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Fitting the Puzzle Fitting the Puzzle Together: Writing a Together: Writing a Great Scholarship EssayGreat Scholarship Essay
Fitting the Puzzle Fitting the Puzzle Together: Writing a Together: Writing a Great Scholarship EssayGreat Scholarship Essay
Catherine WishartLiteracy CoachAdjunct College InstructorCopyright 2008. All rights reserved.
Catherine WishartLiteracy CoachAdjunct College InstructorCopyright 2008. All rights reserved.
Why Do I Have To Write This?
Why Do I Have To Write This?
Once scholarship committees have weeded out applications that are incomplete or obviously inaccurate, they depend on the essay for the final decision
Scholarship committees want to feel like they know you to be an intelligent, articulate person
Scholarship committees want to feel that you are genuine and creative
Scholarship committees remember essays that are different and creative instead of traditional and expected Answering like a Miss America contestant will get you
nowhere
Once scholarship committees have weeded out applications that are incomplete or obviously inaccurate, they depend on the essay for the final decision
Scholarship committees want to feel like they know you to be an intelligent, articulate person
Scholarship committees want to feel that you are genuine and creative
Scholarship committees remember essays that are different and creative instead of traditional and expected Answering like a Miss America contestant will get you
nowhere
How Do I Write This Essay?
How Do I Write This Essay?
Just like any other essay, a good scholarship essay has an introduction, a thesis statement, topic sentences, and transitions
MAKE SURE YOU ANSWER THE QUESTION!You should put your own spin on it, but make
sure that you answer the essay questionRead the question several timesTake note of every part of the questionPlan how to infuse your own personality into
the essay
Just like any other essay, a good scholarship essay has an introduction, a thesis statement, topic sentences, and transitions
MAKE SURE YOU ANSWER THE QUESTION!You should put your own spin on it, but make
sure that you answer the essay questionRead the question several timesTake note of every part of the questionPlan how to infuse your own personality into
the essay
Include Yourself in the Essay
Include Yourself in the Essay
Make sure that you are front and foremost in the essay
Show confidence, but not arrogance Include a personal anecdote or
accomplishmentDon’t exaggerate – this type of error
stands outDon’t sell yourself short – this is not the
time for false modesty, either!
Make sure that you are front and foremost in the essay
Show confidence, but not arrogance Include a personal anecdote or
accomplishmentDon’t exaggerate – this type of error
stands outDon’t sell yourself short – this is not the
time for false modesty, either!
You Try ItYou Try It
Think of something from your childhood that is special to you
Brainstorm about this objectWhat makes it special?Who gave it to you?Did it comfort you through a rough time?Does it provide great memories of happy
times?Write a short paragraph that is full of
rich detail about the object
Think of something from your childhood that is special to you
Brainstorm about this objectWhat makes it special?Who gave it to you?Did it comfort you through a rough time?Does it provide great memories of happy
times?Write a short paragraph that is full of
rich detail about the object
Make Sure You Analyze
Make Sure You Analyze
Analyze the question: What parts are there to the question? Is the question
in a particular order? Do I have to do research? Can I find a famous quote or statistic that relates to
the question? Analyze the organization or company:
Why did this group ask this question? Is there a rationale that gives me a clue for what they are looking for?
Why was the scholarship started? Can I predict who the judges will be? Is there a website I can look at for this information, or
is there a phone number so I can talk to someone directly?
Analyze the question: What parts are there to the question? Is the question
in a particular order? Do I have to do research? Can I find a famous quote or statistic that relates to
the question? Analyze the organization or company:
Why did this group ask this question? Is there a rationale that gives me a clue for what they are looking for?
Why was the scholarship started? Can I predict who the judges will be? Is there a website I can look at for this information, or
is there a phone number so I can talk to someone directly?
Some Typical Scholarship Essay
Questions
Some Typical Scholarship Essay
Questions1. How would this scholarship impact your education? 2. If your education had no limits, you could stay as long as you wanted and
money were no object, what would you hope to get out of your time at college? 3. You have just retired. What would people say about you at your going-away
party? 4. What legacy do you hope to leave with your life? 5. Who is your hero and why? 6. Describe a personal experience that has profoundly changed your perspective
on an issue of regional, national or international importance. In what way has this event impacted your previous perspective? How will it change your approach to this issue (or similar issues) in the future?
