DEC. 3, 2012J ILL PAVICH, NBCT

J I L L . PAV I CH@PAL MBE ACHS CHO O L S . O RG * * *

BOCA RATON COMMUNITY HIGH SCHOOL

Cambridge Teacher “Best Practices”

Workshop Program

Jill Pavich, Workshop Facilitator

Boca Raton High School, English Department (9 years)

AICE: General Paper, grades 9 & 10 (4 years)

Kent State University, English Education/Writing minor

Florida Atlantic University, Curriculum & Instruction/ELA

Nationally Board Certified (NBCT) in 2009

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EXAM DAY: WHAT TO EXPECT, A SIMULATION

TEST DIRECTIONS STUDENT INFORMATION SHEET THE TEST

WORKSHOP SESSION 1: The Exam

The General Paper…what does it look like?

Administered in MAY/June and Oct./Nov.WRITTEN examination, 2 ESSAYS in 2

HOURS (1 day of testing)The exam paper is divided into three sections,

with five prompt options in each for a total of 15.Candidates must choose two questions, each

from a different section.Each essay is weighted at 50% of the final mark.Each essay written carries up to 30 marks for

Content and up to 20 marks for Use of English/ Conventions.

SCORING

The AICE: General Paper exam grades students on two aspects of the final product essay: CONTENT (30 points) CONVENTIONS (20 points)……………………..2 ESSAYS = 100pts max

So do their facts need to be accurate? YES!!!Do they need to cross all t’s and dot all i’s? YES!!!!

BAND 1 = BESTBAND 5 = WORST

View the RUBRICS for a quick understanding of the scoring process.

SECTION 1: Historical, Social, Economic, Political and

Philosophical

the role of history and war; terrorism the role of the individual in society – the family, marriage, peer

pressure, social class cultural changes – youth and drug culture education and welfare sport, leisure, international competition wealth; changes in work practice the importance and impact of tourism on a country – implications for

the economy, employment public transport, environmental concerns aid provision the State and its institutions; development of State, democracy post-

imperialism, nationalism minority groups, pressure groups freedom of speech, action, thought Judiciary matters of conscience, faith, tolerance, equality.

SECTION 2: Science, Geography, Math

medical dilemmas and issues of research and ethics; concept of progress in science

drug manufacture and provision diet, health education old and new industries spin-offs from space industry; weaponry information and communications technology; the Internet environmental concerns; renewable energy resources; climate

change migration; population dynamics feeding the global population; farming techniques for the twenty-

first century public transport and travel the uses and applications of mathematics in everyday life.

SECTION 3: Literature , Language, Arts and Crafts

literature, biography, diary, science fictionlanguage – heritage, tradition, dialectthe global media – tv, radio, satellite; influence and

controls; effects on lifestyle, culture and habitscultural dilution and diversification; advertising; role

modelscensorship; privacy; the right to know; freedom of the

press, etc. uses and abusestraditional arts and crafts; creativity; national

heritage/preservation; effects of tourismarchitecture; painting; fashion; photography;

sculpture; music; heritage, etc.

Sample Exam

A few things I often notice about the exam layout each year…in communicating these observations to your students, you will immediately ease test day anxiety for them because they will know what to expect and be ready for it! The Intimidator The Unrecognizable The Poet The Specialist The Aha! The ‘Here Goes Nothin’ The Common Senser

The Intimidator

“OMG…I am SO not smart enough for this test! What was I thinking?!”

How far do you agree that an hereditary monarch as Head of State is preferable to an elected President?

How justified are the high salaries and bonuses paid out in some professions?

Given the misery in both human and personal history, is it possible to believe in compassionate Divinity?

The Unrecognizable

“OMG. We SO did not learn this in class! How am I gonna pass this test?!”

Are there any aspects of fashion that you would consider timeless?

Is cooking more than just a necessity?

How important is dance in the life of a nation?

