Sentence Structure Sentence Types. Sentence Structure Sentence Types.
Chapter 4 Conclusion and Recommendation · In this text, I tell much descriptive sentences. It is...
-
Upload
truongdang -
Category
Documents
-
view
255 -
download
0
Transcript of Chapter 4 Conclusion and Recommendation · In this text, I tell much descriptive sentences. It is...
1
Chapter 4
Conclusion and Recommendation
The outcome of my internship program in the Department of Tourism and
Culture of Karanganyar Regency is an English tourism website for Department Tourism
and Culture of Karanganyar Regency. The main purpose of my internship is to make
English tourism website and promote the tourist destinations of Karanganyar Regency
in international market. Based on the result and main purpose of making English
tourism website, I expected that the content of English tourism website can be renewed
and developed by the Department of Tourism and Culture of Karanganyar Regency in
the future.
Conclusion
Making English tourism website and promoting tourist destinations are the main
purposes of my internship in the Department of Tourism and Culture of Karanganyar
Regency. I made the English tourism website for 35 days (January 21st- March 1st,
2016). During the internship, I divided the main internship activities into six parts
including doing observation, making promotional text, editing promotional texts,
designing website, presenting and simulating website, and promoting website.
There were some problems as well as the problem solving of making English
tourism website for Department of Tourism and Culture of Karanganyar Regency. The
problems of making English tourism website were the difficulties in mapping out of the
location observation, combining the persuasive and informative text, managing the time
for editing the promotional text, choosing the design of the website, preparing the tools
for presenting and simulating website, and promoting website to foreigner and travel
agency.
The problems of making English tourism website can be solved by using the
Karanganyar tourism map that had been given by Department of Tourism and Culture
of Karanganyar Regency to map out the location of observation, using internet to search
the example of combination persuasive text and informative text, making time table to
arrange the time for editing promotional text, using internet to look for the design of the
foreign tourist website, asking for help to the staff of Department of Tourism and
Culture of Karanganyar Regency to prepare the tools of presentation and using social
media and cooperating with travel agency to promote the website to people in the world.
Recommendation
Based on my internship experience in Department of Tourism and Culture of
Karanganyar Regency, I have some recommendations for Department of Tourism and
Culture of Karanganyar Regency as follows:
1. Department of Tourism and Culture of Karanganyar Regency should try to use
the other media to promote tourist destination of Karanganyar Regency such as
Twitter, Facebook, Instagram and other social media to make official account.
So, they can share the new appearance of Karanganyar Regency and
communicate with society to get critic, advice and suggestion to improve their
services.
2. Department of Tourism and Culture of Karanganyar Regency should hold a
great event to show the local culture such as traditional music, traditional theater
and traditional dance of Karanganyar Regency minimum second time in one
years.
3
References
Damastuti, D.W.K, dkk. (2016). Laporan Kuliah Magang Mahasiswa di Dinas
Pariwisata dan Kebudayaan Kabupaten Karanganyar. Karanganyar:-
Dinas Pariwisata dan Kebudayaan Kabupaten Karanganyar. (2015). Data
Kepariwisataan Kabupaten Karanganyar. Karanganyar: Dinas Pariwisata dan
Kebudayaan Kabupaten Karanganyar.
Pemerintah Kabupaten Karanganyar. (2009). Uraian Tugas dan Fungsi Jabatan
Struktural Pada Dinas Pariwisata dan Kebudayaan Kabupaten Karanganyar.
Karanganyar: Pemerintah Kabupaten Karanganyar
5
Appendices
Appendix – 1: Meeting the marketing staff of Department of Tourism and Culture of
Karanganyar
Appendix – 2: Doing observation at tourist destinations
Appendix – 3: Making promotional texts
1. Indonesian Promotional Text
Cetho Temple
Parang Ijo Waterfall
Karanganyar Regency
Traditional Beverage
2. English promotional text
Before I translated my Indonesian promotional text into English promotional text.
I searched in Internet about the example of persuasive, descriptive and informative text.
It is because those texts usually have different dictions. So, I needed to change my
Indonesian diction into the general English diction.
Therefore, to make good promotional text. I decided the combine those texts to
gain the best imagination of tourist destinations for readers.
The example of persuasive, descriptive and informative sentence
Persuasive sentence
Descriptive sentence
Informative sentence
Cetho Temple
.
During translating this text, I decided to combine persuasive, descriptive and
informative sentence. You can see the first paragraph “Having free time but you have
no idea where you want to go? Come and spend your free time in Cetho Temple.” —
persuasive sentence. Paragraph 3rd & 4th “Indirectly, I stimulated the senses of readers to
feel and think about the atmosphere of temple area— descriptive sentence. Then, “I give
the information about the rituals on Cetho Temple (paragraph 3rd) and how to get there
(paragraph 6th) — informative sentence.
I used the unique thing in the temple area to make they are curious about the real
form of those things. So, they will look for the things in Internet or go around the
temple area directly.
Parang Ijo Waterfall
When I translated this text, I used persuasive, descriptive and informative
sentence as the criterion to make promotional text. The persuasive sentence can be seen
at first paragraph “Do you like mountain atmosphere? Come and visit Parang Ijo.” Then,
in paragraph 2nd line 2 until the end of second paragraph. I decided to use description
sentence because the explanation can attract readers to feel and describe about the
atmosphere of Parang Ijo Waterfall. The informative sentence can be seen at paragraph
3rd line one, paragraph 5 & 6.
In this text, I tell much descriptive sentences. It is because descriptive sentence
can stimulate readers to imagine the weather & atmosphere of Parang Ijo Waterfall.
Karanganyr Regency
The Proof of Translating Traditional Beverage
1. Searching on Internet about: The Ingredients & How to serve the beverage
Es Dawet
Wedang Bandrek
Wedang angsle
Wedang Sinden
Appendix – 4: Editing promotional text
1. Indonesian promotional text
2. English promotional text
Edited by my friend
Checked by my lecturers
Ms. Rini
Checked by Mr. Agus H. W
Edited by native speaker (Mellisa Houck)
3. The final promotional text
Appendix – 5: Designing the Website
1. Liverpool Tourism website
2. London Tourism Website
3. Stockholm Tourism website
4. Mississippi Tourism Website
The design and layout of the English tourism website
Appendix – 6: Presenting and Simulating Website
Presenting
Simulating Website
Arranging the schedule list
Appendix – 7: Promoting the website by social media
Promoting the website by social media
Using twitter
Using Line Using WhatsApp
Using Hello Pall Using Facebook
Promoting the website to travel agency
Based on this activity, some tourist destinations of Karanganyar Regency is available in
the website and tour package of Electra Tour.