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Great Barrier Reef - Editing

The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral

reef It is close too the coast of queensland

australia. it is made up of nerly 3,000 coral reefs

and over 600 islands, streching over 2,600 km

long. It is so big, it can be scene from space!

The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure

maid by living things. because of it’s

enviromental signi�cance, its has been listed as a

important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.

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The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral

reef It is close too the coast of queensland

australia. it is made up of nerly 3,000 coral reefs

and over 600 islands, streching over 2,600 km

long. It is so big, it can be scene from space!

The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure

maid by living things. because of it’s

enviromental signi�cance, its has been listed as a

important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.

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Great Barrier Reef - Answers

The Great Barrier Reef is the world’s largest coral reef. It is close to

the coast of Queensland, Australia. It is made up of nearly 3,000

coral reefs and over 600 islands, stretching over 2,600 km long. It is

so big, it can be seen from space!

The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure made by living things.

Because of its environmental signi�cance, it has been listed as an

important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.

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Great Wall Of China - Editing

The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most

signi�cant man-made structures in the world built over 2,000

years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil

standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive 8851.8

km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down

across grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus.

Unfortunately some of the original sections ar now in ruins or

no longr exist.

work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as

the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great

Wall was to protect china’s boders from the nomadic warring

tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and

Mongolia.

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The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most

signi�cant man-made structures in the world built over 2,000

years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil

standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive 8851.8

km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down

across grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus.

Unfortunately some of the original sections ar now in ruins or

no longr exist.

work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as

the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great

Wall was to protect china’s boders from the nomadic warring

tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and

Mongolia.

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Great Wall Of China - Answers

The Great Wall of China is undoubtedly one of the most signi�cant

man-made structures in the world. Built over 2,000 years ago, it is

an architectural feat that this structure is still standing. The Great

Wall of China spans an impressive 8851.8 km (5,500 mi) stretching

east to west, winding up and down across grasslands, mountains,

deserts and plateaus. Unfortunately some of the original sections

are now in ruins or no longer exist.

Work on constructing the Great Wall of China started as early as the

5th century B.C. The main reason behind building the Great Wall

was to protect China’s borders from the nomadic warring tribes,

that came down from present day Manchuria and Mongolia.

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MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Editing

Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music

on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud that you

cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing

more harm than good! MP3 players are a great source of

entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius

Hearing problems for young people today research has

fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music

too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.

The ear piece are designed to �t �rmly in the listeners

ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This

means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear,

potentially causing permanent dammage.

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MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Editing

Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music

on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud that you

cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing

more harm than good! MP3 players are a great source of

entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius

Hearing problems for young people today research has

fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music

too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.

The ear piece are designed to �t �rmly in the listeners

ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This

means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear,

potentially causing permanent dammage.

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MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Answers

Do you know how much time you spend listening to music on your

MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud you that can’t hear any

outside noise? Well, you may be doing more harm than good!

[MP3 players are a great source of entertainment, but they are also

the cause of serious hearing problems for young people today.

Research has found that young people are more likely to play their

music too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.

The ear pieces are designed to �t �rmly in the listener’s ear canal,

allowing outside noise to be eliminated. This means that the music

is pumped directly into the ear, potentially causing permanent

damage.

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The Solar System - Editing

The soler system is made up of eight planet’s which

orbit around the Sun

The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are

mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock

and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The

too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of

hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are

Uranus and “Neptune”. They are composed largely of

ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane

our solar system is located within one of outer arms

of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200

billion stars.

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The soler system is made up of eight planet’s which

orbit around the Sun

The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are

mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock

and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The

too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of

hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are

Uranus and “Neptune”. They are composed largely of

ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane

our solar system is located within one of outer arms

of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200

billion stars.

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The solar system is made up of eight planets which orbit around

the Sun.

The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are Mercury, Venus,

Earth and Mars. They are made up of rock and metal. The four outer

planets are much larger. The two largest are Jupiter and Saturn,

composed mainly of hydrogen and helium. The outermost planets

are Uranus and Neptune. They are composed largely of ices,

including frozen water, ammonia and methane.

Our solar system is located within one of the outer arms of the

Milky Way galaxy, which contains about 200 billion stars.

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Soccer - Editing

Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most

popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven

players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal

each end.

The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into

the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the

ball with there hands (with the exception of the

goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball

One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only

takes a ball and a �at open area to play?

