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The tunnel written by Anthony
Browne is a story about a girl an
a boy who fight all the time. One
day their mother grows impatient
and sends them outside. If you
want to know what happens buy
this book! Will this summary make the reader
want to read this book?
Does this summary create mystery?
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Anthony Browne puts Fairy
tales because when he was
small he loved Fairy tales.
• Is this comment clear? Will the reader understand what you are trying to say?
• Where does he “put” the Fairy tales?
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Anthony Browne uses dark colours
when the girl is afraid and bright
colours when the girl is not afraid.
• Will the reader understand what you are trying to say?
• Can you give an example to explain your idea?
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I think this is a lovely book.
• Can we use “I” in our book review?
• Does this opinion tell the reader why it is a lovely book? What do we need to add?
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Anthony Browne draws clothes
on the gorillas.
• Is this a comment?
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I love this book because it has
bright colours and nice details.
• Can we use “I” in the personal opinion?
• Is the writer giving a reason why he loves this book? Is the reader going to understand why he loves this book?
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This story is called Look what I’ve
got. This book is written by Anthony
Browne. This story is about…
How can we make these three sentences become one sentence?
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In all the parts of the book one
side is happy and the other side
is sad.
• Can the reader understand what the writer is trying to say? How could we make it better?
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Anthony Browne tells the story
with the face of the character.
• What does this mean? Can the reader understand what the writer is trying to say if he has never read a book by AB?