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ES1531/GEK 1549 Critical Thinking and Writing AY2014-15 Semester 2 Week 2 Tutorial 1: Course Information @ES1531/GEK1549 CELC, NUS Page 1 Introduction to ES1531/GEK1549 Critical Thinking and Writing As the title implies, the main purpose of this course is to develop your critical thinking and communication skillsboth in terms of your mental capacity for analyzing ideas, information and arguments, and in terms of your ability to express those thoughts in writing. With the aim of fostering independent thought and critical enquiry, this course will inevitably prove challenging. You will be required to do research and assess the sources that you read critically. Your tutor will be there to guide you, but he or she will not be ‘spoon-feeding’ you information. What you get out of the course depends very much on what you put in. Tutorials only work well when students have properly prepared for them. In other words, by the end of the module, you have learned to: apply critical thinking skills such as asking relevant and critical questions, evaluating and constructing arguments, identifying problems, analysing causes and finding solutions, thinking about your own reasoning; present arguments and opinions in writing, give oral feedback and participate in class discussions by using logic and sound reasoning; read texts critically; write clearly, concisely and critically; give constructive criticism and feedback to peers; work effectively in a team; and reflect and self-correct. These skills acquired can be further honed in your next few years at NUS, and in your working life. The educational approach used in this course is seminar/tutorial rather than a lecture style. Because most of our discussions and other activities will be done in small groups, your active participation is essential. In this “student-centred” teaching/learning environment, you will have the opportunity to: share your ideas with others, ask questions, provide peer feedback, debate issues and orally present and defend during class; practice critical thinking and problem-solving strategies, reflective learning and academic writing as you consider the content topics and conduct research; and collaborate actively with your classmates on classroom activities and course assignments, via the IVLE and other internet-based platforms, meetings and oral peer reviews. IVLE and Internet-based communication The IVLE contains all the information and tutorial notes on your course. The course materials are organized according to tutorials. All assignments are to be uploaded into the IVLE workbins. Google Drive will be used for Assignment 2 discussion, writing and editing. Discussion forums, IVLE chats or any other internet-based communication channels chosen by your tutor will be used to discuss ES1531/GEK1549 matters with you.

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    Introduction to ES1531/GEK1549 Critical Thinking and Writing

    As the title implies, the main purpose of this course is to develop your critical thinking and

    communication skills both in terms of your mental capacity for analyzing ideas, information

    and arguments, and in terms of your ability to express those thoughts in writing. With the aim of

    fostering independent thought and critical enquiry, this course will inevitably prove challenging.

    You will be required to do research and assess the sources that you read critically. Your tutor

    will be there to guide you, but he or she will not be spoon-feeding you information. What you

    get out of the course depends very much on what you put in. Tutorials only work well when

    students have properly prepared for them.

    In other words, by the end of the module, you have learned to:

    apply critical thinking skills such as asking relevant and critical questions, evaluating

    and constructing arguments, identifying problems, analysing causes and finding

    solutions, thinking about your own reasoning;

    present arguments and opinions in writing, give oral feedback and participate in class

    discussions by using logic and sound reasoning;

    read texts critically;

    write clearly, concisely and critically;

    give constructive criticism and feedback to peers;

    work effectively in a team; and

    reflect and self-correct.

    These skills acquired can be further honed in your next few years at NUS, and in your working

    life.

    The educational approach used in this course is seminar/tutorial rather than a lecture style.

    Because most of our discussions and other activities will be done in small groups, your active

    participation is essential. In this student-centred teaching/learning environment, you will have

    the opportunity to:

    share your ideas with others, ask questions, provide peer feedback, debate issues and

    orally present and defend during class;

    practice critical thinking and problem-solving strategies, reflective learning and academic

    writing as you consider the content topics and conduct research; and

    collaborate actively with your classmates on classroom activities and course assignments,

    via the IVLE and other internet-based platforms, meetings and oral peer reviews.

    IVLE and Internet-based communication

    The IVLE contains all the information and tutorial notes on your course. The course materials

    are organized according to tutorials. All assignments are to be uploaded into the IVLE workbins.

    Google Drive will be used for Assignment 2 discussion, writing and editing. Discussion forums,

    IVLE chats or any other internet-based communication channels chosen by your tutor will be

    used to discuss ES1531/GEK1549 matters with you.

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    Tutorial Notes and Readings

    You are expected to download all the tutorial notes from the IVLE. You may bring hard copies

    or soft copies in your laptop/tablet though not on your smartphones. This is because the tutorial

    notes are not formatted for mobile viewing. You should make a point to annotate your readings,

    write your answers before class or take notes during class.

    There are no textbooks, but you are to review the suggested list of sources (which includes

    videoclips) found in the tutorial notes, and complete the tasks before class as suggested in the

    activities section of the handouts.

    Statements and E-Resources on Plagiarism

    It is important to note that plagiarism is an academic offence that is taken very seriously by the

    University, as stated in the NUS Code of Student Conduct (Clause 4) and the notice on

    plagiarism on the NUS website:

    NUS Code of Student Conduct (Clause 4)

    The University takes a strict view of cheating in any form, deceptive fabrication,

    plagiarism and violation of intellectual property and copyright laws. Any student who is

    found to have engaged in such misconduct will be subject to disciplinary action by the

    University.

    Source: NUS Office of Student Affairs website (www.nus.edu.sg/osa/coc)

    NUS Notice on the NUS Code of Conduct

    NUS students are expected to maintain and uphold the highest standards of integrity and

    honesty at all times, as well as embrace community standards, diversity and mutual respect

    for one another, both within the University and the wider Singapore community.

    The Code of Student Conduct (published by the Office of Student Affairs) is intended to

    guide students' conduct in both the academic and non-academic aspects of their University

    life by providing an overview of the behavior generally expected of them as a member of

    the University community.

    One of the fundamental principles on which this Code is based is that of "Academic,

    Professional, and Personal Integrity".

    In this respect, it is important to note that all students share the responsibility for upholding

    the academic standards and reputation of the University. Academic honesty is a

    prerequisite condition in the pursuit and acquisition of knowledge.

    http://www.nus.edu.sg/osa/coc

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    Academic dishonesty is any misrepresentation with the intent to deceive or failure to

    acknowledge the source or falsification of information or inaccuracy of statements or

    cheating at examinations/tests or inappropriate use of resources. There are many forms of

    academic dishonesty and plagiarism is one of them. Plagiarism is generally defined as the

    practice of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own' (The

    New Oxford Dictionary of English). The University does not condone plagiarism.

    Students should adopt this rule - You have the obligation to make clear to the assessor

    which is your own work, and which is the work of others. Otherwise, your assessor is

    entitled to assume that everything being presented for assessment is being presented as

    entirely your own work. This is a minimum standard. In addition, the following guidelines

    will provide some assistance.

    When using the ideas, phrases, paragraphs and data of others in work presented for assessment, such materials should be appropriately credited and acknowledged, so that

    it is clear that the materials being presented is that of another person and not the

    student's own.

    The amount of detail required when referencing and acknowledging a source will vary according to the type of work and norms of the discipline. For instance,

    Supervised examinations will require less detail in referencing and acknowledgement.

    Papers written other than under examination conditions will require a full citation of all the sources utilised. While a particular style of citation is not

    prescribed, the citation should provide enough information for the reader to

    locate the sources cited.