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Soccer - Editing

Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most

popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven

players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal

each end.

The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into

the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the

ball with there hands (with the exception of the

goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball

One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only

takes a ball and a �at open area to play?

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Soccer - Answers

Soccer (or football) is considered the world's most popular sport. In

soccer, there are two teams of eleven players. It is played on a large

grass �eld with a goal at each end.

The object of the game is to get the soccer ball into the opposing

team's goal. Players cannot touch the ball with their hands (with

the exception of the goalie). They can only kick, knee or head the

ball.

One of the reasons soccer is so popular is that it only takes a ball

and a �at open area to play.

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Dreaming - Editing

dreams are storys and pictures our brain’s create when

we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply

asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly

under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement!

Some dreams are just you’re mind playing with thorts

and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity

for you to make sense of your life dream experts also

agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep

having over and over propably have some sort of special

meaning,

Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will

forget 90% them.

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Dreaming - Editing

dreams are storys and pictures our brain’s create when

we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply

asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly

under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement!

Some dreams are just you’re mind playing with thorts

and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity

for you to make sense of your life dream experts also

agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep

having over and over propably have some sort of special

meaning,

Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will

forget 90% them.

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Dreaming - Answers

Dreams are stories and pictures our brains create when we are

asleep. Most dreams happen when we are deeply asleep and our

eyes begin to move around quickly under our eyelids. This is called

Rapid Eye Movement.

Some dreams are just your mind playing with thoughts and images

from life. Other dreams are an opportunity for you to make sense of

your life. Dream experts also agree that recurring dreams (dreams

that you keep having over and over) probably have some sort of

special meaning.

Although everybody dreams (including animals), we will forget

90% of them.

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Why our Bodies Need Water - Editing

H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the

human body too function and vital to hour Survival

Although we can last week’s without food, we can

only survive a matter days without water. it is

important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh

Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our

lungs skin urine and faeces!

All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75

percent water, One of our most important organs, our

Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay

hidrated to make sure our “brain cells” can function at

the optimal level.

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Why our Bodies Need Water - Editing

H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the

human body too function and vital to hour Survival

Although we can last week’s without food, we can

only survive a matter days without water. it is

important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh

Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our

lungs skin urine and faeces!

All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75

percent water, One of our most important organs, our

Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay

hidrated to make sure our “brain cells” can function at

the optimal level.

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Why our Bodies Need Water - Answers

H2O, commonly known as water, is essential for the human body to

function and vital to our survival. Although we can last weeks

without food, we can only survive a matter of days without water. It

is important for us to replenish our supply of fresh water every day,

as we regularly lose liquid from our lungs, skin, urine and faeces.

Although our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 per cent water, one of

our most important organs, our brain, is made up of 73% water. We

need to stay hydrated to make sure our brain cells can function at

the optimal level.

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Bees - Editing

there are about 20,000 species of Bees in the world

Bees live together in groups called colonys. There

three types of bees in each colony! There is The

queen bee the worker bee and the “drone”.

The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is

the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees,

Their only job is to mate with the queen-bee so

that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and

they do all the work. They clean and protect the

hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the

colony and take care of the o�spring.

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there are about 20,000 species of Bees in the world

Bees live together in groups called colonys. There

three types of bees in each colony! There is The

queen bee the worker bee and the “drone”.

The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is

the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees,

Their only job is to mate with the queen-bee so

that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and

they do all the work. They clean and protect the

hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the

colony and take care of the o�spring.

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Bees - Answers

There are about 20,000 species of bees in the world. Bees live

together in groups called colonies. There are three types of bees in

each colony. There is the queen bee, the worker bee and the drone.

The queen is the largest bee in the colony. She is the only one that

lays eggs. Drones are male bees. Their only job is to mate with the

queen bee so that she can lay eggs. Worker bees are female and

they do all the work. They clean and protect the hive, collect the

pollen and nectar to feed the colony and take care of the o�spring.

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Thunderstorms - Editing

A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning

There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm?

Thunderstorm’s happen when warm, moist air quickly

mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and

creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail.

the loud sound that “thunder” makes caused by the

heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear the

thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last for

severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos

around the ground mountains, hills and building’s.

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Thunderstorms - Editing

A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning

There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm?

Thunderstorm’s happen when warm, moist air quickly

mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and

creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail.

the loud sound that “thunder” makes caused by the

heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear

the thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last

for severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos

around the ground mountains, hills and building’s.

