Firstly I think that this magazine is good in that the title and the border around it is effective as it grasbs the potential buyers attention towards the magazine with the use of white on pink background.Secondly, I also think that the picture is a good shot for a school magazine, as it shows pils at a school working which sets the standard for a school magazine.

However I think that the content on the cover could be made better as the colour contrast between the writing and the clothes makes it hard to read , so naybe using a different coulor for normal text would have been adequate.

The buzzwords such as Russell Howard and beat stress stand out as they have been put at a bigger font comapred to the sub titles, also using celebrity endoresement such as Russell Howard would grab a wider range of audiencde due to his fan base.

Overall I think that this magazine is good but not great in the fact that it is laid well so that it is easier to read and follow by not having too much on the cover,as the text is laid out in puffs, which in some cases can cramp the text and that the use of

attractive colour such as pink grabs the potential buyers attention.

I think that this is good example of a fashion magazine, as the person in the cover is centre of the magazine and making direct eye contact with the potential buyer which is a way to interact with the buyer which can entice the buyer to buy the magazine.Secondly another key point is the use of colour; I like how majority of this picture is in black and white which gives the cover a sense of class as in seen adverts such as Emporio Armani but also that colour has been in added in places such as the eyes which makes you attracted to the eyes which helps make direct contact with the buyer.

However I think that the text could have been in a different colour as the layering the creator has put makes it hard to read as they don’t contrast as well. .

Overall I think that this magazine is a good example of magazine which the use of colour

which adds a sense of class to the magazine but also the layout is effective as its simple and easy to read.