How can I leave the audience with strong feelings?
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How can I leave the audience with strong feelings?
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In this lesson, you will learn how to to create strong
endings for your narratives by showing the reader how you
feel.
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Let’s Review
Making a Plan
Writing the Sentences
Revising
Brainstorming Ideas
Understanding the Question
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Let’s Review
Writing Prompt
People say, “Practice makes perfect.” Think about a time when you had to practice something a lot before mastering it. Write a story about a time when you had to practice something for a long time before understanding it.
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A Common Mistake
Not writing a special conclusion to your story or essay.
I’m DONE!
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Core Lesson
Reread your draft.1
2 Ask: “How do I feel about the experience I am writing about?”
3Write an ending that shows the reader how you feel.
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Core Lesson
1I’m rereading
my story. What did I write
about?
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Core Lesson
2How do I feel
about my experience
taking swimming lessons?
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Core Lesson
2 I FELT:ScaredExcitedProud
Determined
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Core Lesson
3 I will never forget the summer I took my first swimming lessons. I was such a mix of emotions. I was excited, I was scared. By the end of my last lesson, I was proud. My family supported me with my efforts. My teachers was so kind and made everything fun. I think I’ll never forget how hard it all seemed, but I kept trying and because I tried, I learned. I feel good about learning to swim. Someday maybe I can teach other kids, too.
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Core Lesson
Reread your draft.1
2 Ask: “How do I feel about the experience I am writing about?”
3Write an ending that shows the reader how you feel.
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In this lesson, you have learned how to to create strong endings for your narratives by showing the reader how you
feel.
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Guided Practice
Think about your story. Go through the steps from this lesson and write a conclusion.
1) Reread your draft2) Ask, “How do I feel
about the experience I’m writing about.
3) Write an ending that shows the reader how you feel.
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Extension Activities
Extension Activities
Reread your story. Think about the highlight, the “best part”, of your experience. Tell the audience about the “best part” of your story in the conclusion.
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Extension Activities
Extension Activities
Go back to your introductory paragraph. Reread your introduction. Sometimes our conclusions bring us back to the beginning of the story. Write a conclusion that reminds the reader of how the story began.
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Let’s Review
Quick Quiz
Practice always makes perfect. I practiced riding my bike all summer. By Labor Day, I was ready to take off the training wheels for good.
Below is a student draft without a strong conclusion. Rewrite the conclusion to make it stronger.