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GAMON
Gary Hartmann
Written by
Gary Hartmann
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Actor List
(The following list is only a draft and will be changed and
updated along the way)
Leads
Gamon: abcdawgTrade Prince Donais: Rob McGirr
Old Man: TD
Wanderer: River Kanoff
Additional Characters
Orc Father: TD
Orc Child: TD
Orc Stone Guard: TD
Torturer: Rob McGirr
Oaf Minion: Anthony Benedict
Assassin 1: Rob McGirr
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Resume
An expedition crew discovers an ancient Tolvir tomb containing amysterious coffer. Their ship is attacked midway and the coffer
sinks with the crew. Sixty years later the coffer washes onto the
shores of Kezan and into the hands of a young goblin Trade Prince
named Donais. After many unsuccessful attempts at opening the
spell-bound coffer he sends out a group of assassins to find the
missing key. Meanwhile on the shores of the Barrens, Tazan, a
primitive troll, catches the key whilst out fishing. Being
overwhelmed by his discovery he immediately declares himself king
of the barrens and spreads the rumour of his wealth far and wide.
Donais men quickly track down Tazan and in a haze of panic he
gives the key to an old Archaeologist passing by. The old man
unknowingly returns to Orgrimmar and is crossing The Drag when
jumped by Donais men. The robbery is interrupted by Gamon, a
simple Tauren worker on his way home. The assassins are fought
off, but the old man is fatally injured. The key is passed onto
Gamon.
The next day Donais men go after Gamon and torture him for
hours. Gamon is a proud Tauren and doesnt give in to the pain. An
Orgrimmar Grunt interrupts Donais torturer and drags him off tojail, - as he is hauled away he says: You might have gotten me,
but not the man who was sent to your house. Gamon finds his
family murdered and the grief sends him into a spiral of agony and
alcohol.
Twenty years later Gamon is nothing but the city drunk, a mere
punching bag. A lost soul without a path and the citizens of
Orgrimmar despise him. Under the usual haze of alcohol he one
night takes it too far when he flirts with a Stone Guards wife. As
he falls to the ground from taking a punch, he receives a vision
of a black stag standing in a field of giants. He wakes up the
next day and stumbles home. As he reaches his front door, he hears
the familiar voice of one of Donais men. As he turns to face him,
an oaf knocks him out from behind. He wakes up in a cell on the
lost isles being held captive by Donais. After continues hours of
failed attempts to force the location of the key out of Gamon he
is brought to Donais himself who tries to make a deal with him.
Gamon tells him that Donais took away everything he ever cared for
and that nothing he could do would make him reveal the location of
the key. Annoyed and stubborn Donais throws Gamon back to his cell
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where Gamon immediately passes out. While passed out Gamon once
again sees the black stag and when he wakes up, a mysterious man
is sitting in his cell telling him that he travelled there from
the dark realm to end Gamons pain. Gamon thinks hes there to
kill him and wants to know what they key unlocks since it was
worth killing his family for. The mysterious man tells him the
story of how the coffer ended up in Donais possession. He
explains Gamon how he cant let Donais ever find the key. The
contents of the coffer are too strong for any mortal to control
and releasing it would cause Azeroths demise. Before the
mysterious man disappears he leaves a glowing axe on the floor of
the prison cell telling Gamon its the axe of Ogoun, the Loa of
war. Touching it heals Gamon and gives him incredible renewed
strength. He makes his way to Donais Room, fights off his men(First stealthy, then brutally) and ends up standing in front of
Donais who has tried to cowardly sneak away. Im not going to
kill you Gamon says while walking slowly away. Aha! I knew you
were a reasonable business man! Donais says relieved Now, about
that trade! he continues while walking towards his desk(?).
Nothing I could ever do, would be punishment enough for what
youve done Gamon says in a dark voice. I, uh.. Waa? Donais
mumbles. Himon other hand, I think would do a sufficient job he
says breaking the chains Donais oaf guard. As Donais walks away
you can see the shadow of the oaf ripping Donais apart.
Scene fades in with Gamon sitting in an inn (Game of Thrones
style) as the camera slowly pans away.
The voice of the mysterious man says Gamon, you have found your
path. You hold the weapon of a god and you must use it to defend
your home. No one shall feel the pain you have suffered
(Still working on ending)
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0: Cinematic intro of Orgrimmar with head titles.
