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Great Barrier Reef - Editing
The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral
reef It is close too the coast of queensland
australia. it is made up of nerly 3,000 coral reefs
and over 600 islands, streching over 2,600 km
long. It is so big, it can be scene from space!
The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure
maid by living things. because of it’s
enviromental signi�cance, its has been listed as a
important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.
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Great Barrier Reef - Editing
The great barrier reef is the worlds lagest coral
reef It is close too the coast of queensland
australia. it is made up of nerly 3,000 coral reefs
and over 600 islands, streching over 2,600 km
long. It is so big, it can be scene from space!
The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure
maid by living things. because of it’s
enviromental signi�cance, its has been listed as a
important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.
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Great Barrier Reef - Answers
The Great Barrier Reef is the world’s largest coral reef. It is close to
the coast of Queensland, Australia. It is made up of nearly 3,000
coral reefs and over 600 islands, stretching over 2,600 km long. It is
so big, it can be seen from space!
The Great Barrier Reef is the largest structure made by living things.
Because of its environmental signi�cance, it has been listed as an
important World Heritage Site by UNESCO.
Great Wall Of China - Editing
The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most
signi�cant man-made structures in the world built over 2,000
years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil
standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive 8851.8
km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down
across grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus.
Unfortunately some of the original sections ar now in ruins or
no longr exist.
work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as
the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great
Wall was to protect china’s boders from the nomadic warring
tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and
Mongolia.
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The great wall of China is indoubtedly one of the most
signi�cant man-made structures in the world built over 2,000
years ago, it is an arcitectural feat that this structure is stil
standing. The Great Wall of china spans an impresive 8851.8
km (5,500 mi) stretching east to west, winding up and down
across grasslands mountains, desserts and plateaus.
Unfortunately some of the original sections ar now in ruins or
no longr exist.
work on construct the Great Wall of China started as early as
the 5th century B.C. The main reason behind built the Great
Wall was to protect china’s boders from the nomadic warring
tribes, that came down from preent day manchuria and
Mongolia.
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Great Wall Of China - Answers
The Great Wall of China is undoubtedly one of the most signi�cant
man-made structures in the world. Built over 2,000 years ago, it is
an architectural feat that this structure is still standing. The Great
Wall of China spans an impressive 8851.8 km (5,500 mi) stretching
east to west, winding up and down across grasslands, mountains,
deserts and plateaus. Unfortunately some of the original sections
are now in ruins or no longer exist.
Work on constructing the Great Wall of China started as early as the
5th century B.C. The main reason behind building the Great Wall
was to protect China’s borders from the nomadic warring tribes,
that came down from present day Manchuria and Mongolia.
MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Editing
Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music
on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud that you
cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing
more harm than good! MP3 players are a great source of
entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius
Hearing problems for young people today research has
fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music
too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.
The ear piece are designed to �t �rmly in the listeners
ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This
means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear,
potentially causing permanent dammage.
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MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Editing
Do you now how much time you spend listening 2 music
on your MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud that you
cant here any outside noise. Well you may be doing
more harm than good! MP3 players are a great source of
entertainment, but they are also the cause of serius
Hearing problems for young people today research has
fund that young ppl are more likly to play their music
too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.
The ear piece are designed to �t �rmly in the listeners
ear canal, alowing outside noise to be eliminated? This
means that the music is Pumped directly into the the ear,
potentially causing permanent dammage.
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MP3 Players And Your Hearing - Answers
Do you know how much time you spend listening to music on your
MP3 device? Do you turn it up so loud you that can’t hear any
outside noise? Well, you may be doing more harm than good!
[MP3 players are a great source of entertainment, but they are also
the cause of serious hearing problems for young people today.
Research has found that young people are more likely to play their
music too loud, which can result in hearing loss later in life.
The ear pieces are designed to �t �rmly in the listener’s ear canal,
allowing outside noise to be eliminated. This means that the music
is pumped directly into the ear, potentially causing permanent
damage.
