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Editing/ Evaluating
Ridwan Arifin, M.Hum.STBA LIA
Sekolah Tinggi Bahasa Asing LIAEnglish Indonesia Translation Workshop
2011
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What is ‘editing’? Editing = to edit Editor = noun person
Editing is a way of thinking critically and reading carefully
Proofreading (also proof-reading) traditionally means reading a proof copy of a text in order to detect and correct any errors. Modern proofreading often requires reading copy at earlier stages as well.
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The Goals?
Effective Communication
Accuracy, clarity, consistency,
reliability of the news
It does not sound likea Translation
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Job Descriptions as an Editor To check and improve completed
stories and write headlines To check facts, spelling, and grammar
for handling major revisions To check naturalness, style and
equivalence (in translation) To check Cohesion and Coherence To check the Readers Target (TL
oriented)
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Any special skills required?
Senses of Knowledge Skills
# Language and design# Structure & Precision
Of communication# Leadership & Good
Writing
# Story organisation # Grammar (EYD, TataBahasa Baku Bahasa
Indonesia)# Style
# Language (Diction,Collocation, ConnotationFigures of speech etc.)
# Visual Skills# Ability to evaluate
Information# Language and Words
skills# Knowledge of
Audience
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Jobs as an Editor Copy editor Tape editor (Broadcast and Online) Design/ Layout editor (Print and Online) News Producer/ writer (Broadcast) News Editor (Copy Chief) Book Editor (Translated and Non
Translated) Etc.
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Preparing to be an editor1. The ability to think clearly and critically
about issues and events2. The vision to measure the story’s impact in
terms of meaning and relevance to audience
3. The determination to accuracy, clarity, fairness and balance.
4. The skill to turn ‘disorganised’ stories into powerful ones
5. The ability to organise and work cooperatively with others.
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Editor’s AttitudeTaking initiative having curiosity, pride,
attention to detail, sense of fair play, willingness to make tough decision.
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Editors Challenges Word bias Figure of speech Word and cultural equivalence Diction Punctuation Cohesion and Coherence MD-DM pattern Ambiguity (ketaksaan) Terminology Naturalness
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Editing Steps1. Reading for understanding2. Improving the organization and focus3. Editing for accuracy4. Editing for grammar and style5. Editing for language and sentence
structure
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Editors’ Tools A good dictionary : Webster’s, Cambridge,
Oxford, Enchols KBBI edisi keempat Thesaurus Bahasa Indonesia (Eko
Endarmoko) Tata Bahasa Baku Bahasa Indonesia EYD Google/ Internet Encyclopedia Etc.