Paragraph 2 Constellation Summary

Prewriting

1. DQ: What story does your constellation tell?

2. What do I already know about my constellation? (notes only no sentences)

*Leo/August

*shows up in March-May

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3. What do I need to know?

Directions: Read the story of your constellation several times.

Then, close your internet and complete your notes on this Word document.

Do not use complete sentences and do not reopen your internet.

Who Who is the story about? What are the names of the main characters?

1.Hera

2.Hurculies

3.Leo

4.king Eurytheus

What What happens in the story? What are the three or four main things that you remember

1.Hera wanted a lion

2.Hurculies strangled the lion

3. Hera put leo in the sky

4.2 entrance cave leo was in

Why What causes certain things to happen in the story?

1.Hurculies needed to do his 12 labors

2.

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Where Where does the story happen?

1.Greek Mythology

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When When does the story happen? How much time does the story cover?

1.aproxamitly 3 months

2.

Drafting (Select the prewriting ideas you want to use. Use your stylus and

number them in the order that you want to use them. Put each idea in its own

sentence. Have at least 7 sentences.)

1. let me teach you about the amazing constellation of this lion, Leo.

2. One day Hera wanted a lion so she got one.

3. She named the amazing Lion Leo.

4. However, king named Eurytheus told Hercules to kill Leo but Hercules as

one of his 12 labors but he did not know how.

5. Eventually, (approximately 3 months later) Hercules found a way to kill

Leo

6. There was a 2-entry cave that Leo was hiding in.

7. Hercules came in one of the entrances and strangled Leo

8. Hera loved the lion so as a symbol she put him up in the sky.

9. Leo usually shows up somewhere in March-May.

10. I really do hope you liked this short story about the amazing lion, Leo.

Revising (Copy and paste your drafting sentences. Now, work on making a

sandwich good introduction and conclusion. Be sure you have lots of specific

detail. Make your first word in each sentence red. Check to see that you use a

variety of sentence starters and transitions.)

1. Let me teach you about the amazing constellation of this lion, Leo.

2. One day, Hera wanted a lion in Olympus so she got one.

3. She named the amazing Lion Leo.

4. A king named Eurytheus told Hercules to kill Leo as one of his 12

labors but he did not know how.

5. Eventually, (approximately 3 months later) Hercules found a way

to kill Leo.

6. Leo was hiding in a 2-entry cave.

7. Hercules came in one of the entrances and strangled Leo

8. Hera loved the lion, so as a symbol of love she put him up in the

stars as a constellation

9. Leo usually shows up somewhere in March-May.

10. I really do hope you liked this short story about the amazing

lion, Leo.

Editing (Check the following after you have done it.)

_____ Select and run spell check and grammar check on revising sentences.

Evaluating (Check the following after you have done it.)

_____Read aloud to a partner.

_____ Have your partner read your sentences back to you.

_____ Have your partner comment on the following. Revise as they give

you feedback.

Did you answer the driving question?

Have you made a sandwich?

Do your details catch the interest of the reader?

Is your summary easy to follow?

Does your writing sound like you? Did you use words that you normally would use? Is your writing easy to read? (check long sentences and awkward sentences)

Publishing (Copy and paste your revised sentences in this space. Then, put your sentences into a paragraph. Please double space. Indent first line. Be sure to center and capitalize your title.)

Lion in the sky

Let me teach you about the amazing constellation of this lion, Leo.

One day, Hera wanted a lion in Olympus so she got one. She named the

amazing Lion Leo. A king named Eurytheus told Hercules to kill Leo as

one of his 12 labors but he did not know how. Eventually,

(approximately 3 months later) Hercules found a way to kill Leo. Leo

was hiding in a 2-entry cave. Hercules came in one of the entrances

and strangled Leo. Hera loved the lion, so as a symbol of love she put

him up in the stars as a constellation. Leo usually shows up

somewhere in March-May. I really do hope you liked this short story

about the amazing lion, Leo.