In my ideal world...

... There is magic...

... There is no sad person...

... There is free life...

... There aren’t hungry people...

... There are happy animals...

... There are crazy people...

... There are impossible things...

... There is an underground world...

There are sea monsters that are not evil, they are good...

THE END

THE ENDAuthor: Mateus Florentino BarbosaEditorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: BitskoffPublisher: www.storybird.comDate: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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