1: A tauren is sitting in an inn with his head tilted downwards, -
title: GAMON
2: Gamon walks down the street; a boy asks his father
"Father, whats wrong with that tauren? why does he look
like that?"
Orc father shushes him Be quiet son!
Orc Child: I dont understand, whatswrong with him?
Orc Father: Hes a no, good, drunk.
3: Gamon is drinking in front of an inn and starts hitting on
girls walking by.
Gamon: "Hey. You work out gorgeous?"
Gamon: Hey lady! If I told you, you have a beautiful
body, would you hold it against me?
An Orc Stone Guard stops up and says "What did you say to
my wife, peasant?!" Gamon mumbles and looks down "STAND
UP!" the Stone Guard yells.
Gamon stands up "I said, would you repeat that youpathetic, worthless drunk?!" the Stone Guard says. Gamon
says: How about I repeat this! and takes a swing at the
man but misses. He gets knocked out by the stone guard.
As he falls to the ground he sees a vision of a black stag with
green eyes standing in a dark field. Fade out.
4: Fade in: Flashback where Gamon intercepts thieves
trying to rob old man and fights them off, Gamon: Hey! Shouldnt
you be hitting on someone your own age? - the old man dies and
the key is passed on to gamon.
Old man: I thank you kind stranger... Although I'm afraid your
trouble was wasted- "The .. key..". Gamon returns to his home
(and family) hides the key and goes to bed.
Gamon goes to work the next morning as a common miner(?) - On the
way home he is knocked unconscious. He wakes up sitting in a
chair, facing an unknown man with glasses.
(Unknown location, close to home) The man interrogates
Gamon with torture;
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Torturer: What did you do with the key?Gamon doesnt
answer What.. Did you do .. With the key!? he says
annoyed - In the confusion Gamon doesn't remember the
Key.
The torture is interrupted by an Orgrimmar Grunt/guard.
Guard: Hey, you there! Youre not allowed in Orgrimmar!
The torturer is captured and says: "You might have gotten
me... but not the man that was sent to your house..."
Gamon realizes that his wife and daughter (baby) is still at home
Gamon: "By the earth mother, no!! - He runs home, - he
enters to find his wife and daughter slaughtered on the
floor.
As he discovers this, flashes of the actual murder appears on the
screen for dramatic effect. He falls to his knees and starts
crying/screaming. It flashes away and receives another sight of
the 'spirit world - giants walking across the field' the sound of
his cries echoes throughout the dark fields.
5: He wakes up the sound of a rooster the next morning, birds
peeping, sun glaring. He 'grumbles' and starts walking home.
As he walks up to his front door you hear the voice of
one of the assassins who mugged the old man "Oi, old
man!" - Gamon turns to face the assassin; - an oaf behind
him knocks him out.
6: He wakes up in a cell on the lost isles; - he has been
kidnapped by Trade prince Donais. The glasses of the
torturer glares in the dark "Remember me?" he says.
Gamons sight returns (starts out dark and blurry). The
torturer walks towards him with a burning spike in hishand. "This one is for 20 years in hell" - zoom from
outside the cell while screams continue.
7: Gamon gets dragged to the Trade Prince by two brutes (of
unknown origin)
8: As he is forced into a chair, music starts playing and
footsteps are heard. Donais walks in the room, slowly and turns to
Gamon.
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Donais: "You have proven to be quite a thorn in my side"
he says. Gamon looks up. "And yet, you still have
something that I need...he continues.
Gamon yells: "I will break you for what you did!"
Donais: "Hey, hey, hey, let's not forgot who messed with
who here!" - "You took something I held dear and I took
something... you held dear, - its only fair!"
Gamon snarls, dangerous sound with a face of fury.
Donais: "Now, how about you just hand over the key andyou'll be out of here in no time! Hmm? (Like a
questioning sound)"
Gamon: "You took away the only thing I ever cared for...
You will never have your key"
Donais: "Come on, we're both reasonable businessmen here!
How about a trade? What do you want the most in the
whole, wide world?"
Gamon: "Your head... rotting on a spike"
Donais: "Okay, there's really no way to reach you is
there? ...Fine" He turns to the oaf behind him "Take him
back to his cell you big lump of meat, - chop chop!" the
oaf growls annoyed.
As donais walks out of the room he says: "I didnt steal
you from your smelly mother for you to turn out so lazy!
- The oaf walks towards Gamon and the scene fades out.
