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English/Composition
Catalina PeraGrade 9
Period 5-7
Commentary
Definition
• Thoughts
• Opinions
• Ideas
• Conclusions
• Theories
Strong Evidence
• Character’s Perspective
• Deciphers emotions
• Analyzes why
• Makes prediction
Example
“Through this, it is clear that Juliet feels alone and helpless; perhaps even
unwanted and confused. These combined feelings make her yearn for relief from the
pressure imposed by society and her parents, even if the only relief is death.
Death is an ultimate tragedy; she is showing signs of nearing a catastrophe.”
Example
“Through this, it is clear that Juliet feels alone and helpless; perhaps even
unwanted and confused. These combined feelings make her yearn for relief from the
pressure imposed by society and her parents, even if the only relief is death.
Death is an ultimate tragedy; she is showing signs of nearing a catastrophe.”
Character’s Feelings
Example
“Through this, it is clear that Juliet feels alone and helpless; perhaps even
unwanted and confused. These combined feelings make her yearn for relief from the
pressure imposed by society and her parents, even if the only relief is death.
Death is an ultimate tragedy; she is showing signs of nearing a catastrophe.”
Character’s Thoughts
Example
“Through this, it is clear that Juliet feels alone and helpless; perhaps even
unwanted and confused. These combined feelings make her yearn for relief from the
pressure imposed by society and her parents, even if the only relief is death.
Death is an ultimate tragedy; she is showing signs of nearing a catastrophe.”
Prediction
Essential Skill 5: Evidence
Definition
• Supporting statements
• Background information
• Definitions
• Facts
• Proof
Proper Example
“Her extreme despair is demonstrated when she states, ‘…If everything else fails, at least I have the power to take my own
life.’ (Act 3, Scene v, Page 69), showing just how far she has been driven in terms of
irrationality.”
Proper Example
“Her extreme despair is demonstrated when she states, ‘…If everything else fails, at least I have the power to take my own
life.’ (Act 3, Scene v, Page 69), showing just how far she has been driven in terms of
irrationality.”
Proper Example
“Her extreme despair is demonstrated when she states, ‘…If everything else fails, at least I have the power to take my own
life.’ (Act 3, Scene v, Page 69), showing just how far she has been driven in terms of
irrationality.”
Lead-in
Proper Example
“Her extreme despair is demonstrated when she states, ‘…If everything else fails, at least I have the power to take my own life.’ (Act 3, Scene v, Page 69), showing just
how far she has been driven in terms of irrationality.”
Quote
Citation
Proper Example
“Her extreme despair is demonstrated when she states, ‘…If everything else fails, at least I have the power to take my own
life.’ (Act 3, Scene v, Page 69), showing just how far she has been driven in terms of
irrationality.”
Weaker Evidence
“During their conversation, Juliet laments, ‘...Give me some advice about the current
situation. Or watch. Caught between these two difficulties, I’ll act like a judge with my bloody
knife. I will truly and honorably resolve the situation that you can’t fix…I want to die if what you say isn’t another solution.’ (Act 4, scene I,
Page 69).”
Weaker Evidence
“During their conversation, Juliet laments, ‘...Give me some advice about the current
situation. Or watch. Caught between these two difficulties, I’ll act like a judge with my bloody
knife. I will truly and honorably resolve the situation that you can’t fix…I want to die if what you say isn’t another solution.’ (Act 4, scene I,
Page 69).”
Lead-in
Edited Evidence
“During their conversation, Juliet laments her situation, stating, ‘...Give me some advice about the current situation. Or watch. Caught between these two difficulties, I’ll act like a judge with my bloody knife. I will truly and honorably resolve the situation that you can’t fix…I want to die if
what you say isn’t another solution.’ (Act 4, scene I, Page 69).”
Edited Evidence
“During their conversation, Juliet laments her situation, stating, ‘...Give me some advice about the current situation. Or watch. Caught between these two difficulties, I’ll act like a judge with my bloody knife. I will truly and honorably resolve the situation that you can’t fix…I want to die if
what you say isn’t another solution.’ (Act 4, scene I, Page 69).”
Reflection
Victories
Honors Freakonomics
Paper
Analyzing Poetry
Struggles
Templating
Annotating Factual Articles
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