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class #7 return memo punctilio & quiz 2 clip of the day jokes danglers informative messages bad news workshop business plan video

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class #7

• return memo punctilio & quiz 2

• clip of the day

• jokes

• danglers

• informative messages

• bad news workshop

• business plan video

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memo punctilio

• background, purpose, preview opening

• effective use of headings and lists

• adequate, useful content that deals with boss’s need

• your summary is more useful than original article

• model

criteria/objectives:

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clip of the day

from Wall Street 1987

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danglers

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Walking down the street, the fire hydrant sprayed John and Mary.

As the marketing director for the Seattle Times, I know you want what’s best for your readers.

Dumpy and overweight, the vet says our dog needs more exercise.

At the age of ten, my father bought me a puppy.

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sentence style coursepack p. 17

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yang vs. yin hot vs. cool

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active = yang

passive = yin

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informative messages

(p. 25 in coursepak)

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the business plan

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