Harriet’s Feedback

My initial messageUsing www.facebook.com, I was able to message Harriet in the same way I messaged Narita, for her feedback.

I used the same message, but changed the name of the person, as I wanted to keep the questions the same, for comparison purposes.

This print screen shows the message Harriet would have received and responded to.

Harriet’s feedback

Here is a print screen of Harriet’s response. She only responded to the print work, as she didn’t have any sound on the website www.youtube.com to view my video, and she didn’t see it was fair to give feedback on the video, when parts were missing. This wasn’t a problem for me as I had both two other forms of feedback on my video alone, from Narita.

My responseHarriet’s Feedback on the print work only, was useful to me as she was a different member of my target audience opposed to Narita.This was important as I had both two views of my target audience, and they were most useful when gaining feedback.

Harriet talked about my combinations working well, and that I had complimented the acoustic genre well.She also picked up on parts of my video which I specifically featured for the pleasures of my target audience, which were the emphasis of the lyrics through text, and the redundant message of love.