    Research materials (including texts, graphics and data) obtained from the internet or other electronic resources should be treated in the same way as research materials

    obtained from traditional sources.

    Any student found to have committed or aided and abetted the offence of plagiarism may

    be subject to disciplinary action. In addition, the student may receive no grade for the

    relevant academic assignment, project, or thesis; and he/she may fail or be denied a grade

    for the relevant subject or module. Such a student caught plagiarizing would have to take

    that module for grade and not be allowed to exercise the S/U option for that module.

    A student may not knowingly intend to plagiarise, but that should not be used as an excuse

    for plagiarism. Students should seek clarification from their instructors or supervisors if

    they are unsure whether or not they are plagiarising the work of another person.

    Source: NUS Registrars Office website

    (http://www.nus.edu.sg/registrar/adminpolicy/acceptance.html)

    http://www.nus.edu.sg/registrar/adminpolicy/acceptance.html

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    You are required to view the e-module entitled NUS Academic Culture module and read the

    articles listed below. You will then have to take a quiz on plagiarism by the end of Week 3.

    Academic Culture Module

    Click on the following link and view at least the two sections on Plagiarism and Penalties:

    http://emodule.nus.edu.sg/ac/launch.htm

    Go to Academic Ethics > Plagiarism

    This section answers the questions:

    1. What is plagiarism?

    2. How can plagiarism be avoided?

    Go to Academic Ethics > Penalties

    This section answers the questions

    1. What happens when someone is caught for plagiarism?

    2. Does being found guilty of plagiarism mean expulsion from the University?

    Articles on Plagiarism

    Click on the links below and read the three articles on plagiarism.

    1. Plagiarism: What It Is and How to Recognize and Avoid It

    http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/plagiarism.shtml

    2. Avoiding Plagiarism

    http://sja.ucdavis.edu/files/plagiarism.pdf

    3. Plagiarism and How to Avoid It

    http://www.cdtl.nus.edu.sg/success/sl7.htm

    http://emodule.nus.edu.sg/ac/launch.htmhttp://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/plagiarism.shtmlhttp://sja.ucdavis.edu/files/plagiarism.pdfhttp://www.cdtl.nus.edu.sg/success/sl7.htm

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    Assessment

    Evaluation in this course is based on continual assessment (70%) and a written final examination

    (30%).

    You are evaluated on the following:

    Assignments Tasks

    Assignment 1

    (30%)

    Individual

    Deconstructing

    argument:

    paragraphs

    Read critically a given text and complete three sections:

    Section A

    (No marks awarded): Identify the main parts of the writers argument

    (main claim, reasons, evidence) through a graphic representation.

    Section B (20 marks):

    Write a 200-250 word summary of the writer's argument. Your summary

    should identify the main claim, key arguments and assumptions. Use

    your own words as far as possible.

    Section C (80 marks): Based on the graphic representation of the

    writers argument, paraphrase and evaluate ONE key argument used by

    the writer to support his main claim.

    You should identify the form of the argument, state a well-articulated

    thesis on the quality of the argument and defend your evaluation with

    reasons. Your evaluation should be between 500-550 words.

    You should include at least TWO sources to support the reasons for your

    evaluation and a Reference List at the end of your paper.

    You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper to the Submissions

    Folder on IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor on Tuesday, 17

    February 2015 by 5 pm.

    Assignment 2

    (30%)

    Team

    Constructing

    argument:

    problem-solution

    position paper

    Assignment 2 is designed to assess your ability to analyze your chosen

    topic/issue based on the theme Sustainable Cities; present a sustained

    good argument exploring the importance of the problem you have

    identified (in relation to a country you have chosen as the theme is

    broad) and the causes and context of the problem; use evidence from

    research; and make 2-3 feasible solutions (preferably from an

    engineering perspective) bearing in mind the implications and

    consequences should these solutions be implemented.

    The proposed solutions can be your own original innovative idea, or

    adapted/borrowed from another source, but they must be supported by

    evidence that is acceptable, relevant, and credible.

    Your paper is written for an academic audience in 1,800-2,000 words,

    fully supported by relevant sources, and attached with an APA (6th Ed.)

    Reference List and Annotated Bibliography (a minimum of 6 sources;

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    each member writing the Annotated Bibliography for 2 sources).

    The word count excludes the Reference List, Annotated Bibliography

    and Appendices. You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper to

    the Submissions Folder on IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor

    after your teams Oral Defence. Only one member of the team needs to

    submit the soft copy in the folder.

    Each team comprises a minimum of two and a maximum of three

    members. There should be 6 teams per tutorial group. You may wish to

    form a team with students who may have diverse perspectives due to

    their experience, interests, gender or cultural background.

    Assignment 3

    (10%)

    Individual

    Participating as a

    critical thinker

    A critical thinker is not cynical and does not criticize for the sake of

    criticizing. A critical thinker displays some of the following

    characteristics:

    Alertness to opportunities to use critical thinking

    Diligence in seeking relevant information

    Clarity in stating the questions or concern

    Reasonableness in selecting and applying criteria for analysis/evaluation

    Reflection/Self-regulation

    You are encouraged to participate in the discussions on the online

    platform chosen by your tutor to practice applying the principles

    learned.

    Examination

    (30%)

    Your final examination is a two-hour paper that tests you on what you

    have learned and put into practice for Assignments 1, 2 and 3. You will

    be asked several questions based on a 1,000-1,200-word text. You need

    to ask relevant questions, label, model and deconstruct the writers

    argument. In addition, you have to construct an argument in response to

    the same text.

    Assignment 1 and 2 will be submitted not only in hard copies but also in soft copies to a

    plagiarism checking software called Turnitin.com via the IVLE workbin. This will assist your

    tutor in determining that your work is indeed your own. Your tutor will explain to you in greater

    detail how the software works in Tutorial 8.

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    Information Literacy

    NUS Librarians will guide you in searching for information from NUS Libraries databases. This

    will aid you not only with research skills for GEK1549 Assignments 1 and 2, but also for

    research in your other modules.

    Week (Date/Time) Library Programs

    Week 2

    (19 to 23January)

    1. Watch Library Lecture in IVLE (Recorded) for Assignment 1. Learn how to search for information from NUS Libraries databases

    and use EndNote for your reference list.

    Week 7

    (2 to 6 March)

    1. Watch Library WebExin IVLE (Recorded) for Assignment 2. Learn how to search for information from NUS Libraries

    databases, evaluate information sources and use EndNote for your

    Annotated Bibliography. Examples used in this WebEx will be

    different from Library Lecture (Assignment 1).

    2. Attend Library Hands-on Sessions for Assignment 2. Learn with the librarians guiding you.

    Note: Hands-on session will only be conducted if there is a sufficient

    number of students who sign up for that particular date/time slot.

    To support your learning, you are strongly encouraged to download and go through the library

    materials in the IVLE Library Workbin. You are also strongly encouraged to

    download/stream/attend one of the above Library Programs. Please watch out for IVLE

    announcements to register for the Library Programs.

    You are encouraged to take the Pre-Library Session Quiz in Week 3 to see if you know about

    information searching and APA Referencing Style or how to select authoritative and credible

    information sources for Assignments 1 and 2.

