Cover Letter Review: Peer 1
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Cover Lettter Peer Review From: Gustavo Tajada Peredaf
Preliminary Research
Yes it does determine what the employ is looking for. Maybe should take a little about some specific in what the company requires.
Address
Doesn’t address a specific person, but I think its okay because the company or the job link may not specify who that person is.
Introduction
Does convey that you like the company. Clearly defines what you want if given the position. Would recommend different types of things you learned maybe from a class.
Qualifications
Uses some examples from resume in cover letter, but does not included all which is good so they can read the actually resume.
Closing
In your closing I would included a quick plan if given an opportunity to get the job, like what goals you would have.
Prose
Great organization, easy to follow, and has a good confident tone. Would recommend just using strong stronger verbs. Overall good grammar and spelling.
Appearance
Looks neat and organized. Does included everything that a business letter would include.
Ethics
I would described just a little more about your qualifications.
Overall
Did a great job! Showed great communication.