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In my holidays, I did lots of things. On January, first, I went to Mar azul because friends of my father invited us. Then I went 15 days to Bariloche. It was very funny I went with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other cousin. It was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul because friends of my father invited us. Then I went 15

days to Bariloche I t was very funny I went with my family and my

cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other cousin. I t was

beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche.

In the future I want go there again but in winter, to skiing. Then I

went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country club where I

palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre with my family.

Finally, when March started I must to go to school so we came back

to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no option.

Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and we

laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father invited us. Then I went 15

days to Bariloche I t was very funny I went with my family and my

cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other cousin. I t was

beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche.

In the future I want go there again but in winter, to skiing. Then I

went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country club where I

palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre with my family.

Finally, when March started I must to go to school so we came back

to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no option.

Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and we

laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche I t was very funny I went with my family

and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other cousin. I t was

beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche.

In the future I want go there again but in winter, to skiing. Then I

went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country club where I

palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre with my family.

Finally, when March started I must to go to school so we came back

to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no option.

Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and we

laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny I went with

my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

cousin. I t was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in winter, to

skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country

club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre

with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to school so

we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´ t fell like studying but I had no

option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and

we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with

my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

cousin. I t was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in winter, to

skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country

club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre

with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to school so

we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no

option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and

we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went

with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an

other cousin. I t was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in

winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos”

country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to

theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to

school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying

but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends

every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went

with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

sp cousin. I t was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in winter, to

skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country

club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre

with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to school so

we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no

option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and

we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went

with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

sp cousin pc. I t was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in

winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos”

country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to

theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to

school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but

I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every

day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went

with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

sp cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in

winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos”

country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to

theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to

school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but

I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every

day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went

with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

sp cousin pc. It was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I

like very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in

winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos”

country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to

theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to

school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but

I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every

day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then

I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went

with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other

sp cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I

like very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go there again but in

winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos”

country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to

theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to

school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but

I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every

day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I

went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I

went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with

my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos”

country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to

theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to

school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but

I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every

day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we

went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to

go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like

studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my

friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we

went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to

go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like

studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my

friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to

go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like

studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my

friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must

to go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like

studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my

friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p It was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin

pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I

must to go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like

studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my

friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin

pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I

must to wp/vt go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t

fell like studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I

see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin

pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I

must to wp/vt go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t

fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because

I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin

pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I

must to wp/vt go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t

fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I am happy

because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went

15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my

family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin

pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very

much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in

winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San

Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we

went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I

must to wp/vt go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t

fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I am happy

because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.

In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went

to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I

went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with

my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp

cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like

very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want wp go there again but in

winter, to skiing vf. Then I went to my weekend building ww in

“San Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends.After

that we went to theatre with my family. Npn Finally, when March

started I must to go wp/vf to school so we came back to Buenos

Aires. I didn´t fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I

am happy because I see my friends every day and we laugh all

time.

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In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin pc . It was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche. wo

In my holidays, I did lots of things. In J anuary, first, I went to Mar Azul because my father’s friends invited us. Then I went to

Bariloche for 15 days. I t was very funny! I went there with my family and my cousin. Then we went to the wedding of an other cousin. It was beautiful. I did rafting too, it was so cool! I like Bariloche very much

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