The Solar System - Editing
The soler system is made up of eight planet’s which
orbit around the Sun
The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are
mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock
and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The
too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of
hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are
Uranus and “Neptune”. They are composed largely of
ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane
our solar system is located within one of outer arms
of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200
billion stars.
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The soler system is made up of eight planet’s which
orbit around the Sun
The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are
mercury, Venus earth and Mars. They made up of rock
and metel. the four outer planets are much larger. The
too largest are Jupiter and Saturn, composd mainly of
hydrogen and helium. The outermost Planets are
Uranus and “Neptune”. They are composed largely of
ices, including frozen water ammonia and methane
our solar system is located within one of outer arms
of the milky way galaxy, witch contains about 200
billion stars.
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The solar system is made up of eight planets which orbit around
the Sun.
The four smaller planets closest to the Sun are Mercury, Venus,
Earth and Mars. They are made up of rock and metal. The four outer
planets are much larger. The two largest are Jupiter and Saturn,
composed mainly of hydrogen and helium. The outermost planets
are Uranus and Neptune. They are composed largely of ices,
including frozen water, ammonia and methane.
Our solar system is located within one of the outer arms of the
Milky Way galaxy, which contains about 200 billion stars.
Soccer - Editing
Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most
popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven
players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal
each end.
The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into
the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the
ball with there hands (with the exception of the
goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball
One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only
takes a ball and a �at open area to play?
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Soccer - Editing
Soccor (or football) is considered the worlds most
popular sport. in soccer, there are to teams of eleven
players It is played on a large grass feild with a goal
each end.
The obgect of the game is to get the Soccer Ball into
the opposing teams gaol. players cannot touch the
ball with there hands (with the exception of the
goalie. They can only kick knee or head ball
One of the reesons soccer is so popular is that it only
takes a ball and a �at open area to play?
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Soccer - Answers
Soccer (or football) is considered the world's most popular sport. In
soccer, there are two teams of eleven players. It is played on a large
grass �eld with a goal at each end.
The object of the game is to get the soccer ball into the opposing
team's goal. Players cannot touch the ball with their hands (with
the exception of the goalie). They can only kick, knee or head the
ball.
One of the reasons soccer is so popular is that it only takes a ball
and a �at open area to play.
Dreaming - Editing
dreams are storys and pictures our brain’s create when
we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply
asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly
under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement!
Some dreams are just you’re mind playing with thorts
and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity
for you to make sense of your life dream experts also
agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep
having over and over propably have some sort of special
meaning,
Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will
forget 90% them.
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Dreaming - Editing
dreams are storys and pictures our brain’s create when
we are asleep Most dreams happen when we deeply
asleep and our eyes begin to moove around quickly
under our eyelids. This is called rapid Eye Movement!
Some dreams are just you’re mind playing with thorts
and images from life. other dreams are an oppertunity
for you to make sense of your life dream experts also
agree that recurring dreams (dreams that you keep
having over and over propably have some sort of special
meaning,
Although everbody dreams (including Animals), we will
forget 90% them.
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Dreaming - Answers
Dreams are stories and pictures our brains create when we are
asleep. Most dreams happen when we are deeply asleep and our
eyes begin to move around quickly under our eyelids. This is called
Rapid Eye Movement.
Some dreams are just your mind playing with thoughts and images
from life. Other dreams are an opportunity for you to make sense of
your life. Dream experts also agree that recurring dreams (dreams
that you keep having over and over) probably have some sort of
special meaning.
Although everybody dreams (including animals), we will forget
90% of them.
Why our Bodies Need Water - Editing
H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the
human body too function and vital to hour Survival
Although we can last week’s without food, we can
only survive a matter days without water. it is
important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh
Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our
lungs skin urine and faeces!
All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75
percent water, One of our most important organs, our
Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay
hidrated to make sure our “brain cells” can function at
the optimal level.