    If you want to learn more about information searching, etc. for Assignments 1 and 2, watch the

    recorded Library Lecture and Library WebEx in the IVLE and attend Library Hands-on Sessions.

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    Overview of Assignments

    Assignment 1: Deconstructing argument (Individual 30%)

    Objectives of Assignment 1

    This assignment provides students with an opportunity to practice the following basic skills for

    engineering education (Goldberg, 2009):

    1. Asking questions through reading an opinion piece critically by asking relevant questions; 2. Labelling through identifying the main parts of a writers argument; 3. Modelling through establishing links or relationships among arguments; 4. Decomposition through breaking down of arguments into components/ interpreting and

    evaluating a writers argument; identifying subset of a given problem and differentiating

    one solution from another;

    5. Gathering data through assessing and reviewing arguments based on given information through data gathering;

    6. Visualisation through exemplifying and illustrating critical discussion points to form a coherent argument; and

    7. Communication in the written form (summary and evaluation) through describing and expressing ideas of others; summarising and paraphrasing information; defending a position

    and substantiating assertions.

    The basic skills covered for this assignment will be further reinforced for Assignment 2.

    Assignment 1 Task

    This assignment is designed to assess your ability to read critically by identifying the parts of an

    argument, state its structure and provide a basic evaluation of the writers argument.

    There are three parts to this Assignment:

    Section A

    (No marks

    awarded)

    Identify the main parts of the writers argument (main claim, reasons, evidence)

    through a graphic representation.

    Section B

    (20 marks)

    Write a summary of the writers argument between 200 and 250 words.

    Section C

    (80 marks)

    Based on the graphic representation of the writers argument, paraphrase and

    evaluate ONE key argument used by the writer to support his main claim.

    You should identify the form of the argument, state a well-articulated thesis on

    the quality of the argument and defend your evaluation with reasons. Your

    evaluation should be between 500-550 words.

    You should include at least TWO sources to support the reasons for your

    evaluation and a Reference List at the end of your paper.

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    Your tutor will not discuss the assignment article with you or check your draft, but will

    provide sufficient practices in tutorials to help prepare you to complete the task.

    To complete Assignment 1, you should read articles on sustainable cities and understand the

    definition and indicators of such cities.

    Submission Requirements

    You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper and Assignment 1 Reflection form to the

    Submissions Folder on the IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor's letter box.

    Style Requirements

    Times New Roman 12 pt. font, double spaced

    Header with students full name and ID

    Citation: APA style

    Pages numbered

    Due Date for Assignment 1

    Tuesday, 17 February 2015 by 5 PM

    References

    To help you with APA style of referencing and academic writing, refer to:

    NUS Libraries. (2014, April 15). Library Guides to APA Style (6th ed.). Retrieved from

    http://libguides.nus.edu.sg/APA6th

    OWL Purdue Writing Lab. (2014). Academic Writing. Retrieved from

    https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/section/1/2/

    http://libguides.nus.edu.sg/APA6th

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    Assignment 1 Article

    Read the following article and complete the task found on page 8.

    The Myth of Sustainable Cities

    7 July 2013

    By Brandon Peele

    We have all read the headlines about how we live much more sustainably when we choose to

    live in a city. This is false, from a number of perspectives. It is true that the last mile of

    carbon/resource consumption is lower on an individual level in cities; however, this does not

    hold true from the perspective of the species.

    Scale, from the perspective of the species

    Cities are not just glamorous places where the educated creative class goes to collaborate, extract

    profit and congratulate themselves, but they are places where this creative class depends on a

    vast network of imported goods and services from people working in those cities and throughout

    the world. For every Bill Clinton in Manhattan, there are dozens of retail, food, waste,

    healthcare, government administration, police, fire and assorted service personnel. This is to say

    that if Bill, Hillary and Chelsea were subsistence farmers in Indiana, they would have 3 acres of

    land that they would use, but in Manhattan, they support another 10-50 service workers and their

    families, who each require all the same services in Manhattan or the other four surrounding

    boroughs of New York City (NYC), bringing their total footprint into the hundreds of acres.

    Well, you can make the argument that this is fine, because the world needs high performing

    Clintons.

    However, does it need the other 8.2 million people in NYC? It probably does not. Subtract the

    individuals, their families and their service class extended families who are working on reform of

    systemic Maslovian issues (water, safety, health, shelter, public spaces, civil rights,

    communication, the arts, spirituality), and one probably has around 80% of the NYC people who

    contribute nothing to the species, outside of the minuscule taxes they pay the city to clean up

    after them. The 80% are very excited to live out their NYC dreams of banking, fashion, media

    or advertising, and the accompanying luxury/experience lifestyle, which as the case is, implicitly

    makes the human condition worse, say "The Story of Stuff", "Surviving Progress" and "Crash

    Course".

    Thus, urbanization is evil unless proven otherwise. A city can justify its existence insofar as it

    can demonstrate that its centers of excellence (pertaining to the arts, research and Maslovian

    endeavor) exceed the vast costs involved in being a city. To do this we simply subtract from that

    city's combined ecological footprint, the footprint of people and their service class dependents

    creating value for the species. If this number of hectares of resources is worth the benefit of the

    production in arts, research and Maslovian endeavors, then it can continue to exist. Otherwise,

    from the perspective of the species, these people need to leave and go back to the land.

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    Optimal Human Experience

    As someone who has lived in Chicago, NYC, Los Angeles and San Francisco, I can assure you

    that people in cities are not happy. They are caught in a "Fear of missing out (FOMO) and You

    only live once" (YOLO) whirlpool consistently striving to get ahead to have more power,

    prestige and money and spending their money on increasingly high rents and ridiculous leisure

    activities. It is no coincidence that where nature declines psychotherapy thrives. When we

    remove ourselves from other living things and hole ourselves up in sterile boxes, we lose touch

    with more than nature, but our souls. Why is it that everyone has a plan to leave? There are a

    few things that make us healthy physicallyorganic mostly plant-based diet, yoga, clean air and

    water. There are a few things that make us happydiscovering our purpose, self-expression,

    close ties with family and friends, contact with nature, being in service to others and communing

    with art and God. 60-80 hour weeks working for organizations that have no concept of the

    aforementioned good things, leave little time for the good things.

    This is to say that for the few minutes of luxury and relaxation in an otherwise chaotic, stressful

    and unhealthy existence, we are complicit in the wanton theft of our own time, of our own

    human potential, as well as detrimentally making things worse for the future generations. We

    wake up at 35 and realize our misery, the lack of the good things and the increasingly terrible

    odds of meeting an adult with whom to fall in love and create a family. Cities are a bill of goods

    propagated only by narrative that says cities are fun, creative, sustainable, full of progress and

    new ideas, etc. Well, it is becoming increasingly obvious that we can have all of the benefits of

    living in a city without the cost, hassle and sacrifice of living in a city.

    Internet, depth and subsistence farming

    Masonobu Fukuoka developed a system of "do-nothing" farming where he worked on average

    one day a week and provided more than enough food for himself, being able to trade and sell

    surpluses. He spent the other 6 days writing haiku and sport fishing. We can do this too. And

    we can via skype and facebook and other social media, stay in the global conversation and create

    value for the species, planet and cosmos, or choose just to live deeply, read books, create and

    spend time with loved ones. We need land, water, an internet connection and a local hub for

    acute trauma healthcare and trading surpluses. We can teach each other crafts, permaculture,

    yoga and preventative medicine. We can engage in soul exploration work, go on adventures and

    savor existence in all its diversity and grandeur.

