Commas in a Series

“I spent most of the day putting in a comma and the rest of the day

taking it out.”

Demonstrate your attention to Conventions and increase your essay’s Sentence Fluency

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Commas in a Series

Add fluency by combining three or more similar ideas in one sentence.

In a series of three or more terms with a single coordinating conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last:

A, B, conjunction C

Jake’s favorite fruits are bananas, apples, and watermelon.Max enjoys running, jumping, and skating.

Jamie is the most caring, tolerant, considerateperson I know.I am looking for the sharp, yellow, long pencil.

Place a comma between the first and second adjective. Do not place a comma after the last adjective:

A, B, C noun

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Commas in a Series

Add fluency by combining three or more similar ideas in one sentence.

Let’s see how sentences with commas in a series add fluency to a paragraph.

Getting ready for a party can be a daunting, time-consuming, costly task. This is why it is important to be organized. First, I always make a list of the food, decorations, and favors I will need for the party. Next, I plan the places I will need to go to buy all the party supplies. A few days before the party, I do all my shopping. On the day of the party my brother, sister, and best friend usually come help me prepare for the party. Finally, it is time to sit back and enjoy the fun!

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Commas in a Series

Add fluency by combining three or more similar ideas in one sentence.

A, B, C noun A, B, conjunction C

Recently, my parents got sick of constantly giving me money for entertainment. They challenged me to find something to do “for free.” Yeah, right! I gathered my best friend, older brother, and boyfriend to try to brainstorm ideas. As we pondered, I was overwhelmed by the silent, long, boring day passing us by. We had to think of something, or I would surely go insane. Finally, my brother rattled off, “We could go to the beach, the park, or the pool. It doesn’t cost anything to do any of them.” We all decided the pool would be the most fun for that day.

Let’s see how sentences with commas in a series add fluency to a paragraph.

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Let’s see how sentences with commas in a series add fluency to a paragraph.

Commas in a Series

Add fluency by combining three or more similar ideas in one sentence.

A, B, C noun A, B, conjunction C

My favorite summer time activities are swimming, hiking, and rafting. I was lucky enough to get to do all three of these things over the summer. Nothing feels better than diving into a crisp, cool, blue swimming pool. Of course, another summertime passion is hiking to a waterfall in the mountains. Getting to the end of a long trail which leads to an amazing, powerful, refreshing waterfall is, without a doubt, a rewarding experience. At the same time, the adventure of white water river-rafting also draws me to the mountains every summer. Clearly, summer is my favorite time of the year.PowerEd Plans 2014

Commas in a Series

Add fluency by combining three or more similar ideas in one sentence.

Let’s see how sentences with commas in a series add fluency to a paragraph.

A, B, C noun A, B, conjunction C

I cannot live without junk food. When I think about junk food, potato chips, cake, ice cream, cookies, and popcorn, immediately pop into my mind. I love junk food! I realize how unhealthy a diet made of purely non-nutritious food is, but sometimes, I just don’t care. I mean, how can I watch a movie without a bowl of hot, salty, buttery popcorn on my lap? Seriously?!?! Also, who has ever been to a birthday party without cake and ice cream? Imagine putting candles into a salad, apple, or plate of broccoli to sing “Happy Birthday.” That’s just not happening! Junk food is evil, but it is necessary.

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Commas in a Series

Add fluency by combining three or more similar ideas in one sentence.

Let’s see how sentences with commas in a series add fluency to a paragraph.

A, B, C noun A, B, conjunction C

Many privileges come with growing older. Since

I became a teenager I have been able to stay out later, organize my own schedule, and drive a car. Of course, driving has been the greatest privilege I have earned since turning sixteen. There is nothing like the feeling of slipping behind the wheel of a new, shiny, fast car. The power that comes with being able to go anywhere is incredible! Obviously, my parents take advantage of that power, too. They constantly send me on errands to the dry cleaner, the grocery store, and to pick up my little sister. However, I am driving, so I will go anywhere!

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