9: Dream scene with dark elk a little closer, flock of crows flies
in the background, abstract music and giants in the background
suddenly turns towards the camera. Whisper: "Wake up"
10: Gamon wakes up and sees a mysterious "man" sitting in
the corner of his cell. Gamon says "you can hurt me all
you like, Imnot going to give you scum anything..."
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"I'm not here to hurt you" the man responds. Gamons sight
becomes clear and he asks, "Then why are you here?" -
"Your sorrow echoed throughout the entire dark realm...
I'm here to relieve you of your pain"
"I'm not ready to die... not yet" gamon responds. "You're
not going to die at this time, nor in this place" says
the man. "What does the key unlock?" Gamon asks, nearly
about to pass out from dehydration and pain.
11: Flashback of villain plot:
"A hundred years ago an Argent Dawn expedition stumbled
upon an ancient Tol'vir tomb. While the crew was
spellbound by the gold and artifacts the captain
discovered something much more valuable.
Knowing the potential threat of the contents, the captain
smuggled the coffer on board their ship unseen in order
to avoid risking the lives of himself and his crew.
Despite his efforts, the ship barely made it half way
across the great sea before it drew unwanted attention
from the depths below. The crew sunk alongside the cargo.
Sixty years later the coffer drifts ashore on the isle of
Kezan and is discovered by a young Trade Prince named
Donais.
Being a trade prince, Donais had of course heard tales of
a coffer like this. Nights upon nights he attempted to
break open the coffer, but the lock was bound by powerful
magic. Greedy and obsessed as he had become, he ordered
his puppets to track down any known leads concerning a
key of tol'virean origin. Meanwhile on the shores of the
barrens a troll named Tazan had caught something rather
unusual during his daily fishing routine. Ecstatic from
finding such a shiny piece of metal He immediately
claimed himself king of the barrens, - spreading the
rumour of his wealth far and wide.
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Having connections all over Azeroth it only took a few
weeks for the word to reach Donais who immediately
requested Tazan killed and the key retrieved.
After several close encounters with Donais assassins,Tazan realized the key was dangerous to be around but he
wasn't willing to let go of his reputation. An old
archaeologist from Orgrimmar was passing by and Tazan saw
his chance. He promised the old man riches beyond his
dreams if he agreed to bring his key back to Orgrimmar
and hold on to it until he came to retrieve it. Being a
struggeling archaeologist the old man agreed and took it
with him. It didn't take long for Donais' torturer to get
Tazan to reveal the location of the key andthats where
YOU came into the story, Gamon"
12: Flashback ends. Gamon is now sitting up, still covered in
blood, still weak.
Gamon: "My family died... because of a treasure?" he
asks. The man answers Not just a treasure Gamon. The
coffer contains powers uncontrollable by any mortal
being. Releasing it would cause the demise of Azeroth as
we know it, including millions of families just like your
own.
Gamon: There is nothing I can do Im old, weak
pathetic
The man backs away and an axe appears in front of him.
This is the axe of Ogoun, - the Loa of War. With this,
you will have a chance he says and disappears.
Gamon stands up, shaking as he walks towards the axe. As he
touches the handle his wounds are healed. He feels the wrath ofOgoun inside him and pulls it out of the ground.
13: Gamon fights off guards and makes his way to the room he had
been questioned in. It is filled with Donais goons. Gamon
whistles whistle-soundto lure a beast (hound perhaps) to his
location around a corner, - the sound of the beast dying attracts
two additional guards who as they run around the corner (from
Donais point of view) comes flying across the room as a result of
powerful kicks from Gamon. This alerts the rest of the room and
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Gamon fights each mob without too much of a hassle. Left Is only
the torturer, Donais and his oaf guard standing in chains.
Donais yells: Kill him! Kill him now!The Torturer makes the first attack that actually hits
and damages Gamon, - he is thrown back (Magic damage,
perhaps? Fire) but gets back on his feet, spits out
blood. The torturer says: Ha! Bring it! I do this on a
daily basis! - As Gamon and the torturer is fighting,
Donais can be seen trying to sneak away in the
background. Gamon gets up and close to the torturer,
picks him up and says The only difference is, - your
subject cant normally fight back! and throws him onto
something sharp (chandelier? Beast head on the wall?) and
makes a leap alike warriors heroic leap to block Donais
way out. Donais backs up shocked and scared, turns to his
oaf guard and yells Protect me you blundering imbecile!
