Persuasive Essay

November 2012

Dogs are Awesome

Catharina Brunner Lopez

6th

of November

Dogs are caring, loving and special animals, these are three reasons to get one; but if you

continue to read you will find out another three great reasons to get one: first, he would guard

the house, I could play and have lots of fun with him and third, Kobo would have a playmate

too!!! Can you imagine how happy I would be if I got one?

If we get another dog he would guard the house. If a robber would attempt to rob he would bark

to tell me “There is somebody here!!! He would guard the house to show his love for me. If we

get a black dog, robbers would get scared to even attempt to come in the house. He could save

our life! He would scare the robber away and hurt the robber if needed but that won’t happen

because he wouldn’t even let the robber in!

I would have lots of fun with him, because if we get a German shepherd, he would love to play

fetch with him, race him and I could lie down with him. He would be really cute and since I like

dogs he would be even cuter in my eyes. We would get him as a puppy and his big puppy eyes

would make a big friendship with him. When I show him my feelings, he will show me his, by

guarding the house. It would also be healthier for me because I would spend more time outside

feeding, playing and adoring him.

Getting another dog would mean that Kobo would get more tired. He would be racing Kobo,

playing fetch together and they would become friends. Additionally all dogs (including Eddie)

would have lot’s of fun together playing, caring and worshipping each other. Kobo would

become closer friends with Eddie and even if Kobo wouldn’t she would be too exhausted to

fight with Eddie for many reasons. Having another dog would mean that we wouldn't’t have to

race Eddie to the vet and additionally getting a male dog would stop the fighting with the two

other dogs.

These were three VERY good reasons to get another dog. Having another dog in the family

would be like welcoming another brother in the family. With him Kobo could play and have

lots of fun; and even better I would too!!! The main reason of getting another dog is because he

could guard the house, save our life and love us!!! That is why we should get another dog.

The more the Merrier!!!