The Specialist

“OMG. This prompt is SO not in my knowledge department…”How far is it true to claim that pesticides have done

more harm than good?

How far is mathematics the “true” universal language?

How feasible is human settlement on other planets?

How important is it to explore alternative forms of energy?

The Aha!

“OMG. We actually did one like this in class! It’s my lucky DAY!”

Should obesity be regarded as a health concern? (Mini-Unit on HEALTH/MEDICAL)

Should there be any limits to the freedom of expression? (Mini-Unit on LAW/Constitution)

To what extent is climate change a bigger global threat than terrorism? (Upfront articles on ENVIRONMENT and FOREIGN POLICY)

The breakup of the Soviet Union has ended the Socialist dream. To what extent is this true? (Orwell coverage + Universal Healthcare debate)

ESSAY SAMPLES

PACKET OF ESSAY SAMPLES:

EXPOSITORY: What are the most important areas for government

spending? PERSUASIVE:

Can breaking the law ever be justified? Is science a dream or a nightmare?

DISCURSIVE: In what ways does a country benefit and suffer from

where it is situated? To what extent is there equality of opportunity in your

country? HYBRID PROMPT…Expository + Discursive:

What are the main environmental problems in your part of the world and how effectively are they being tackled?

ESSAY SAMPLES…

IMPORTANT NOTE: Many of the “GP” writing strategies you may have picked up or heard about along the way will be present in the essay samples to follow. However, please be aware that there is no set formula for using these…To force two examples in every single body paragraph, for example, will only lead to trouble. If a student is stuffing just anything in there to fit the mold, well, chances are they are wasting their own time…or worse yet, they might stray from the topic entirely.

ESSAY SAMPLES…

Strategies for crafting a body paragraph should occur naturally, as they relate to the point being made. Don’t mark a student down simply because they don’t meet some imaginary requirement that every paragraph needs x, y, and z. Simply ask yourself: • Does the student present a main idea in relation to the

thesis? • Does the student stay on topic? • Does the student present compelling evidence in favor

of his/her point?

TIPS

TIPS: Organization

MYTH…discursive essays must be 6 paragraphs in length.

FACT…no they don’t! A discursive essay can be 7 paragraphs, 8 paragraphs, 9! While balance, for the most part, is needed, it can be a 60-40 split. Here’s an example: Intro (1) Body Paragraphs in favor of topic (3) Body Paragraphs against topic (4) Conclusion (1) 9 Total!

TIPS: Support/Content

MYTH: The essay’s support must dominate in fact.

FACT: The essay’s support must be a logical argument, however this is achieved.

Find a balance between student voice and fact rattling! Too much opinion leads to rants, hasty

generalizations, and logical fallacies, and abstract thinking.

Too much fact leads to awkward expression, loss of audience interest, greater likelihood for fact inaccuracies and a greater chance of strayed focus.

FACT: You must express ideas CLEARLY or content means nothing!

TIPS: Support/Content

REMIND STUDENTS: Don’t bog the essay down with picky details

and statistics that don’t prove significant. Approximate numbers when possible to simplify

them and to make them more reader-friendly! When you do use numbers, give them

significance. Don’t let examples trail off without

explanation, assuming the audience knows what you’re talking about! Poor Support: “For example, Lance Armstrong in the

Tour de France.” What about it?! Tell me more (but not too much, lol).

TIPS: Expression/Conventions

MYTH: The English criteria weighs less on the rubric than Content; it’s only 20 points out of 50, so it must not be as big of a deal.

FACT: This part of the rubric “walks softly but [carries] a big stick”! The impact of content is automatically LESSENED by

loose expression! Grammar, spelling, and punctuation might be good,

but the meaning of a point might be difficult to follow because it is awkwardly expressed!

OR…rampant grammar, spelling and/or punctuation errors might make content difficult to follow!

Broad Term? Get Your Hands Dirty!