    We do not need cities as much as we think we do. Indeed much of what can be called real

    progress for the species depends on gradually moving out of the cities and back into our natural

    environment, on our own terms.

    Number of words:945

    Adapted from:

    Peele, B. (2013). The Myth of Sustainable Cities. Retrieved from http://www.evr1.co/.

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    About the Author

    Brandon Peele is the co-founder of EVR1, a social enterprise which makes inspired accessories,

    crafted using the most sustainable methods, and containing a tiny chip that holds the sum total of

    human knowledge called the Human Story. Peele has an MBA from Columbia Business School,

    has been a Graduate Instructor for the course "Creativity and Personal Mastery" at UC Berkeley,

    and has contributed to numerous self-awareness journals, including Trans4mind and Self-growth.

    On January 16, 2014 EVR1 announced it was proud to join British Petroleum as a Fossil Fuel

    Friend, BP's new program designed to move "green" companies into the future.

    Evaluation of Assignment 1

    You are encouraged to read through and familiarise yourself with the marking criteria on the

    next page to ensure that your work meets the quality standards set for this module.

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    ES1531/GEK1549 Marking Descriptors for Assignment 1 Part 2: Summary of Argument (20 Marks)

    Skills

    Criteria

    Unacceptable

    0 - 2

    Needs Improvement

    3 - 4

    Good

    5 - 7

    Outstanding

    8 - 10

    Inquiry

    Labelling

    Modelling

    10 marks

    Does not detect or misinterprets the issue

    presented in the writers

    argument and purpose.

    Misinterprets the writers main claim and is unable to

    identify the writers key

    arguments/claims; writes a

    summary of the article

    instead.

    Recognises the issue presented in the argument

    but misinterprets the

    writers purpose.

    Recognises the writers main claim but may not

    correctly identify all the key

    arguments/claims present.

    Recognises the issue presented in the argument

    and the writers purpose.

    Distinguishes between the writers main claim and key

    arguments/claims but may

    not be able to establish the

    relationship between the key

    arguments and main claim.

    Understands the issue presented in the argument and identifies the

    writers purpose and assumptions.

    Correctly identifies the writers main claim and key arguments

    /claims and is able to establish the

    relationship between the main claim

    and key arguments.

    Visualization

    Communication

    10 marks

    Poor organisation of ideas: the overall relational pattern

    between ideas is not

    apparent.

    Poor language use: Uses inappropriate tone.

    Writes information in incomplete sentences or

    writes simple sentences.

    Makes numerous errors in grammar which obscure

    intended meaning.

    Shows very little attempt to paraphrase.

    Some problems with organization of ideas:

    several lapses in coherence,

    causing confusion to the

    reader. Poor use of

    transition markers.

    Some problems with language use: Uses a few

    reporting verbs but these

    may not be appropriate.

    Some confusion between the writers voice and own

    voice.

    Uses a variety of sentence types but makes errors in

    compound and complex

    sentences when used.

    Makes many errors in grammar and they

    occasionally obscure

    intended meaning.

    Shows attempts to paraphrase but not

    successful.

    Good organization of ideas: clear relational

    pattern between ideas, albeit

    1 or 2 logical gaps;

    demonstrates use of

    transition markers but some

    may be inappropriate.

    Good language use in general: Uses appropriate

    reporting verbs.

    Uses an appropriate tone.

    Distinguishes between the writers voice and own

    voice.

    Uses various sentence types to convey intended meaning

    but not accurately at times.

    Grammar is mostly accurate. There may be a few

    instances of grammar

    inaccuracy but errors do not

    hinder intended meaning.

    Paraphrases well with occasional errors.

    Excellent organization of ideas: a clear relational pattern between

    ideas with no logical gaps and

    demonstrates very effective use of

    appropriate transition markers to

    link ideas.

    Excellent language use: Writes a well formed paragraph with a

    clearly started main claim and key

    arguments.

    Uses appropriate reporting verbs.

    Uses an appropriate tone.

    Clear distinction between the writers voice and own voice.

    Effectively uses various sentence types to convey the meaning of the

    writer.

    Always-mostly accurate grammar.

    Paraphrases well.

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    Marking Descriptors for Part 3: Evaluation of Argument (80 Marks)

    Skills

    Criteria

    Unacceptable

    0 9.9

    Needs Improvement

    10 11.9

    Good

    12 15.9

    Outstanding

    16 - 20

    Inquiry

    Labelling

    20 marks

    Does not correctly identify a key

    argument, or identifies

    a sub claim in a key

    argument.

    Sub claims or evidence may be incomplete in

    the identification of a

    key argument.

    Correctly identifies a key argument with its

    sub claims and

    evidence.

    Correctly identifies and paraphrases a key argument

    with its sub claims and

    evidence.

    Modelling

    20 marks

    Does not identify the form of the key

    argument.

    Identifies the form of the key argument but

    does not apply it to the

    evaluation.

    Identifies the form of the argument and

    demonstrates attempts

    to apply the criteria for

    a strong deductive or

    inductive argument to

    the discussion.

    Correctly identifies the form of the argument and effectively

    applies the understanding of

    the criteria for a strong

    deductive or inductive

    argument to the discussion.

    Decomposition

    Gathering data

    (Assess

    credibility of

    Evidence)

    20 marks

    Does not state a position; or states a

    position on the quality

    of the key argument,

    but presents a

    discussion of the issue

    (agreeing or

    disagreeing with the

    author) instead of the

    argument.

    Does not query the credibility of claim and

    evidence provided in

    the key argument.

    States a position or thesis on the quality of

    the key argument and

    provides reasons for the

    evaluation, but the

    discussion may not be

    fully developed or

    supported with relevant

    and credible sources.

    Queries the credibility of the claim and

    evidence, but does not

    develop this point in

    the evaluation.

    Presents a clear thesis on the quality of the

    argument, and justifies

    the evaluation with a

    well-developed

    argument, supported by

    mostly relevant and

    credible sources.

    Assesses the credibility of the claim and

    evidence but may not

    use sources to fully

    develop the evaluation.

    Presents a well-articulated thesis on the quality of the key

    argument, and effectively

    defends the evaluation with a

    clear criteria and support from

    credible and reliable sources.

    Assesses the credibility of the claim and evidence and fully

    develops the discussion of the

    evaluation with the use of

    other sources.

    Visualization

    Communication

    20 marks

    Poor language use: writes mainly simple

    sentences with

    numerous errors in

    grammar which obscure

    intended meaning;

    Some problems with language use: uses a

    variety of sentence

    types but makes errors

    in compound and

    complex sentences

    Good language use in general: uses various

    sentence types to

    achieve intended

    meaning effectively but

    not accurately at times;

    Excellent language use: uses various sentence types to

    convey the meaning of the

    writer.

    Demonstrates accuracy in grammar.

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    shows very little

    attempt to paraphrase

    Poor organisation of ideas: the overall

    relational pattern

    between ideas is not

    apparent.

    Many ideas lack

    development and

    support, causing great

    confusion to the reader.

    when used; makes

    many errors in

    grammar but these do

    obscure intended

    meaning; shows

    attempt to paraphrase

    but not successful.

