Editing process

Towards the end of my final product, I changed my double page spread to more obvious conventions. As I felt it needed to look more secure.

First product

Second, complete product

= The arrows show which forms and conventions I have changed and manipulated.

Mast head is a larger font, rotated slightly and colour has changed from yellow to black, and pink

This looks more professional to my original spread. It stands out much more, as it larger however it is positioned dominantly on the left hand side as this makes it look bolder

The text explaining what the cover story is about has been expanded so it covers more of the spread. It is also larger and bolder compared to the question and answers which gives it more a conventional style compared to it all being the same size

The image which dominates the right hand side of the page is over lapped by the text and is blurred into the background which shows that the celebrities information is just as important as her appearance

The darker shade of pink on the older product was too over whelming so I used a lighter shade of pink so it gave it a more subtle tone, which adds onto the effect of being girly and delicate which is what the target audience is attracted to

This process has taught me is that simple conventions change the look.