if this paragraph clearly states your argument.
Let’s Review
Quick Quiz
On your own, draft a body paragraph for your argumentative essay by introducing and explaining your evidence while using transitions between sentences and paragraphs.