CRIME

Science/Tech.Environment

Politics/Gov’t

Social/Cultural

Media, Entertainment

CRIME: Look how many ways we can test this topic!

How successfully is crime tackled in your society? (May/June 2010)

To what extent is your society effectively dealing with crime? (May/June 2009)

How effectively does your society deal with young offenders? (May/June 2008)

Can breaking the law ever be justified? (May/June 2005)

Assess the alternatives to prison in dealing with offenders. (May/June 2003)

Any Burning Questions So Far?

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TYPES OF ESSAYS: 3 STYLES REVIEW

SAMPLE ESSAYS & ELEMENTS GRADING THE ESSAY: TIPS

WORKSHOP SESSION 2: The Essays

Generating Ideas

How do I find ideas?? T h i n k G P R E L E VA N C E … ! ! !

State, national, international Past history, current events Consider all academic categories

Use the Hand Approach to help you…

THUMB: SCIENCE and TECHNOLOGY

INDEX: GOVERNMEN

T and POLITICS

MIDDLE: ENVIRONMEN

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RING: SOCIAL

RELATIONSHIPS

PINKY: MEDIA,

SPORTS and ENTERTAINM

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PROMPT

CREDITS: Teaching the General Paper: Strategies That Work, By Teachers, For TeachersNational Institute of Education, Nanyang Technological UniversityEdited by Caroline Ho, Peter Teo, Tay May Yin (2006)

Prompt Identification

There are three basic types of essay tasks that the GP will assess:

EXPOSITORY, PERSUASIVE, or DISCURSIVE

Identifying the Prompt Style—handout Trigger Words Basic Rules Considerations Prompt ID Practice “Absolutes” to share with Students More Considerations

Essay Styles EXPOSITORY

GOAL: to provide information; to objectively EXPLAIN, define,

clarify or interpret… UNIQUENESSES:

doesn’t require an argument! Just tell it like it is!

PERSUASIVE GOAL:

to take a specific stance on an issue in order to CONVINCE the reader to adopt your way of thinking; to anticipate opposing viewpoints and refute via counter-argument

UNIQUENESSES: biased! Takes ONE side and defends that side ONLY!!

Never supports the opposition, not even for a minute.

Essay Styles Con’t

The third style of essay is, perhaps, brand new to you… DISCURSIVE (most advanced…pros and cons, oh

my!) GOAL:

asks you to consider BOTH sides of a single issue, objectively analyzing each before arriving at any kind of value judgment.

Basic Layout: Begin with a neutral introduction, provide evidence

for the case, provide evidence against the case, conclude by either adopting one side of the argument or maintaining a neutral (middle-of-the- road) standpoint.

PROMPT TASKS…a Guide to SuccessWe will discuss much when it comes to decoding

prompts, but here are your GOLDEN RULES when determining the style of your essay:

GOLDEN RULE #1… Once a Discursive, always a Discursive.

GOLDEN RULE #2… Persuasive is fine, but add to refine!

GOLDEN RULE #3… It might be expository, but don’t get freaked if you

feel like the force is with you…(every time we put the pen to paper we are arguing-ish!) I call it, ‘fight, despite’!!

Breaking Down the Prompt

Take a look at the Sample Test.

With your partner, determine the style of each of the 15 prompts provided.

Jot (E) for Expository, (P) for Persuasive, or (D) for Discursive in the margin to the left of the test question.

SECTION 1:

1. What are the benefits and drawbacks of globalization?

2. ‘Not too much nor too little.’ To what extent is this the basis for a fulfilled life?

3. What are the most important areas for government spending?

4. ‘The most effective learning takes place away from school.’ How far do you agree?