7. Describe how a work of art, music, dance, theatre or literature has inspired you.8. Who speaks for your generation, and what are they saying? If you answer “no
one,” why? What needs to be said?9. Pearl S. Buck once said, "You cannot make yourself feel something you do not
feel, but you can make yourself do right in spite of your feelings." Tell us about an experience where you felt that you did the right thing in spite of your feelings.
(Next Step: Your Life After High School. http://www.nextstepmagazine.com/nextstep/articlePage1.aspx?
artId=25&categoryId=44)
1. How would this scholarship impact your education? 2. If your education had no limits, you could stay as long as you wanted and
money were no object, what would you hope to get out of your time at college? 3. You have just retired. What would people say about you at your going-away
party? 4. What legacy do you hope to leave with your life? 5. Who is your hero and why? 6. Describe a personal experience that has profoundly changed your perspective
on an issue of regional, national or international importance. In what way has this event impacted your previous perspective? How will it change your approach to this issue (or similar issues) in the future?
7. Describe how a work of art, music, dance, theatre or literature has inspired you.8. Who speaks for your generation, and what are they saying? If you answer “no
one,” why? What needs to be said?9. Pearl S. Buck once said, "You cannot make yourself feel something you do not
feel, but you can make yourself do right in spite of your feelings." Tell us about an experience where you felt that you did the right thing in spite of your feelings.
(Next Step: Your Life After High School. http://www.nextstepmagazine.com/nextstep/articlePage1.aspx?
artId=25&categoryId=44)
Make Sure to Use Energy
Make Sure to Use Energy
Show confidence – you need to sound like a can-do personEven if you are talking about a
difficulty in your life, put a positive spin on it
Use energetic words – you need to sound like the Energizer BunnyShow what you can do and how you
can keep going with a little assistance
Show confidence – you need to sound like a can-do personEven if you are talking about a
difficulty in your life, put a positive spin on it
Use energetic words – you need to sound like the Energizer BunnyShow what you can do and how you
can keep going with a little assistance
A Short List of Buzz Words – A to L
A Short List of Buzz Words – A to L
Accomplish Award Build Commend Create Define Discover Design Earn Empower
Accomplish Award Build Commend Create Define Discover Design Earn Empower
Enhance Expand Explore Express Generate Help Influence Implement Impact Innovate
Enhance Expand Explore Express Generate Help Influence Implement Impact Innovate
A Short List of Buzz Words – M to Z
A Short List of Buzz Words – M to Z
Justify Motivate Mediate Navigate Participate Persuade Promote Pursue Raise Recommend
Justify Motivate Mediate Navigate Participate Persuade Promote Pursue Raise Recommend
Recruit Represent Start Steer Spark Tackle Teach Tutor Understand Verify
Recruit Represent Start Steer Spark Tackle Teach Tutor Understand Verify
Avoid the WhineAvoid the Whine Everyone has tragedies or difficulties in life Avoid talking about your own in the essay
unless you can put a positive twist on the story These tragedies or difficulties often help get a
scholarship – so how do you let the judges know about these situations? Use the letter of recommendation
Discuss the situation you want revealed with the person or people writing a letter of recommendation for the scholarship
If the person or people don’t know about your particular tragedy or difficulty, offer some proof so they feel comfortable including the information
Make sure the letter of recommendation explains how this tragedy or difficulty has not stopped you from being energetic and enthusiastic towards life’s challenges
Everyone has tragedies or difficulties in life Avoid talking about your own in the essay
unless you can put a positive twist on the story These tragedies or difficulties often help get a
scholarship – so how do you let the judges know about these situations? Use the letter of recommendation
Discuss the situation you want revealed with the person or people writing a letter of recommendation for the scholarship
If the person or people don’t know about your particular tragedy or difficulty, offer some proof so they feel comfortable including the information
Make sure the letter of recommendation explains how this tragedy or difficulty has not stopped you from being energetic and enthusiastic towards life’s challenges
The Problem Of Passive Voice
The Problem Of Passive Voice
Avoid Passive Voice – passive voice makes it sound like you are unsure of yourself. 10% of the essay can be in passive voice, but 90% should be not bePassive voice occurs in two different ways:
The subject receives action instead of taking action: The plans were made by me. Instead, say, I made the plans.
