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WRITING PART 1. AN ESSAY (1)

Your class has taken part in a seminar on whether the education system does enough to help Young people to find jobs which fit their abilities and interest.

Young adults looking for specific jobs with particular characteristics after finishing their degrees has been in the middle of discussion for the last years. For many young people finding a job after having specialized in a specific field has a myriad of difficulties. In the present paper the methods provided by universities will be discussed.

In the seminar we have been taken part, some important methods applied by different organizations have been discussed. One of the most effective methods we have been commenting on is the great variety of courses provided by the organization, in the present case the universities and high schools of the country, and how professionals lead them. However well you think you are guiding your professional life, some need from employees with years of experience is required. The courses were bound to students of different fields such as education, science, engineering, medicine or linguistics and the prices were suitable for all the members who were enrolled on the courses.

Eventhough some of the students enrolled in the seminar were clearly opposite to my opinion related to the grade of satisfaction of the courses, there is the need to highlight the work experience part of the courses. There is no doubt of the usefulness of its part although they were not applied in the majority of the courses. However my personal satisfaction, some of the students were not completely wrong. Few courses were imposed by the university, having no relation with our future jobs and not being worthy for students because of its theoretical classes, so no sooner had we finished the courses the complaints started to be listened.

From a personal point of view, I would argue that having had the opportunity of experimenting my future job before having finished my degree has been a very useful experience, but some improvements have to be done in order to get a general satisfaction.