5. In what ways does a country both benefit and suffer from where it is situated?

KEY: SECTION 1

1. What are the benefits and drawbacks of globalization? (Discursive)

2. ‘Not too much nor too little.’ To what extent is this the basis for a fulfilled life? (Discursive)

3. What are the most important areas for government spending? (Expository)

4. ‘The most effective learning takes place away from school.’ How far do you agree? (Discursive)

5. In what ways does a country both benefit and suffer from where it is situated? (Discursive)

SECTION 2

6. Consider the view that water is more important than oil.

7. ‘There are more advantages to living in the countryside than in the town.’ Discuss.

8. ‘Technology gives us the ability to control our own lives.’ How far do you agree or disagree?

9. How far would you agree that developing countries have more urgent priorities than environmental protection?

10. What more should be done to discourage people from damaging their own health?

KEY: SECTION 2

6. Consider the view that water is more important than oil. (Discursive)

7. ‘There are more advantages to living in the countryside than in the town.’ Discuss. (Discursive)

8. ‘Technology gives us the ability to control our own lives.’ How far do you agree or disagree? (Discursive)

9. How far would you agree that developing countries have more urgent priorities than environmental protection? (Discursive)

10.What more should be done to discourage people from damaging their own health? (Expository)

SECTION 3

11. “A book has one purpose: to entertain.” Assess this statement.

12. Assess the advantages and problems of hosting major international sporting events.

13. How far should the media of any society reflect the views of its leaders?

14. People who ignore religion reject vital aspects of their culture and life. Do you agree?

15. To what extent is language limited in its capacity to communicate?

KEY: SECTION 3

11. “A book has one purpose: to entertain.” Assess this statement. (Discursive)

12.Assess the advantages and problems of hosting major international sporting events. (Discursive)

13.How far should the media of any society reflect the views of its leaders? (Discursive)

14. People who ignore religion reject vital aspects of their culture and life. Do you agree? (Discursive)

15.To what extent is language limited in its capacity to communicate? (Discursive)

Tackling the COMPLEX Prompt…

Sometimes, prompts are NOT so easy to decode, however. In fact, some GP prompts can get pretty complex in design

because they ask you to do more than one task in a single essay; and if you don’t answer ALL parts of the question, you risk point loss!

Read carefully for the following verbiage, which can make a BIG difference in how you approach the prompt: The complex use of conjunctions such as AND, OR,

AND/OR Numbers…the prompt specifies how many issues/ideas it

wants you to cover (i.e. Name three…) The use of “such as” or “like,” which tends to invite

suggestions but does not require these suggestions to be covered

Any mention of ___ and ___ does not mean to discuss the issues simultaneously! (i.e. consider X’s impact on society and self…regard yourself and the group as separate entities!)

COMPLEX PROMPTS:

Circle the words that make a difference in how the response is formulated:

Of all the advances and discoveries in medicine in the last fifty years, which two do you consider will prove to be of greatest significance in the twenty-first century and why? (May/June 2010)

In what ways has the work of one artist, one musician, or one writer influenced your life? (May/June 2010)

Today, news can be transmitted by anybody with access to technology. Assess the implications of this change. (Oct./Nov. 2010)

KEY: COMPLEX PROMPTS

Circle the words that make a difference in how the response is formulated:

Of all the advances and discoveries in medicine in the last fifty years, which two do you consider will prove to be of greatest significance in the twenty-first century and why? (May/June 2010)

In what ways has the work of one artist, one musician, or one writer influenced your life? (May/June 2010)

Today, news can be transmitted by anybody with access to technology. Assess the implications of this change. (Oct./Nov. 2010)

COMPLEX PROMPTS:

How effectively are traditional crafts maintained and supported in your society? (Oct./Nov. 2010)

Explain the lessons which can be learnt from recent global financial crises regarding personal, corporate, and government debt. (Oct./Nov. 2010)

Do objects from ancient societies, such as potteries and paintings, have any value? (May/June 2005)

Consider the problem of noise in society and ways to reduce it. (May/June 2004)

KEY: COMPLEX PROMPTS

How effectively are traditional crafts maintained and supported in your society? (Oct./Nov. 2010) (SEE EXAM REPORT #1-2)