    Uses a few reporting verbs but these may not

    be appropriate.

    Some problems with organization of ideas:

    Several lapses in

    coherence: ideas and

    arguments are not fully

    developed and

    supported in several

    instances, causing

    confusion to the reader.

    demonstrates accuracy

    in grammar but may

    make several mistakes.

    Paraphrases well with occasional errors.

    Uses appropriate reporting verbs.

    Uses an appropriate tone.

    Good organization of ideas: Clear relational

    pattern between ideas,

    albeit 1 or 2 logical

    gaps: ideas and

    arguments are

    developed and

    supported with

    effective use of

    appropriate transition

    markers to show clear

    relationships between

    ideas.

    Paraphrases well.

    Uses appropriate reporting verbs.

    Uses an appropriate tone.

    Excellent organization of ideas: ideas are coherent

    throughout with a clear

    relational pattern and no

    logical gaps: ideas and

    arguments are fully developed

    and well-supported with very

    effective use of appropriate

    transition markers to show

    clear relationships between

    ideas.

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    Assignment 2: Constructing argument Team (30%)

    Objectives of Assignment 2

    This assignment provides students with an opportunity to practice the following basic skills for

    engineering education (Goldberg, 2009):

    1. Asking questions through formulating questions on hypothesis, causes and solutions by asking relevant questions;

    2. Labelling through classifying problems, causes and solutions by identifying the main parts of a writers argument;

    3. Modelling through hypothesizing and finding solutions, establishing links from causes to problems to solutions to criteria for evaluation;

    4. Decomposition through breaking down of arguments into components/interpreting and evaluating a writers argument; identifying subset of a given problem and differentiating

    one solution from another;

    5. Gathering data through assessing and reviewing arguments on problems and solutions argument based on given information through data gathering;

    6. Visualisation through exemplifying and illustrating critical discussion points to form a coherent argument in a paper; and

    7. Communication in the form of an academic paper through describing and expressing ideas of others; summarising and paraphrasing information; defending a position and

    substantiating assertions.

    The basic skills covered for Assignment 1 and this assignment will be tested in the examination.

    This assignment is designed to assess your ability to analyze your chosen topic/issue based on

    the theme Sustainable Cities; present a sustained good argument exploring the importance of the

    problem you have identified (in relation to a country you have chosen as the theme is broad) and

    the causes and context of the problem; use evidence from research; and make 2-3 feasible

    solutions (preferably from an engineering perspective) bearing in mind the implications and

    consequences should these solutions be implemented. The proposed solutions can be your own

    original innovative ideas, or adapted/borrowed from another source, but they must be supported

    by evidence that is acceptable, relevant, and credible.

    Your paper is for an academic audience in 1,800-2,000 words, fully supported by relevant

    sources, and attached with an APA (6th Ed.) Reference List and Annotated Bibliography (a

    minimum of 6 sources, each member writing the Annotated Bibliography for 2 sources).

    The word count excludes the Reference List, Annotated Bibliography and Appendices. You are

    required to upload a soft copy of your paper to the Submissions Folder on IVLE and to submit a

    hard copy to your tutor after your teams Oral Defence. Only one member of the team needs to

    submit the soft copy in the folder.

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    Each team comprises a minimum of two and a maximum of three members. There should be 6

    teams per tutorial group. You may wish to form a team with students who may have diverse

    perspectives due to their experience, interests, gender or cultural background.

    Assignment 2 Task

    Sustainable Cities and Sustainable Communities

    Cities around the world are growing exponentially, with most of Earths population now living in

    cities. The United Nations (2014) projects that by 2050, 7 in 10 people will dwell in cities,

    compared with only 2 out of 10 people who lived in an urban setting a century ago. The worlds

    cities are expected to balloon from 3.6 billion inhabitants today to more than 6 billion by mid-

    century. The demographic transition from rural to urban, known as urbanization, is characterised

    by the shift from an agricultural-based to an industrial, technology and service based economy;

    in essence, the human population will always move to environments where they can secure

    sources of food and employment, and the hope for a better future. A summary of some recent

    facts and figures about modern cities from the UN is presented below.

    Facts and Figures

    Half of humanity 3.5 billion people live in cities today. By 2030, almost 60 per cent of the worlds population will live in urban areas. 95 per cent of urban expansion in the next decades will take place in the developing

    world.

    828 million people live in slums today and the number keeps rising.

    The worlds cities occupy just 2 per cent of the Earths land, but account for 60-80

    per cent of energy consumption and 75 per cent of carbon emissions.

    Rapid urbanization is exerting pressure on fresh water supplies, sewage, the living environment, and public health.

    However, the high density of cities can bring efficiency gains and technological innovation while reducing resource and energy consumption.

    Sustainable Cities (UN, 2014)

    The tremendous change to the conditions of our cities in the 21st century can be perceived as a

    dire emergency or a glorious opportunity. Indeed, our cities can be the epitome of the best of

    times, the worst of times, to quote the English writer, Charles Dickens. At their best, our

    modern cities are hubs of human productivity, creativity, connection and social development.

    Yet at the same time, they are plagued by the various problems associated with industrial

    urbanization: pollution, crowding, urban slums, crime, poverty, social inequality, and

    dehumanization. As fellow citizens of this world, we need to think of solutions to address these

    challenges with the ultimate aim of creating sustainable cities. The future of our modern cities

    and future generations lies in the way we envision what cities can be and how they can be

    exemplars of how humanity can live without straining Earths resources.

    Under the broad theme of Sustainable Cities, identify any problem associated with urbanization

    in the context of a city in Asia. As part of critical thinking and problem-solving skills, the

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    problem identification will require you to analyze and narrow the problem, to define terms and

    concepts if necessary, to establish the causes for the problem, to evaluate current measures, and

    to argue for or justify the significance of the problem. The proposed solutions can be your own

    original innovative ideas or adapted/borrowed ones from sources, but they have to be supported

    by evidence that is credible and reasonable.

    The end product, which is the problem-solution paper, should demonstrate your skills in

    constructing and presenting an argument.

    You can use the following questions from the e-book City 2.0: The Habitat of the Future and

    How to Get There (TED, 2013) to help you generate ideas for your paper:

    How can we transform cities to be sustainable, efficient, beautiful and invigorating to the human soul?

    How can city design propel us to realize our healthiest bodies, strongest communities, and most creative minds?

    How can we bring together residents of diverse backgrounds, and create a living environment that will uplift and empower the marginalized?

    UN Habitat has also recently produced a series of videos called UN Habitat Global Urban

    Lectures, which can be retrieved from the link below:

    https://www.youtube.com/user/unhabitatglobal

    For innovative and interesting ideas, you can watch the presentations tagged by the keywords

    Cities and Urban Planning on TED Talk.

    To start you off, read the two articles on Sustainable Cities in the IVLE Workbin for Assignment

    2:

    Chapter 6 Sustainable Cities Cohen, S.A (2011). Sustainability Management: lessons from and for New York City,

    America, and the Planet. New York: Columbia University Press

    Review of Sustainability indices and indicators: towards a new City Sustainability Index(CSI)

    Mori, K and Christodoulou, A. (2012). Review of Sustainability indices and indicators:

    Towards a new City Sustainability Index (CSI). Environmental Impact Assessment

    Review 32 (2012), 94-106. doi: 10.1016/j.eiar.2011.06.001

    References

    UN Habitat. (2014, April 22). UN Habitat Global Urban Lectures. Retrieved from

    https://www.youtube.com/user/unhabitatglobal

    United Nations. (2014). Rio+20 The Future We Want. Sustainable Cities: Facts and Figures.

