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Dear Diary,

Today is Wednesday 16thOctober, and I am in need of some effectie hel!"

#oneliness, inde!endence and enerable are the $ords that describe my inner feelin%s

ri%ht no$" This has left me $ith lo$ self&esteem and to be stru%%lin% at this !recise

moment" 'ein% !re%nant has affected me mentally and !hysically, leain% my

thou%hts blan( not (no$in% $hat to do) I mean brin%in% a ne$ %eneration into this

$orld re*uires a number of res!onsibilities and hain% the correct %uidance" +o$ can

I ada!t to his situation $hen I cant een ta(e this into account $ithin my o$n life"

This is a !eriod you %o throu%h $hen you hae e-!erienced a lot about life, hain% a

career that can financially su!!ort you in eerythin% you do" 'ut this unfortunately

$asnt the case, my heart is tellin% me that Im not ready to %o throu%h $ith this

!re%nancy, as much as hain% a baby is a $onderful thin% (no$in% that youe made

somethin% so s!ectacular, I .ust hae self&doubt and can !redict that I $ould face

serious conse*uences if I $ent throu%h $ith this, resolin% me to ruin my life, as $ell

as my childs life" Im not a selfish character, but I hae to do $hat is ri%ht for me and

if that means in hain% to !roceed in abortin% the baby, then so be it" This has been

$ithout a doubt the bi%%est and hardest decision I hae eer come across in my life,

but usually youn% mothers al$ays hae issues and drama bet$een family and friends

$hich creates tension" I $ould be definitely in that cate%ory seein% that I am only 1/,

I .ust cant do that es!ecially to my family" They dont need this, (no$in% that mymum and dad are in a bad !lace ri%ht no$, hain% ar%uments and disa%reements

$hich resulted in my dad leain% me and my mum, liin% far a$ay in a lo$&middle

class area" Ma(in% mista(es is a natural lesson in life, but too many can lead to

ne%atiity, hain% the life you didnt $ish for" A !rime e-am!le of this is my dad, as

he is in a financial crisis consistently !leasin% for su!!ort to my mum" I refuse to end

u! in that state0 I .ust need to e-it this !roblem sooner rather than later I need a $ay

out

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Dear Diary,

Today is Wednesday 16thOctober, the sun is %leamin%, not a cloud in the s(y"

+a!!iness, e-citement and confidence are $hat demonstrate my !ersonality trait of

ho$ I am feelin%" This uni*ue e-!erience has arisen at the early sta%es of my life,

$ithout any !lannin% or intentions bein% inoled" Discoerin% that I am !re%nant has

contributed to hae a !ositie im!act to my life" This %ies me the ur%e to ada!t to

this situation becomin% more mature as a !erson, and to be res!onsible of my actions"

On many occasions I hae $itnessed youn% adults e-hibit self&doubt about bein%

!re%nant $hich has led to abortion or ado!tion" Also, hain% lac( of res!onsibility

about the child inolin% the %randmother bein% the mother fi%ure" +o$eer, I haeself&belief and I hae !romised to my family and friends that I $ould do all I can to

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!roide for my child, not bein% one of those ty!ical youn% adults" Moreoer, I (no$

this e-!erience is better for $hen your older and settled do$n0 hain% your o$n

facilities and a lifelon% career" 'ut, I hae the motiation to continue my education at

school, and to discoer a .ob o!!ortunity $here I can $or( and %ain financial income"

Althou%h I hae su!!ort from my family, it $ould be hel!ful for my child and me if I

had a !art time .ob" My mother and father are role models fi%ures and ins!irin% to mebecause of ho$ they raised my u!" They both %enerated all their efforts to ma(e sure

that I $as brou%ht u! healthy, (no$led%eable and in a safe enironment I call my

home" This is somethin% I re*uire to achiee and be the same for $hen I raise my

child" As a result, I (no$ I am only 1/ and the eents for $hen my ne$ %eneration is

born may become difficult at times" +o$eer, I see that difficult e-!eriences are a

natural !rocess in eeryday life, no matter $hat a%e you are" This is somethin% I $ill

%et throu%h successfully, becomin% a fantastic mother fi%ure for my child"