Explain the lessons which can be learnt from recent global financial crises regarding personal, corporate, and government debt. (Oct./Nov. 2010)

Do objects from ancient societies, such as potteries and paintings, have any value? (May/June 2005)

Consider the problem of noise in society and ways to reduce it. (May/June 2004)

COMPLEX PROMPTS:

Assess the most important areas for government spending. (Oct./Nov. 2002)

In considering the languages you are familiar with, evaluate the influence they have in your society and on yourself. (May/June 2012)

Why do human beings of all ages feel the need to play? (May/June 2012)

How far, in your opinion, can communication be achieved through dance and/or drama? (May/June 2012)

KEY: COMPLEX PROMPTS

Assess the most important areas for government spending. (Oct./Nov. 2002)

In considering the languages you are familiar with, evaluate the influence they have in your society and on yourself. (May/June 2012)

Why do human beings of all ages feel the need to play? (May/June 2012)

How far, in your opinion, can communication be achieved through dance and/or drama? (May/June 2012)

MORE PRACTICE…

Take a look at the next set of prompts.

These are also unique and a little more advanced in prompt identification…embrace the challenge!

Prompt Identification

1. Discuss the idea that reading printed books is a thing of the past.

2. What, in your view, are the most significant advantages to being proficient in more than one language?

3. Of all the advances and discoveries in medicine in the last fifty years, which two do you consider will prove to be of greatest significance in the twenty-first century and why?

KEY: Prompt Identification

1. Discuss the idea that reading printed books is a thing of the past. (DISCURSIVE)

2. What, in your view, are the most significant advantages to being proficient in more than one language? (EXPOSITORY)

3. Of all the advances and discoveries in medicine in the last fifty years, which two do you consider will prove to be of greatest significance in the twenty-first century and why? (EXPOSITORY)

Prompt Identification

4. Why does graffiti appeal to so many people, and why does it offend so many others?

5. Can the world sustain our increasing dependence on electricity?

6. Account for the ever-increasing popularity of digital photography.

KEY: Prompt Identification

4. Why does graffiti appeal to so many people, and why does it offend so many others? (DISCURSIVE)

5. Can the world sustain our increasing dependence on electricity? (PERSUASIVE)

6. Account for the ever-increasing popularity of digital photography. (EXPOSITORY)

Prompt Identification

7. Discuss the view that the Internet can be more harmful than helpful.

8. Is it important to preserve old buildings or to encourage new forms of architecture?

9. Handwriting is often considered a relic of the past. Argue the case for retaining it.

KEY: Prompt Identification

7. Discuss the view that the Internet can be more harmful than helpful. (DISCURSIVE)

8. Is it important to preserve old buildings or to encourage new forms of architecture? (PERSUASIVE)

9. Handwriting is often considered a relic of the past. Argue the case for retaining it. (PERSUASIVE)

Prompt Decoding: Some ‘Absolutes’ to Share with Your

Teens

Truth #1: It’s impossible to know what will appear on the test…

Truth #2: Things aren’t always what they seem when it comes to prompt wording…

Truth #3: ‘Fun’ prompts aren’t always a hit after all…

Truth #4: Cambridge recycles! So can you!

See Handout for more information!

Other Considerations When Decoding Prompts:

How important are local artists, such as painters, writers and musicians in your society?

Consider adverts you know well and suggest reasons for their impact.

Can child labour ever be justified? (favourite, criticise)

Evaluate the characteristics that make the people of your country unique as a nation.

Do economic sanctions serve any useful purpose? (globalization, modernization, privatization, outsourcing, etc.)

‘Knowledge is power.’ Discuss.

RESOURCES FOR TEACHING CONTENT

Open Forum Discussion BUILDING A MINI-UNIT: MEDIA

Separate PowerPoint & Links THE GREAT GP DEBATE

Separate Links

WORKSHOP SESSION 3: CONTENT

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