15 COMMON ERRORS

15 COMMON ERRORS

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We have to improve the life conditions that may favorise a pandemc outbreak.

Correction: Whe have to improve the living conditions that may give rise to ......

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...the time factor is major in preventing pandemics

Correction: the time factor is crucial in preventing pandemics.

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A flu pandemic upsurges every 30 to 40 years.

Correction: A flu pandemic reappears ....

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Every year it’s happening all over again.

Correction: Every year it happens all over again.

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...the recent outbreak in Indonesia shows that it takes at least 30 days to contain the virus from spreading.

Correction...the recent outbreak in Indonesia shows that it takes at least 30 days to prevent / keep the virus from spreading.

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Has Canada enough manufacturing capabilities?

Correction: Does Canada have enough manufacturing capabilities?

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In 1918 it has caused 40 to 50 million deaths.

In 1918 it caused 40 to 50 million deaths.

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A lot of research are done....

Correction: A lot of research is done...

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...Leading nations are doing there best...

Correction: ...Leading nations are doing their best...

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...it could take about a year to get enough vaccine.

Correction: it could take about a year to get enough vaccines.

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Specialists think that in case of a new influenza virus governments won’t be ready to deal with it.

Correction: Specialists think that if a new influenza virus outbreak occurs governments won’t be ready to deal with it.

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Some steps are taken but not enough...

Correction: Some steps are being taken, but not enough...

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Canada is one of the most prepared country for an eventual pandemic

Correction: Canada is one of the best prepared countries for an eventual pandemic.

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We will do all we can to prevent a pandemic to spread.

Correction: We will do all we can to prevent a pandemic from spreading.

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It could take a year to get enough vaccine for the canadian population.

It could take a year to get enough vaccines for the canadian population.