    Retrieved from http://www.un.org/en/sustainablefuture/cities.shtml#overview

    http://dx.doi.org.libproxy1.nus.edu.sg/10.1016/j.eiar.2011.06.001https://www.youtube.com/user/unhabitatglobal

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    There are several steps to this Assignment:

    Online

    discussion

    By Week 6, to complete Assignment 1, you will have read several articles on

    sustainable cities and the various definitions and indicators.

    Tutorials in Week 6 are converted to e-discussion. There are three main

    activities:

    a) You are to read an article on Sustainable Cities (in the workbin) and answer

    the questions on the online platform chosen by your tutor.

    b) Each member of the team will post possible areas of focus for Assignment 2

    in Google Drive, giving your reasons.

    c) Fix a time (about 15 minutes) with your tutor in Week 6 or Week 7 (recess

    week) to discuss online your topic from the list of possible topics.

    Graphic

    representation

    Like the graphic representation that you produced when you deconstructed an

    article, you have to present a graphic representation of your argument for the

    Problem-Solution paper by making a clip using Movenote.

    This clip should be uploaded at the end of the recess week, before Week 7

    Tutorial 11.

    In Tutorial 11, each student should bring his/her own laptop, view five clips,

    excluding his or her team's clip and write comments.

    After getting feedback from your peers and tutor, teams will make changes and

    put their revised graphic representation in Google Drive by Tutorial 12.

    Draft The designated e-learning week by NUS is Week 8.

    To prepare for this e-learning week, you and your team will write the

    introduction draft (establishing the problems and its causes) in Google Drive by

    the end of Week 7.

    Using Google Hangouts or Skype, your tutor will arrange a 45-minute online

    face-to-face conferencing with you and your team on your introduction. You

    should ask critical questions. Your tutor will also be asking you questions.

    Revise your introduction draft after your conferencing session.

    Peer

    Feedback

    There is peer feedback in Tutorial 16. Your tutor will pair two teams. Exchange

    laptops or print a copy of your paper. Read and write critical questions regarding

    the main claim and key arguments on the paper. Review the questions and

    clarify. Revise and edit your draft.

    Submit your draft paper in the IVLE workbin by Friday 20 March, Week 9.

    Conferencing You and your team will have a 45-minute session with your tutor to discuss your

    paper. Your tutor will ask questions to help you think about your content,

    improve your organization and explain how you can use language effectively.

    You should also come prepared with questions to ask your tutor.

    Your tutor will not return the draft.

    The final copy and Assignment 2 reflection should be submitted a week after the

    conferencing. Both hard and soft copies are required.

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    Oral defence After the submission of the final copy, email the other team your paper. You will

    be informed on the paired teams. To prepare for the Oral Defence, you should

    read the other teams paper and prepare your critical questions for the other

    team. Each team member must ask and answer at least TWO questions. Each

    team member should call on a member of the other team to answer his/her

    question. Your tutor will also ask you questions.

    You may be asked questions on sections not written by you. You should be

    prepared to answer any question. This is to ensure all team members are

    responsible for the entire paper.

    Submission Requirements

    You are required to upload a soft copy of your paper and Assignment 2 Reflection Form to the

    Submissions Folder on IVLE and to submit a hard copy to your tutor.

    Style Requirements

    Use the APA format of writing a paper.

    Times new Roman 12 pt. font for main text

    Double spaced (indent for new paragraphs)

    Cover page: title reflecting position and student particulars

    Citation: APA style

    Pages numbered and word count at the end of the paper

    Due Date for Assignment 2

    Teams A and B: Week 11, Tutorial 19

    Teams C and D: Week 11, Tutorial 20

    Teams E and F: Week 12, Tutorial 21

    References

    To help you with APA style of referencing and academic writing, refer to:

    NUS Libraries. (2014, April 15). Library Guides to APA Style (6th ed.). Retrieved from

    http://libguides.nus.edu.sg/APA6th

    OWL Purdue Writing Lab. (2014). Academic Writing. Retrieved from

    https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/section/1/2

    Evaluation of Assignment 2

    You are encouraged to read through and familiarise yourself with the marking criteria to ensure

    that your work meets the quality standards set for this module.

    http://libguides.nus.edu.sg/APA6th

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    ES1531/GEK1549 Marking Descriptors for Assignment 2: Constructing Argument (30%)

    Skills

    Criteria

    Unacceptable

    0-9.9

    Needs Improvement

    10-11.9

    Good

    12-15.9

    Outstanding

    16-20

    Inquiry

    Labelling

    Modelling

    (20)

    Does not identify and establish the problem

    correctly.

    Does not label causes of the problem correctly.

    Does not take into account current measures.

    Fails to show links from problem to causes to

    current measures to

    proposed solutions.

    The identified problem is somewhat unclear or

    insignificant.

    Labels causes but these may not be the root causes

    of the problem.

    Does not establish the links from problem to causes to

    current measures to

    proposed solutions well.

    The identified problem is clear and significant.

    Labels several root and related causes correctly.

    Identifies current measures and establishes relationship

    between problem, and

    current measures.

    Establishes the relationship between solutions and

    problem/causes/current

    measures.

    The identified problem is significant and well

    defined.

    Labels root and related causes correctly.

    Identifies the current measures and establishes

    the relationship between

    problem and current

    measures.

    Establishes the relationship between

    solutions and

    problem/causes/current

    measures.

    Decomposition

    (20) Does not demonstrate

    understanding of the

    relationship between main

    claim and key arguments.

    Arguments are non-existent or weak.

    Makes many unjustified assumptions.

    Has no criteria for evaluation of current

    measures & proposed

    solutions.

    Demonstrates some understanding of the

    relationship between main

    claim and arguments.

    Arguments are mainly weak/not well developed.

    Makes a number of unjustified assumptions.

    The criteria for evaluation of current measures &

    proposed solutions is not

    stated clearly.

    Demonstrates ability to show relationship between

    main claim and key

    arguments.

    Has several strong arguments.

    Makes several unjustified assumptions.

    Has a well-thought out criteria for evaluation of

    current measures &

    proposed solutions, though some may not be appropriate.

    Breaks down the problem and shows the

    relationship between

    main claim and key

    arguments.

    Has many strong arguments.

    Assumptions are justified.

    Has a well-thought out criteria for evaluation of

    current measures &

    proposed solutions.

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    Gathering data

    (20)

    Lacks research to support argument.

    Lacks evidence of thinking about the sources selected

    as evident in the

    References and Annotated

    Bibliography.

    Does not incorporate sources successfully as

    there is no differentiation

    in the various voices.

    Has limited research to support argument.

    Incorporates sources clumsily and abruptly, and

    voices are unclear in

    several sections.

    Shows some thinking in the selection of sources as

    seen in the References and

    Annotated Bibliography.

    Demonstrates good use of research to help support

    argument but some sources

    may be questionable.

