Cover Letter Review: Peer 1

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Cover Lettter Peer Review From: Gustavo Tajada Peredaf Preliminary Research Yes it does determine what the employ is looking for. Maybe should take a little about some specific in what the company requires. Address Doesn’t address a specific person, but I think its okay because the company or the job link may not specify who that person is. Introduction Does convey that you like the company. Clearly defines what you want if given the position. Would recommend different types of things you learned maybe from a class. Qualifications Uses some examples from resume in cover letter, but does not included all which is good so they can read the actually resume. Closing In your closing I would included a quick plan if given an opportunity to get the job, like what goals you would have. Prose Great organization, easy to follow, and has a good confident tone. Would recommend just using strong stronger verbs. Overall good grammar and spelling. Appearance

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Technical CommunicationENGL-2116-090Fall 2015

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Cover Lettter Peer Review From: Gustavo Tajada Peredaf

Preliminary Research

Yes it does determine what the employ is looking for. Maybe should take a little about some specific in what the company requires.

Address

Doesn’t address a specific person, but I think its okay because the company or the job link may not specify who that person is.

Introduction

Does convey that you like the company. Clearly defines what you want if given the position. Would recommend different types of things you learned maybe from a class.

Qualifications

Uses some examples from resume in cover letter, but does not included all which is good so they can read the actually resume.

Closing

In your closing I would included a quick plan if given an opportunity to get the job, like what goals you would have.

Prose

Great organization, easy to follow, and has a good confident tone. Would recommend just using strong stronger verbs. Overall good grammar and spelling.

Appearance

Looks neat and organized. Does included everything that a business letter would include.

Ethics

I would described just a little more about your qualifications.

Overall

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Did a great job! Showed great communication.