Draft 1 Draft 2 Draft 3 Draft 4

We didn’t have 3 ideas as an individual to work to the final idea

We have 4 long ideas in one slide, too much text

The slides for the ideas are much better with 1 slide each of the ideas, but no evaluation – www/ebi

The ideas are all in separate slides and have an evaluation

The whole presentation are incomplete, and not organised

The presentation is still not organised

The presentation is nearly organised, but missing a slide ‘G’

The presentation is much more organised with all of the slides are finished

There is no Target Research slide – researching the audiences, questionnaire

There is a target audience slide but basic information

Have research for the target audience and the interview, but interview is hard to read, graph is hard to read

There is research about target audience and different slides for the interviews

There are no slides for the location, props, characters, introducing the actors

Have the slides with pictures of the location, props, actors, and characters but no annotation

Have slides of the characters and actors, but it’s all in one slide and not in different sectors each. Have pictures and annotation. There is slides for props with annotation, and location with no annotation

Have own slides for the character/actor, props, location, costume, with pictures and annotation

There is script for the opening sequence but wrong structure

There is script for the opening sequence but wrong structure

There is script for the opening sequence but wrong structure

The script for the opening sequence is all in correct structure

There is no Film Distribution There is no film distribution slide There is a film distribution slide, but the company is too big – must find a small British film distribution company

There is a film distribution slide with the draft two of the film distributors which is a British Small distribution company

There is no fonts slide for the credits and titles

There is no fonts slide for the credits and titles

There is a font slide, but the font is too basic and must choose a better font and chose inspirational fonts from opening sequence of different films

There is a font slide with much better chosen font for our title and credits. Chosen font is Harlow Solid Italic and added another slide for the inspirational fonts from other films and screenshots.

There is no genre and convention slides with research to know that you understand your genre and

There is no genre and convention slides with research to know that you understand your genre and what

Have genre and convention slides with diagrams, but its basic information – must make a table

Have a diagram for the genre slide and a table for the convention slides with explanation of how are we

what the conventions are the conventions are with the different conventions of your chosen genre and put different films with it

going to develop the conventions for our Opening Sequence, and added films to back it up