I am your master, I own you! I command you to kill him!!
(With a trembling, desperate voice).
Im not going to kill you Gamon says while walking
slowly away. Aha! I knew you were a reasonable business
man! Donais says relieved Now, about that trade! hecontinues while walking towards his desk(?).Nothing I
could ever do,would be punishment enough for what youve
done Gamon says in a dark voice. I, uh..Waa? Donais
mumbles. Him on other hand, I think would do a
sufficient job he says breaking the chains Donais oaf
guard. As Gamon walks away you can see the shadow of the
oaf ripping Donais apart. SCENE FADES OUT
Scene fades in with Gamon sitting in an inn (Game of Thronesstyle) as the camera slowly pans away.
The voice of the mysterious man says slowly, narrative Gamon, you
have found your path. You hold the weapon of a god and you must
use it to defend your home. No one shall feel the pain you have
suffered
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Individual Lines
Gamon: abcdawg
heavily intoxicated tries to hit on girls walking byHey! You
work out gorgeous?
heavily intoxicatedHey lady! If I told you, you have a beautiful
body, would you hold it against me?
heavily intoxicated How about I repeat this!?as he throws a
punch.
AnnoyedHey! Shouldnt you be hitting on someone your own age?
Confusedhuh?
ConfusedI.. uh, I dont what youre talking about
Startled, panicked"By the earth mother, no!!
*Crying sounds*as he finds his family dead
Broken, destroyed he screamsAAAARGGGGHHH!! (One long scream)
While being tortured*screams of pain* (several medium screams)
yells"I will break you for what you did!"
snarls, growl with mouth closed*dangerous sound*
Rough "You took away the only thing I ever cared for... You will
never have your key"
Resentful Your head... rotting on a spike
Weak, tired, exhausted"you can hurtme all you like, Im not
going to give you scum anything..."
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Weak, tired, exhaustedThen why are you here?
Weak, tired, exhausted"I'm not ready to die... not yet"
Weak, tired, exhausted"What does the key unlock?"
Weak, resentful"My family died... because of a treasure?"
Weak, giving upThere is nothing I can do Im old, weak
pathetic
Being infused with mighty power*HNNGGGG* (2-3 seconds)
Gamon whistles whistle-sound
Gamon fights off Donais villainsUgh! Ah! Huargh! (5-8 Fighting
sounds, throwing punches, getting hit etc.)
Picks up torturerThe only difference is, - your subjects cant
normally fight back!
CalmlyIm not going to kill you
Calmly, resentfulNothing I could ever do, would be punishment
enough for what youve done
Calmly, resentful Himon other hand, I think would do a
sufficient job
Trade Prince Donais: Rob McGirr
Calmly, sinister, dark tone "You have proven to be quite a thorn
in my side"
Calmly, sinister"And yet, you still have something that I
need...
Sinister"Hey, hey, hey, let's not forgot who messed with who
here!"
Sinister, smug"You took something I held dear and I took
something... you held dear, - its only fair!"
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Tries to reason with Gamon "Now, how about you just hand over the
key and you'll be out of here in no time! Hmm? (Like a questioning
sound)"
"Come on, we're both reasonable businessmen here! How about a
trade? What do you want the most in the whole, wide world?"
Annoyed"Okay, there's really no way to reach you is there?
...Fine"
Degrading"Take him back to his cell you big lump of meat, - chop
chop!"
Degrading"I didnt steal you fromyour smelly mother for you to
turn out so lazy!
Panicked, adrenaline-infusedKill him! Kill him now!
Desperate, degrading talking to his oafProtect me you blundering
imbecile! I am your master, I own you! I command you to kill
him!!
Relieved, still startledAha! I knew you were a reasonablebusiness man!
Now, about that trade!
ConfusedI, uh.. Waa?
Realizing hes about to be ripped apart, panicking, desperate
huh? Wh-what are you doing you moron?! Let me down!! I command
you to let,me, go!! NOO!
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Wanderer: ---
Whisper"Wake up"
Friendly, slow, deep"I'm not here to hurt you"
Friendly, slow, deep "Your sorrow echoed throughout my entire home
world I'm here to relieve you of your pain"
Friendly, slow, deep"You're not going to die at this time, nor inthis place"
Friendly, slow, deep "A hundred years ago an Argent Dawn
expedition stumbled upon an ancient Tol'vir tomb. While the crew
was spellbound by the gold and artifacts the captain discovered
something much more valuable.
