castle,’ an old, dark, scary looking place that we tried to avoid. I told him to stay there.

After Sarah had passed, I went back to get my brother. He was gone.

A Babysitting NightmareA Babysitting Nightmare

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It all started when my mom asked me to take my younger brother out for Halloween. I didn’t want to, but I had no choice if I wanted to play with my friends on Saturday.

I told Tommy to stay with me. Everything was fine until I saw Sarah. Sarah was the cutest girl in school- I couldn’t let her see me with my little brother. I pushed Tommy behind the hedge of ‘the

As I turned to walk away I heard a scream.“Tommy!” I yelled. The scream came from behind the door.

The door was unlocked, so I went in …

I had to find him. He must have gone up to the door of the castle looking for candy. Maybe he was inside I thought. I ran up to the door and knocked. No one answered. I knocked once more … no answer.

Click on the door to enter.Click on the door to enter.Click on the door to enter.Click on the door to enter.

Tommy was in here somewhere and I had to find him. Ahead of me were two doors. It looked like one door went up into the attic and the other down into the basement. Which one should I go through?

Tommy was in here somewhere and I had to find him. Ahead of me were two doors. It looked like one door went up into the attic and the other down into the basement. Which one should I go through?

Click on this door to enter the basement.

Click on this door to enter the attic.

Click to go back.Click to go back.

I entered the attic… I notice as I go further down the stairs my little brother, as a creepy clown drags him down the hall I follow after to see around the corner he is gone should I go after him or go for help. go for help go after

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Click to go back.Click to go back.

I entered the basement… I go down the stairs I don’t know where he went so I run down the hall at the were there was a cliff a dead end literally I tried to stop but the floors were covered in something I fall into a big pit of foam should I try to yell for help or find something to pull my self out

yell for help find something to grab

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I go for help to see that I am stuck the door Handel is jammed I see that the clown is coming back for me I panicked when he grabbed me I hit my head and never woke up.

BAD

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I rush down the hall yelling for him all I can see is two doors at the end of the hall and all I can here behind them is screaming it doesn’t sound like my brother but it sound like Sarah in the other room sounds like my brother should I go after Sarah or should I got after my brother. SARAH BROTHER

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I decide to yell for help as I was sinking I got no reply I will suffocate if I don’t find a way out right now I see a light it’s a door as I try to pull myself out of the foam pit I am getting pulled under I am dead.

BAD

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found a leaver above a door the walls we to slick to get our so I jumped up and hit the leaver the stone door opened behind it was my brother he helped pull me out but he was not strong enough should I find another way out or have my brother go on without me.

Brother go find way out

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I go after Sarah but as I go to reach for the door the screams stop I slam open the door to find a blank room I go in as I notice the walls are closing in as I start to sink I was done for. BAD

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I go to open the door the door handle was broke off I hear inside the room tumbling and thrashing as the door open’s from the inside scared to see the results behind the door it was my brother. GOOD

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I tell my brother to go for help but as he went I began to sink as I saw the light of dawn I knew it was my last look. bad

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I am about to sink I told I am about to sink I told my brother to hurry as I my brother to hurry as I was about to go under he was about to go under he gave me his arm and some gave me his arm and some how he found the power to how he found the power to pull me out we climbed pull me out we climbed out the window and when out the window and when home.home. goodgood