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ESSAY
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CONGRATULATIONS! YOU JUST WON $10,000,000!
• WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO WITH ALL YOUR MONEY?
• CREATE A LIST OF ALL THE THINGS YOU WANT TO SPEND YOUR MONEY ON. (AT LEAST 20 THINGS!)
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EXAMPLE• PAY OFF STUDENT LOANS START A RESTAURANT GO TO CULINARY
SCHOOL
• PAY OFF HOUSE LOAN SEND KIDS TO PRIVATE SCHOOLS BUY A VACATION HOME
• BUY CLOTHES/SHOES GO TO NEW YORK CITY FLIP HOUSES
• BUY COMPUTER DONATE MONEY TO BUILD A YOUTH CENTER IN MT. GILEAD
• GO TO PARIS BUY A BOAT TAKE CLASSES ON DIFFERENT STUFF
• GIVE MONEY TO FAMILY BUILD A NEW HOUSE
• BUY A JEEP SAVE MONEY FOR CHILDREN
• PAY OFF OTHER CARS BUY A GAME SYSTEM
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TAKE YOUR LIST OF 20 ITEMS AND PUT THEM INTO CATEGORIES.
BILLS • HOUSE LOAN
• STUDENT LOANS
• CARS LOANS
• BUILD NEW HOUSE
• CHILDREN’S EDUCATION
VACATIONS • BUY A JEEP
• GO TO NEW YORK
• GO TO PARIS
• VACATION HOME
• BUY A BOAT
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FUTURE PLANS• FLIP HOUSES
• START A RESTAURANT
• GO TO CULINARY SCHOOL
• TAKE CLASSES ON DIFFERENT ACTIVITIES
INVESTMENTS/DONATIONS• GIVE MONEY TO FAMILY
• SAVE MONEY FOR CHILDREN
• BUILD YOUTH CENTER IN MG
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CREATE A THESIS STATEMENT
• YOUR THESIS STATEMENT SHOULD INCLUDE:
• ALL OF YOUR CATEGORIES (NOT YOUR INDIVIDUAL ITEMS)
• YOUR THESIS STATEMENT IS A SINGLE SENTENCE THAT EXPLICITLY TELLS YOUR READER WHAT YOUR ESSAY WILL ACCOMPLISH.
• SAMPLE THESIS STATEMENT:
• FROM THE WINNINGS I EARNED IN THE LOTTERY, I WILL SPEND MY 10 MILLION DOLLARS ON BILLS, VACATIONS, ENTERTAINMENT AND INVESTMENTS/DONATIONS.
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BODY PARAGRAPHS
• SHOULD START WITH THE TOPIC SENTENCE.
• EVERYTHING IN YOUR PARAGRAPH HAS TO BE UNDER THE CATEGORY THAT’S IN THE TOPIC SENTENCE.
• SHOULD INCLUDE EVERYTHING THAT IS ON YOUR GRAPHIC ORGANIZER.
• BE CREATIVE IN YOUR SENTENCES.
• STICK TO THE TOPIC!!
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NOT AN EXAMPLE…
• FIRST I WOULD PAY OFF BILLS. I WOULD PAY OFF THE HOUSE LOAN. I WOULD PAY OFF MY CAR LOANS. I WOULD BUILD A NEW HOUSE. I WOULD PAY FOR MY CHILDREN’S EDUCATION.
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EXAMPLE
• THE FIRST WAY I WOULD SPEND MONEY WOULD BE TO PAY OFF ALL MY BILLS. I HATE HAVING BILLS. THEY ARE A BURDEN. I WISH TO HAVE A LIFE FREE OF BILLS BUT I HAVE SO MANY HANGING OVER MY HEAD. I WOULD PAY OFF MY STUDENT LOANS SO IF I WANTED TO GO BACK TO SCHOOL, I COULD DEBT FREE. I WOULD PAY OFF MY CURRENT HOUSE LOAN AND THEN DEMOLISH IT AND BUILD A BRAND NEW HOUSE. I WOULD PAY OFF ALL OUR CAR LOANS AND KEEP THOSE CARS. I WOULD GO RIGHT OUT AND BUY A FOUR-DOOR RAG TOP JEEP, FULLY LOADED. I WOULD THEN PICK A SCHOOL FOR MY CHILDREN TO GO TO AND PAY ALL THEIR TUITION UP FRONT SO I WOULD NEVER HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT IT IN THE FUTURE.
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WRITING A HOOK SENTENCE
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WHAT IS A HOOK SENTENCES AND WHAT DOES IT DO?
• A HOOK SENTENCE IS THAT JUICY STRING OF WORDS THAT MAKE UP THE FIRST SENTENCE (OR TWO) OF YOUR WRITING PROJECT
• THE WORDS THAT GRAB YOUR READERS’ ATTENTION AND DON’T LET GO.
• GOOD HOOK SENTENCES SAY, “DROP EVERYTHING YOU’RE DOING AND READ ME RIGHT NOW,” WITHOUT ACTUALLY COMING OUT AND JUST SAYING THAT.
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WHAT IS A HOOK SENTENCES AND WHAT DOES IT DO?
• A HOOK SENTENCE IS THAT JUICY STRING OF WORDS THAT MAKE UP THE FIRST SENTENCE (OR TWO) OF YOUR WRITING PROJECT
• THE WORDS THAT GRAB YOUR READERS’ ATTENTION AND DON’T LET GO.
• GOOD HOOK SENTENCES SAY, “DROP EVERYTHING YOU’RE DOING AND READ ME RIGHT NOW,” WITHOUT ACTUALLY COMING OUT AND JUST SAYING THAT.
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FOUR SIMPLE STEPS TO WRITE A HOOK SENTENCE
• STEP 1: IDENTIFY YOUR AUDIENCE
• ASK YOURSELF THESE QUESTIONS:
• WHO IS MY AUDIENCE?
• DO I HAVE TO CAPTIVE AUDIENCE?
• WHAT MATTERS TO MY AUDIENCE?
• STEP 2: IDENTIFY THE PURPOSE OF YOUR WRITING
• ANSWER THESE TWO QUESTIONS:
• HOW DO I WANT MY AUDIENCE TO FEEL?
• WHAT DO I WANT MY AUDIENCE TO TAKE AWAY?
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FOUR SIMPLE STEPS TO WRITE A HOOK SENTENCE CONTINUED…
STEP 3: CHOOSE YOUR HOOK WISELY
STEP 4: CRAFT YOUR HOOK
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CONCLUSION
• A CONCLUSION THAT DOES NOT SIMPLY RESTATE THE THESIS, BUT READDRESSES IT IN LIGHT OF THE EVIDENCE PROVIDED.
• DO NOT INTRODUCE ANY NEW INFORMATION
• SUM UP “YOUR FINDINGS”