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Why our Bodies Need Water - Editing
H2O, commonly known as water, is esential for the
human body too function and vital to hour Survival
Although we can last week’s without food, we can
only survive a matter days without water. it is
important for us to re-plenish our supply of Fresh
Water every day, as we regularly loose liquid from our
lungs skin urine and faeces!
All though our bodies are made up of 50 to 75
percent water, One of our most important organs, our
Brain, is made up of 73% water. We need to stay
hidrated to make sure our “brain cells” can function at
the optimal level.
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Why our Bodies Need Water - Answers
H2O, commonly known as water, is essential for the human body to
function and vital to our survival. Although we can last weeks
without food, we can only survive a matter of days without water. It
is important for us to replenish our supply of fresh water every day,
as we regularly lose liquid from our lungs, skin, urine and faeces.
Although our bodies are made up of 50 to 75 per cent water, one of
our most important organs, our brain, is made up of 73% water. We
need to stay hydrated to make sure our brain cells can function at
the optimal level.
Bees - Editing
there are about 20,000 species of Bees in the world
Bees live together in groups called colonys. There
three types of bees in each colony! There is The
queen bee the worker bee and the “drone”.
The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is
the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees,
Their only job is to mate with the queen-bee so
that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and
they do all the work. They clean and protect the
hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the
colony and take care of the o�spring.
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Bees - Editing
there are about 20,000 species of Bees in the world
Bees live together in groups called colonys. There
three types of bees in each colony! There is The
queen bee the worker bee and the “drone”.
The queen is, the largest bee in the colony she is
the only won that lays eggs. Drones are mail bees,
Their only job is to mate with the queen-bee so
that she can lay egs. Worker bees are Female and
they do all the work. They clean and protect the
hive. collect the pollen and necta to feed the
colony and take care of the o�spring.
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Bees - Answers
There are about 20,000 species of bees in the world. Bees live
together in groups called colonies. There are three types of bees in
each colony. There is the queen bee, the worker bee and the drone.
The queen is the largest bee in the colony. She is the only one that
lays eggs. Drones are male bees. Their only job is to mate with the
queen bee so that she can lay eggs. Worker bees are female and
they do all the work. They clean and protect the hive, collect the
pollen and nectar to feed the colony and take care of the o�spring.
Thunderstorms - Editing
A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning
There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm?
Thunderstorm’s happen when warm, moist air quickly
mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and
creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail.
the loud sound that “thunder” makes caused by the
heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear the
thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last for
severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos
around the ground mountains, hills and building’s.
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Thunderstorms - Editing
A thunderstom is a storm with Thunder and Lightning
There is ofen heavy rain during a thunderstorm?
Thunderstorm’s happen when warm, moist air quickly
mooves upwards. This causes Clouds to form and
creates gusty winds heavy rain and some-times hail.
the loud sound that “thunder” makes caused by the
heat of the lightning that happens befour you hear
the thunder. sometimes the sound of thunder can last
for severel seconds. This is because the thunder echos
around the ground mountains, hills and building’s.
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Thunderstorms - Answers
A thunderstorm is a storm with thunder and lightning. There is
often heavy rain during a thunderstorm.
Thunderstorms happen when warm, moist air quickly moves
upwards. This causes clouds to form and creates gusty winds,
heavy rain and sometimes hail.
The loud sound that thunder makes is caused by the heat of the
lightning that happens before you hear the thunder. Sometimes
the sound of thunder can last for several seconds. This is because
the thunder echoes around the ground, mountains, hills and
buildings.
Cathy Freeman - Editing
cathy freeman is won of the most well-known
Indigenous australians. she was the �rst “Indigenous
Australian” to win a gold medel at the
Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994. Freeman
competed in many championchip events
through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the
torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won
gold in the 400m event.
freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with
many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman
Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation
between Indigenous and non-Indigenous student’s.
