Mindy Nelson

Emre Koyuncu

English 106

11 December 2011

Cover Letter

For assignment two, there were lots of mistakes that I made. With 4 exams that week,

that assignment got put on the backburner till I got through my exams. I knew it wasn’t my best

and from the comment I got on it, I knew it definitely wasn’t my best and I could have done way

better. My paragraphs tended to be drawn out and have way too much detail and they lost focus

from the original idea. With assignment three, I stuck with the main point. Although I somehow

forgot my conclusion, my second assignment turned out much better than my first, because I put

more effort into it.

Assignment 2

Any feedback I get on assignments, I put to use. I take both positive and negative

criticism to better improve my work. Any comments both from the peer review and from you

greatly influence my work. For the revisions part of assignment two, I took into consideration all

the comments that were made on my paper and the comments during my conference sessions. I

want to make my work better and improve my writing. I went through my paper and corrected

the mistakes I made and added a few things here and there. I also added my conclusion

paragraph, which I somehow left off the first time.

Assignment 3

For assignment three, I honestly did not edit much. I went back and added a title page to

my presentation. I also went in and added a conclusion slide, with another picture and my

conclusion paragraph. I did not change my color scheme or anything like that. In my rationale

paper, I went and added more about the edits I made to the pictures. I talked more about what

techniques I used in photoshop to edit my pictures, such as changing brightness, saturation,

exposure, etc. I also talked about how I used desaturation to focus on one object in the picture

and make that object stand out against the background.