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Chapter 4: Story structures
15 maggio 2013
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The elements of a story’s structure
• Opening (O)
• Challenge (C)
• Action (A)
• Resolution (R)
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Opening
• Who are the characters, including the main character the story is about?
• Where does the story take place?
• What do you need to understand to follow the story?
• What is the larger problem being addressed?
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Challenge
• What are your characters trying to accomplish?
• What specific question are you trying to answer?
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Action
• What happens to address the challenge?
• What work did you do or are proposing to do (for a proposal)?
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Resolution
• How have the characters and their world changed as a result of the action?
• What did you learn from your work
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Four core story structures
• OCAR
– Slowest, takes time to work into the story
• ABDCE
– Faster, starts in the action
• LD
– Faster yet
• LDR
– Fastest with the whole story up front
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OCAR
• Opening –Challenge – Action – Resolution
• Typical of science papers
– Challenge is at the end of the introuction
– Resolution comes at the conclusion
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ABDCE
• Action – Starts with dramatic action to immediately engage
readers
• Background – Describe characters and setting so that readers
can understand the story
• Development – Follow the action as the story develops to the
climax
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ABDCE
• Climax
– Bring all the threads of the story together and address them
• Ending
– Same as resolution: what happened to the characters after the climax?
• Typical of modern fiction and scientific proposals
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A good story is circular
• Typical of OCAR and ABDCE structures
• By the end, we are back at the beginning
– But things have changed, and we need to highlight how they have changed
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LD
• Lead/Development or the inverted pyramid of news stories
– Core of the story is in the first sentence (lead)
– Rest of the story fills out the story (development)
• In LD, the lead collapses opening, challenge and resolution into a single short section (as short as a sentence).
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LDR
• Lead/Development and Resolution
• Typical of magazine articles
– The lead must be engaging, but the resolution is left for the end, to entice the reader to go to the end
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Story structure in science writing
• Scientific paper: OCAR
– O: opening is larger problem and central “characters”
– C: challenge is interesting question
– A: action is research plan and results
– R: resolution is conclusion about how our understanding about the world has changed as a result of the work
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Story structure in science writing
• Generalist journals (Nature, Science): LDR
– Editors are professionals, not scientists
– Structure should be similar to other magazines
– Start with a strong lead to interest the editors
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Story structure in science writing
• Proposals: LDR or ABDCE
– Your proposal must convince reviewers that the topic identified in the opening is important
– It must fill them with excitement at the questions posed in the challenge
– If it has not done so within the first two pages, you will lose your audience and not get funded
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IMRaD
• Introduction
• Methods
• Results
• and
• Discussion
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Introduction
– Opening
– Background
– Challenge
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Introduction:
– Opening
• First paragraph
• Introduces the larger problem targeted by the paper
• What is the context?
• What are the characters we are studying?
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Introduction:
– Background
• Extension of the Opening section, fleshes out characters
• What information does the reader need to understand this work?
• Why is it important?
• What does it contribute to the larger issues?
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Introduction:
– Challenge
• What are the specific hypotheses/questions/goals of this paper?
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Materials and Methods (M&M):
– Begins describing the Action
– What did you do?
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Results:
– Continues describing the Action
– What were your findings?
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Discussion:
– Climax and Resolution
– What do your findings mean?
– What did you learn?
– If there is a conclusion, this will be your Resolution
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Mapping OCAR to IMRaD
• Opening = beginning of Introduction
• Challenge = end of Introduction
• Action = M&M + Results + Most Discussion
• Resolution = end of Discussion
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Resolution
• Extremely important
• Show how your work has changed our understanding of the world
• Map back your resolution to your opening
– It must say something about the larger problem you identified there
• Your conclusion should address a topic as wide as your opening
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Hourglass structure
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Exercises
• Look at the paper you suggested
– Which story structure does it use?
– Where are its OCAR elements?
• Look at the paper you are writing
– Are the OCAR elements in place?
– If not, rewrite your paper to include them
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