Knowing the potential threat of the contents, the captain smuggled
the coffer on board their ship unseen in order to avoid risking
the lives of himself and his crew. Despite his efforts, the ship
barely made it half way across the great sea before it drew
unwanted attention from the depths below. The crew sunk alongside
the cargo. Sixty years later the coffer drifts ashore on the isle
of Kezan and is discovered by a young Trade Prince named Donais.
Being a trade prince, Donais had of course heard tales of a coffer
like this. Nights upon nights he attempted to break open the
coffer, but the lock was bound by powerful magic. Greedy and
obsessed as he had become, he ordered his puppets to track down
any known leads concerning a key of tol'virean origin. Meanwhileon the shores of the barrens a troll named Tazan had caught
something rather unusual during his daily fishing routine.
Ecstatic from finding such a shiny piece of metal He immediately
claimed himself king of the barrens, - spreading the rumour of his
wealth far and wide.
Having connections all over Azeroth it only took a few weeks for
the word to reach Donais who immediately requested Tazan killed
and the key retrieved.
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After several close encounters with Donais assassins, Tazan
realized the key was dangerous to be around but he wasn't willing
to let go of his reputation. An old archaeologist from Orgrimmar
was passing by and Tazan saw his chance. He promised the old man
riches beyond his dreams if he agreed to bring his key back to
Orgrimmar and hold on to it until he came to retrieve it. Being a
struggeling archaeologist the old man agreed and took it with him.
It didn't take long for Donais' torturer to get Tazan to reveal
the location of the keyand thats where YOU came into the story,
Gamon"
Serious, slow, deep Not just a treasure Gamon. The coffer
contains powers uncontrollable by any mortal being. Releasing it
would cause the demise of Azeroth as we know it, including
millions of families just like your own.
Slow, deep, seriousThis is the axe of Ogoun, (small pause)- the
Loa of War. With this (small pause) you will have a chance
Slow, deep, seriousGamon, you have found your path. You hold the
weapon of a god and you must use it to defend your home. No one
shall feel the pain you have suffered
Old Man: TD
Confused, startled, scaredOh! You startled me!
Yells, being attackedHelp! Leave me alone!-- Im not looking
for trouble!
Whispering, near deathI thank you kind stranger... Although I'm
afraid your trouble was wasted
Whispering, with last dying breath "The .. key.."
Orc Father: TD
Shh! Being quiet son!
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Slow, resentfulHes a no gooddrunk
Orc Child: TD or Geist Darkseed
Questioning, trying to understand the broken, drunk Gamon"Father,
whats wrong with that tauren? why does he look like that?"
I dont understand----whats wrong with him?
Orc Stone Guard: TD
Annoyed, deep, pissed off"What did you say to my wife, peasant?!"
"STAND UP!"
"I said, would you repeat that you pathetic, worthless drunk!?"
Hey! Whats going on over there!?
Youre coming with me!
Torturer: Rob McGirr
Calmly, intimidatingWhat did you do with the key?
Breaking character, intimidatingWhat.. Did you do .. With the
key!?
Fighting soundsUgh, huah, hng etc. etc. (about 10 of these)
Exhausted from fighting, smug, sinister "You might have gotten
me... but not the man that was sent to your house..."
Vengeful, sinister"Remember me?"
Vengeful, sinister"This one is for 20 years in hell
Smug, sinisterHa! Bring it! I do this on a daily basis!
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Sound of him dying, impaled on something sharpUGH!
Assassin 1: Rob McGirr
Sinister, as if about to ask a questionExcuse me...
Sinister,while walking intimidating towards old manThat REALLY
wasnt my intention
Sinister, English accentHow about someoneyour own size?
Sinister, English accent, cockyOi, old man!
Bonus Role 1: Troll Tradesman(if youre interested in this small bonus role, send us a
message!)
Yelling as if advertising his products on the street of orgrimmar.
Jamaican dialect Cheapest and best quality Trinkets In all of
Kalimdor!
Nonsense mon! You couldnt sell the eye of Onyxia if you had the
chance!
Bonus Role 2: Orc Tradesman(if youre interested in this small bonus role, send us a
message!)
In response to the troll tradesman, also advertising. Orc voice,
deepYou must be crazy! The best prices in Orgrimmar? Right here
baby!
Oaf Minion: Unknown Actor.
Sheyra: No Actor
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