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Cathy Freeman - Editing
cathy freeman is won of the most well-known
Indigenous australians. she was the �rst “Indigenous
Australian” to win a gold medel at the
Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994. Freeman
competed in many championchip events
through-out the 90s! She was selected to light the
torch at the sydney olympics in 2000, wear she won
gold in the 400m event.
freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with
many charities In 2007, she founded Cathy Freeman
Foundation, witch works to close the gap in ejucation
between Indigenous and non-Indigenous student’s.
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Cathy Freeman is one of the most well-known Indigenous
Australians. She was the �rst Indigenous Australian to win a gold
medal at the Commonwealth Games (in Canada in 1994). Freeman
competed in many championship events throughout the 90s. She
was selected to light the torch at the Sydney Olympics in 2000,
where she won gold in the 400m event.
Freeman retired in 2003 and became involved with many charities.
In 2007, she founded the Cathy Freeman Foundation, which works
to close the gap in education between Indigenous and
non-Indigenous students.
Journey into the Rainforest - Editing
carefully, I stepped threw an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs I stared with wunder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest?
the rainforest was bursting wildlife. birds �ew from branch to branch, singing joyfull songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another! Butter�ies danced around the plants like graceful ballareenas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for there nests elegant �owers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forrest �oor. i took a deep breath, watching and listening wonder.
Soon, I wood need to retrace my steps and re-turn to life in my own world
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carefully, I stepped threw an opening in the undergrowth of shrubs I stared with wunder at the beauty of the dark and humid rainforest?
the rainforest was bursting wildlife. birds �ew from branch to branch, singing joyfull songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another! Butter�ies danced around the plants like graceful ballareenas. Tree ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for there nests elegant �owers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the forrest �oor. i took a deep breath, watching and listening wonder.
Soon, I wood need to retrace my steps and re-turn to life in my own world
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Carefully, I stepped through an opening in the undergrowth of
shrubs. I stared with wonder at the beauty of the dark and humid
rainforest.
The rainforest was bursting with wildlife. Birds �ew from branch to
branch, singing joyful songs. Frogs croaked hello to one another.
Butter�ies danced around the plants like graceful ballerinas. Tree
ants ran this way and that, weaving leaves for their nests. Elegant
�owers, bursting with perfume, stood tall and proud along the
forest �oor. I took a deep breath, watching and listening in wonder.
Soon, I would need to retrace my steps and return to life in my own
world.
Tropical Rainforests - Editing
tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many
countrys.
Tropical rainforests have warm wet weather it is usually warm
in every month the year. Tropical rain-forests also have very
high rainfall!
Tropicle rainforests are home to many plants and animals.
some plants grow �ower’s and live close to the ground
rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the verry top
layer of the rainforest. Many animal’s also live in the rainforest.
Some of these include birds monkeys snakes, frogs and insects
Sadly, tropical rainforests being cut down by humans? The
area covered by rainforests around the world is getting
smaller.
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tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many countrys.
Tropical rainforests have warm wet weather it is usually warm in every month the year. Tropical rain-forests also have very high rainfall!
Tropicle rainforests are home to many plants and animals. some plants grow �ower’s and live close to the ground rainforest trees can grow very high. They make the verry top layer of the rainforest. Many animal’s also live in the rainforest. Some of these include birds monkeys snakes, frogs and insects
Sadly, tropical rainforests being cut down by humans? The area covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller.
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Tropical Rainforests - Answers
Tropical rainforests can be found around the world, in many
countries.
Tropical rainforests have warm, wet weather. It is usually warm in
every month of the year. Tropical rainforests also have very high
rainfall.
Tropical rainforests are home to many plants and animals. Some
plants grow �owers and live close to the ground. Rainforest trees
can grow very high. They make the very top layer of the rainforest.
Many animals also live in the rainforest. Some of these include
birds, monkeys, snakes, frogs and insects.
Sadly, tropical rainforests are being cut down by humans. The area
covered by rainforests around the world is getting smaller.