    Mostly effective in incorporating sources in

    the writing but may have

    lapses and some

    indistinguishable voices.

    Selects relevant and reliable sources as evident

    in the References but the

    information in the

    Annotated Bibliography

    may be incomplete.

    Demonstrates excellent and sufficient use of

    sources to support

    argument.

    Incorporates sources successfully by

    demonstrating ability to

    differentiate the various

    voices.

    Selects relevant and reliable sources as evident

    in the References and

    Annotated Bibliography

    is complete.

    Visualization

    (20) Shows very little

    understanding of what a

    thesis statement and topic

    sentences are.

    Does not understand how an academic paper and its

    paragraphs are organized.

    Uses transition markers wrongly most of the time.

    Shows no understanding of APA in-text and end-of-

    text referencing.

    Has not taken into account the format requirements for

    Assignment 2.

    Shows some understanding of what a thesis statement

    and topic sentences are.

    Shows some understanding of how an academic paper

    and its paragraphs are

    organized.

    Uses only some correct transition markers to show

    clear connections between

    ideas.

    Shows some understanding of APA in-text and end-of-

    text referencing.

    Has taken into account some format requirements

    but is inconsistent.

    Writes the thesis statement and the topic sentence for

    each paragraph clearly.

    Organises paragraphs coherently with a clear

    relational pattern, albeit

    some lapses in coherence.

    Uses transition markers to show clear connections

    between ideas, although

    some may not be

    appropriate or are missing.

    Accurately acknowledges and documents the sources

    used but may make some

    mistakes for the

    complicated ones.

    Adheres to format requirements.

    Writes the thesis statement and the topic sentence for

    each paragraph clearly.

    Organises paragraphs coherently throughout with

    a clear relational pattern.

    Uses appropriate transition markers to show clear

    connection between ideas

    Accurately documents the sources used in the APA

    style of referencing.

    Adheres to format requirements for

    Assignment 2.

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    Communication

    (20)

    Uses inappropriate style/tone.

    Uses mainly simple sentences.

    Makes numerous errors in grammar consistently

    throughout the essay that

    obscures intended

    meaning.

    Makes numerous punctuation and spelling

    errors.

    Uses very limited vocabulary and

    inappropriate idiomatic

    expressions, and meaning

    is affected and cannot be

    guessed from context.

    Uses inappropriate style/tone in several

    instances.

    Uses a variety of sentence types but makes errors in

    compound and complex

    sentences when used.

    Makes many errors in grammar consistently

    throughout the essay but

    these do not obscure

    intended meaning.

    Makes several punctuation and spelling errors.

    Uses limited vocabulary and idiomatic expressions

    accurately.

    Adopts a formal, measured and suitable style/tone for

    an academic audience but

    may have lapses at times.

    Uses mainly objective expressions, explanatory

    and evaluative language.

    Uses hedges/concessions though not effectively at

    times.

    Uses various sentence types to achieve intended

    meaning effectively most

    of the time.

    Demonstrates accuracy in grammar but may still

    make several mistakes.

    Chooses appropriate vocabulary to convey

    meaning.

    Adopts a formal, measured and highly suitable

    style/tone for an academic

    audience.

    Uses objective expressions, explanatory and evaluative

    language.

    Uses hedges/concessions effectively.

    Uses various sentence types to achieve intended

    meaning effectively and

    accurately.

    Demonstrates accuracy in grammar.

    Chooses appropriate and sophisticated vocabulary to

    convey meaning.

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    Assignment 3: Participating as a critical thinker Individual (10%)

    This assignment is based on your consistent participation throughout the course.

    You are assessed on:

    Preparation before class as evident by contributing answers to tutorial activities, asking

    question and giving feedback on peers answers;

    Review of peers Assignment 2 and asking questions during their oral presentation on solutions;

    Reflection on Assignments.

    Evaluation of Assignment 3

    The following marking descriptors will be used by you to evaluate yourself (Assignment 3

    Reflection form) and by your tutor to grade your work. It will be most useful for you to read

    through and to familiarise yourself with the marking criteria to ensure that your work meets the

    quality standards set for this module.

    This assignment is marked out of 100%.

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    Marking Descriptors for Assignment 3: Participating as a critical thinker (10%)

    Criteria based on

    dispositions of a

    critical thinker

    Unacceptable

    0-9.9

    Needs

    Improvement

    10-11.9

    Good

    12-15.9

    Outstanding

    16-20

    Alertness to

    opportunities to use

    critical thinking

    Has to be called

    upon.

    Volunteers once in

    a while.

    Volunteers answers

    in many tutorials.

    Volunteers answers

    in every tutorial.

    Participates in

    online discussions

    posted by your

    tutor.

    Diligence in

    seeking relevant

    information

    Provides answers

    that reflect he/she

    has hardly read the

    tutorial notes.

    Provides answers

    that reflect

    minimum

    interaction with

    tutorial notes.

    Provides answers

    that suggest

    preparedness but

    more reading would

    have made the

    answers better.

    Provides answers

    that reflect

    preparedness.

    Clarity in stating

    the questions or

    concern

    (Week 8 e-learning,

    conferencing and

    oral defence)

    Asks irrelevant

    questions.

    Asks mainly

    comprehension

    questions.

    Asks critical

    questions but may

    need help in

    phrasing them.

    Asks clearly

    expressed critical

    questions.

    Reasonableness in

    selecting and

    applying criteria for

    analysis/evaluation

    (Week 8 e-learning,

    conferencing and

    oral defence)

    Demonstrates very

    little understanding

    of criteria.

    Demonstrates

    understanding of

    only some criteria

    and lacks

    application.

    Demonstrates

    understanding of

    criteria though

    needs some help in

    application.

    Demonstrates clear

    understanding of

    criteria through

    correct application.

    Reflection/Self-

    regulation

    (quality of three

    reflections)

    Does not show

    ability to self-

    regulate. Hardly

    any evidence of

    reflection.

    Reflects only when

    asked to do so and

    reflection is

    incomplete.

    Reflects and shows

    willingness to make

    changes but steps

    for application may

    not be fully

    developed.

    Reflects and shows

    willingness and

    develops a plan

    (based on skills

    learned) to make

    changes based on

    the reflection.

    Facione, P.A. (1990). Critical Thinking: A statement of expert consensus for purpose of

    educational assessment and instruction: Executive Summary. The Delphi Report.

    Millbrae, CA: California Academic Press. Retrieved from

    http://assessment.aas.duke.edu/documents/Delphi_Report.pdf

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    ES1531/GEK1549 Weekly Schedule

    Week/Date First Session Second Session Tasks/ Assignments

    Week 1 /

    12-16 Jan

    No tutorials. Download materials from IVLE

    Read requirements of Assignments 1, 2 and 3 (Theme: Sustainable cities).

    Prepare for tutorials by reading the Course Information and learning materials.

    Class time is spent on clarifying concepts and discussing tutorial activities.

    Week 2/

    19-23 Jan

    Tutorial 1

    Ice-breaking activities

    What is critical thinking?

    Introduction to course:

    objectives and assignments

    Plagiarism

    Tutorial 2

    Plagiarism

    What is research?

    APA style of referencing

    Reporting verbs

    Integrating sources

    Download Quick Guides

    from IVLE Library Workbin.