Use of words that sound unsure: I would use the scholarship to better my education. Instead, say, I will use the scholarship to better my education.
Avoid would, could, should – instead, use will, can, must
Avoid Passive Voice – passive voice makes it sound like you are unsure of yourself. 10% of the essay can be in passive voice, but 90% should be not bePassive voice occurs in two different ways:
The subject receives action instead of taking action: The plans were made by me. Instead, say, I made the plans.
Use of words that sound unsure: I would use the scholarship to better my education. Instead, say, I will use the scholarship to better my education.
Avoid would, could, should – instead, use will, can, must
This is Not the Time to Procrastinate
This is Not the Time to Procrastinate
A mediocre essay will take a couple of hours, but will not win any money
A good essay will take a couple of days, but still won’t win any money
A great essay will take a couple of weeks, but will more than likely win the scholarship Don’t put off writing the essay – start working on the
essay as soon as you decide to apply for the scholarship
Revise, edit, and then revise and edit again and again Make sure that your essay is read by at least 5
other people that you trust. Don’t ask someone who will tell you what you want to hear; ask someone who will tell you what you need to hear
Weigh the advice each person gives you – but make final decisions on changes yourself
A mediocre essay will take a couple of hours, but will not win any money
A good essay will take a couple of days, but still won’t win any money
A great essay will take a couple of weeks, but will more than likely win the scholarship Don’t put off writing the essay – start working on the
essay as soon as you decide to apply for the scholarship
Revise, edit, and then revise and edit again and again Make sure that your essay is read by at least 5
other people that you trust. Don’t ask someone who will tell you what you want to hear; ask someone who will tell you what you need to hear
Weigh the advice each person gives you – but make final decisions on changes yourself
Other Things to Keep in Mind
Other Things to Keep in Mind
Most scholarship essays limit the number of characters, words, or pages – honor this limit exactly
Avoid an unconventional format – you do not want to confuse the judges
Don’t tell the judges, show the judges Use vivid examples – tell a story
Be concise – use vivid verbs and nouns Avoid adverbs and indefinite pronouns
Spend a lot of time on the introduction – hook the reader immediately
Most scholarship essays limit the number of characters, words, or pages – honor this limit exactly
Avoid an unconventional format – you do not want to confuse the judges
Don’t tell the judges, show the judges Use vivid examples – tell a story
Be concise – use vivid verbs and nouns Avoid adverbs and indefinite pronouns
Spend a lot of time on the introduction – hook the reader immediately
An Important Warning
An Important Warning
Plagiarism is so easy to commit today, but you will get caught!
If you use someone else’s work without permission or if you improperly cite the source, it is plagiarism.
Plagiarism may not only cost you the scholarship, but may keep you out of the college of your choice.
There are many websites designed to help institutions catch plagiarism: Turnitin.com
Plagiarism is so easy to commit today, but you will get caught!
If you use someone else’s work without permission or if you improperly cite the source, it is plagiarism.
Plagiarism may not only cost you the scholarship, but may keep you out of the college of your choice.
There are many websites designed to help institutions catch plagiarism: Turnitin.com
Great Websites for Additional Help
Great Websites for Additional Help
Scholarship Help - http://www.scholarshiphelp.org/index.htm
Winning Essay Samples - http://www.essayedge.com/contentpartners/content/samp_scholarship.shtml
Next Step: Your Life After High School -
http://www.nextstepmagazine.com/nextstep/articlePage1.aspx?artId=25&categoryId=44
Scholarship.com: Find Money for College - http://www.scholarships.com/ScholarshipsEssay.aspx
Scholarship Help - http://www.scholarshiphelp.org/index.htm
Winning Essay Samples - http://www.essayedge.com/contentpartners/content/samp_scholarship.shtml
Next Step: Your Life After High School -
http://www.nextstepmagazine.com/nextstep/articlePage1.aspx?artId=25&categoryId=44
Scholarship.com: Find Money for College - http://www.scholarships.com/ScholarshipsEssay.aspx