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English III
April 30, 2013Ms. Roule
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Bellringer
• From yesterday’s notes…What are three ways to strengthen your personal statement?
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To find the video on youtube:
• Search for “personal statements” and find the one with the blue screen from Purdue Univ. Online Writing Lab.
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Agenda
•Bellringer•Personal Statement - Writing Day
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Personal Statement Prompt
• Handout• Pay attention to criteria and
deadlines!• In-class participation grade today
for staying on task! I will check in at the end of class.
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Personal Statement Structure
• Reviewing examples from yesterday’s notes…
• Past, Present and Future! (Include them ALL in your statement, and connect them to you and your goals!)
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Sample Outline 1(each pt a paragraph)• I want to do X in my career. (future)• A was the first time I learned about X. (past)• B and C prepared me academically and
practically for X. (past)• I believe your opportunity will help me
accomplish X because (present)• While pursuing this opportunity, I hope to
specialize in D. (present)
(A, B and C could be the past events that you’ve written about in your pre-writing, etc.)
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Sample Outline 2• I am applying to your program because of A,
B, and C opportunities (present)• While in your program, I would like to work
with X, Y and Z faculty members. (present)• I am prepared for this program because of D
and F experiences. (past)• This program will help me to reach my goal of
Z. (future)
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Sample Outline 3• My preparation for this opportunity
includes A, B, and C. (past)• I am applying to your specific program
because of D, E and F. (present)• This program will help me achieve my
goal of Z. (future)
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What are you being graded on TODAY?
• Rough Outline – sentence format like today’s examples (indicate past-present-future)
• Participation Grade – on task and productive! (losing points for electronics, excessive talking, etc.)