    Watch Library Lecture in

    IVLE for Assignment 1

    (information searching and

    EndNote only)

    Homework: Complete quiz

    on plagiarism.

    Week 3/

    26-30 Jan

    Tutorial 3

    Understanding argument

    Identifying arguments and

    conclusions

    Identifying parts of an

    argument: a main claim/

    conclusion and reasons

    Identifying assumptions

    Distinguishing between

    deductive and inductive

    reasoning

    Tutorial 4

    Critical reading

    Text A: Peter Singer's Does

    helping the planet hurt the

    poor?

    Identifying parts of an

    argument

    Identifying assumptions

    Distinguishing between

    deductive and inductive

    reasoning

    Preparing a graphic

    representation

    Homework: Practice constructing the graphic

    representation and summary

    for In Defense of Superstition.

    Think about Assignment 1:

    find and read articles from

    Library resources on

    sustainable cities, their

    definitions and indicators.

    There are two articles in the

    workbin for your reference.

    Week 4/

    2-6 Feb

    Tutorial 5

    Deconstructing argument

    Evaluating the reliability of

    evidence/authorities (Text B:

    Hutson's In defense of

    superstition)

    Identifying flaws in

    reasoning

    The use of logos, pathos and

    ethos in arguments

    Tutorial 6

    Deconstructing argument

    Steps in evaluating an

    argument

    Paragraphs: Interpretation,

    Analysis, Inference,

    Evaluation, Explanation and

    Self-regulation

    Writing a summary and

    evaluation (reporting verbs,

    tone, tenses)

    Prepare graphic

    representation for Assignment

    1.

    Homework: Assignment 1

    Practice: Innovating to Zero!

    (Constructing graphic

    representation, writing

    summary and evaluation of

    Gates argument)

    Week 5/

    9-13 Feb

    Tutorial 7

    Deconstructing argument:

    exercising skills of reasoning

    Text C: Bill Gates'

    Innovating to zero!

    Constructing graphic

    representation and writing

    summary

    Peer reviewing work

    Tutorial 8

    Deconstructing argument:

    exercising skills of reasoning

    Text C: Bill Gates'

    Innovating to zero!

    Presenting evaluation.

    Tutor will show you how to

    use the plagiarism check in

    your IVLE folder using the

    evaluation exercise.

    Group members are

    assigned for Assignment 2

    Write the summary and

    evaluation for Assignment 1.

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    Week 6/

    16-20 Feb

    CNY: 19

    (Thu) and

    20Feb(Fri)

    Tutorials 9 and 10 (E-discussion)

    Prepare a document in Google drive identifying a city you

    and your team have chosen and possible problems for

    discussion.

    Discuss with your tutor online a possible topic (city and

    problem) for your problem-solution paper on Google Drive.

    Submit Assignment 1 and

    Reflection form by 17

    February, Tuesday, 5 pm.

    Submit a soft copy of

    Assignment 1 and the

    Reflection Form in the IVLE

    workbin and a hard copy in

    the tutors letter box. Ensure

    both soft and hard copies are

    identical.

    Recess Week 21 Feb-1 Mar (consolidate, analyse and evaluate your sources for Assignment 2)

    Do your research and write your argument framework for your problem-solution paper in Google Drive.

    Create your Movenote clip on the graphic representation and upload it on the online platform chosen by your

    tutor before Tutorial 11.

    All members must give comments to show participation and collaboration in Assignment 2.

    Week 7/

    2-6 Mar Tutorial 11

    Assignment 2 presentation:

    graphic representation of

    construction of argument:

    main claim/premises

    Each student will review 5

    graphic representations

    (excluding his /her own)

    Tutorial 12

    Writing an Annotated

    Bibliography

    Revising their graphic

    representation in Google

    Drive

    Writing the introduction of

    the problem-solution paper.

    Revise your graphic

    representation on

    Assignment 2. Show

    collaboration.

    Write your introduction:

    establishing the problem and

    its causes.

    Attend Library Hands-on

    session for Assignment 2

    (information searching only)

    Watch Library WebEx in

    IVLE for Assignment 2

    (information searching,

    evaluation of information

    sources and EndNote)

    Week 8/

    9-13 Mar

    E-learning

    week

    Tutorials 13 and 14

    Conference on the introduction, which establishes the

    problem and its causes (argument for the problem with your

    tutor using Google Hangouts or Skype - face to face

    communication with the group).

    Write/revise/edit a draft on

    Assignment 2. Show

    collaboration.

    Week 9/

    16-20Mar Tutorial 15

    Constructing argument:

    solutions to the problem

    Giving feedback on

    Assignment 1 on integrating

    sources and in-text and end-of

    text referencing.

    Tutorial 16

    Giving peer feedback on

    Assignment 2

    Revising based on peer

    feedback.

    Write/revise/edit a draft on

    Assignment 2. Show

    collaboration.

    All groups submit a draft

    copy by Friday 20 March

    Friday classes submit their

    draft copies by Saturday noon

    Week 10

    23-27 Mar

    Tutorial 17

    Conferencing on

    Assignment 2 draft (Teams A

    and B)

    Tutorial 18

    Conferencing on

    Assignment 2 draft (Teams C

    and D)

    Bring a draft copy

    consisting of all components

    for Tutorials 17, 18 and 19.

    Ask your tutor questions on

    the content.

    Your tutors will not be

    returning the drafts to you.

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    Week 11/

    30 Mar -

    3Apr

    Good

    Friday 3

    Apr

    Tutorial 19

    Conferencing on

    Assignment 2 draft (Teams E

    and F)

    Teams A and B submit their

    final copy and the Assignment

    2 Reflection form in the IVLE

    workbin and a hard copy to

    the tutor by

    6 pm.

    Tutorial 20

    Oral defence of paper

    (Teams A and B)

    Teams C and D submit their

    final copy and the Assignment

    2 Reflection form in the IVLE

    workbin and a hard copy to

    the tutor by

    6 pm.

    Read Assignment 2 before

    class to prepare questions

    Ask critical questions

    Defend your work by

    making good arguments.

    Tutors will return

    Assignment 1 in Tutorials 20-

    22

    Week 12/

    6-10 Apr

    Tutorial 21

    Oral defence of paper

    (Teams C and D)

    Teams E and F are to submit

    their final copy and the

    Assignment 2 Reflection form

    in the IVLE workbin and a

    hard copy to the tutor by

    6 pm.

    Tutorial 22

    Oral defence of paper

    (Teams E and F)

    Read Assignment 2 before

    class to prepare questions.

    Ask critical questions

    Defend your work by

    making good arguments.

    Submit soft copies of

    Assignment 1 and 3

    Reflection Forms in IVLE and

    hard copies in your tutor's

    letter box by Tutorial 22.

    Week 13/

    13-17 Apr Tutorial 23

    Revision/Exam Preparation

    Reviewing concepts

    Discussing your answers

    with each other.

    Tutorial 24

    Revision/ Exam Preparation

    Reviewing concepts

    Discussing your answers

    with each other.

    You will receive

    Assignments 2 and 3

    comments from your tutor.

    Reading Week and Final Exam (24 April 2015)

    The Universitys guideline on duration of lecture and tutorial classes is that for classes with duration of

    two hours or more, students should be released 25 minutes before the end of the hour at the very latest.