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Thunderstorms - Answers

A thunderstorm is a storm with thunder and lightning. There is

often heavy rain during a thunderstorm.

Thunderstorms happen when warm, moist air quickly moves

upwards. This causes clouds to form and creates gusty winds,

heavy rain and sometimes hail.

The loud sound that thunder makes is caused by the heat of the

lightning that happens before you hear the thunder. Sometimes

the sound of thunder can last for several seconds. This is because

the thunder echoes around the ground, mountains, hills and

buildings.

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Cathy Freeman - Editing

cathy freeman is won of the most well-known

Indigenous australians. she was the �rst “Indigenous

Australian” to win a gold medel at the

Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994. Freeman

competed in many championchip events

through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the

torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won

gold in the 400m event.

freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with

many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman

Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation

between Indigenous and non-Indigenous student’s.

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cathy freeman is won of the most well-known

Indigenous australians. she was the �rst “Indigenous

Australian” to win a gold medel at the

Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994. Freeman

competed in many championchip events

through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the

torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won

gold in the 400m event.

freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with

many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman

Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation

between Indigenous and non-Indigenous student’s.

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Cathy Freeman - Answers

Cathy Freeman is one of the most well-known Indigenous

Australians. She was the �rst Indigenous Australian to win a gold

medal at the Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994). Freeman

competed in many championship events throughout the 90s. She

was selected to light the torch at the Sydney Olympics in 2000,

where she won gold in the 400m event.

Freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with many charities.

In 2007, she founded the Cathy Freeman Foundation, which works

to close the gap in education between Indigenous and

non-Indigenous students.

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carefully, I stepped threw an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs I stared with wunder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest?

the rainforest was bursting wildlife. birds �ew from branch to branch, singing joyfull songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another! Butter�ies danced around the plants like graceful ballareenas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for there nests elegant �owers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forrest �oor. i took a deep breath, watching and listening wonder.

Soon, I wood need to retrace my steps and re-turn to life in my own world

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carefully, I stepped threw an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs I stared with wunder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest?

the rainforest was bursting wildlife. birds �ew from branch to branch, singing joyfull songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another! Butter�ies danced around the plants like graceful ballareenas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for there nests elegant �owers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forrest �oor. i took a deep breath, watching and listening wonder.

Soon, I wood need to retrace my steps and re-turn to life in my own world

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Journey into the Rainforest - Editing

Carefully, I stepped through an opening in the undergrowth of

shrubs. I stared with wonder at the beauty of the dark and humid

rainforest.

The rainforest was bursting with wildlife. Birds �ew from branch to

branch, singing joyful songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another.

Butter�ies danced around the plants like graceful ballerinas. Tree

ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for their nests. Elegant

�owers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the

forest �oor. I took a deep breath, watching and listening in wonder.

Soon, I would need to retrace my steps and return to life in my own

world.

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Tropical Rainforests - Editing

tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many

countrys.

Tropical rainforests have warm wet weather it is usually warm

in every month the year. Tropical rain-forests also have very

high rainfall!

Tropicle rainforests are home to many plants and animals.

some plants grow �ower’s and live close to the ground

rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the verry top

layer of the rainforest. Many animal’s also live in the rainforest.

Some of these include birds monkeys snakes, frogs and insects

Sadly, tropical rainforests being cut down by humans? The

area covered by rainforests around the world is getting

smaller.

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tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many countrys.

Tropical rainforests have warm wet weather it is usually warm in every month the year. Tropical rain-forests also have very high rainfall!

Tropicle rainforests are home to many plants and animals. some plants grow �ower’s and live close to the ground rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the verry top layer of the rainforest. Many animal’s also live in the rainforest. Some of these include birds monkeys snakes, frogs and insects

Sadly, tropical rainforests being cut down by humans? The area covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller.

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Tropical Rainforests - Answers

Tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many

countries.

Tropical rainforests have warm, wet weather. It is usually warm in

every month of the year. Tropical rainforests also have very high

rainfall.

Tropical rainforests are home to many plants and animals. Some

plants grow �owers and live close to the ground. Rainforest trees

can grow very high. They make the very top layer of the rainforest.

Many animals also live in the rainforest. Some of these include

birds, monkeys, snakes, frogs and insects.

Sadly, tropical rainforests are being cut down by humans. The area

covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller.

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