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BLC Writing moderations 2019
Year 3 examples
Exceeding – this example achieved all the success criteria, met the National Curriculum criteria and included editing.
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Exceeding – using a variety of sentence lengths, editing the work effectively and thinking carefully about vocabulary choices.
Exceeding: using a variety of sentence lengths, editing the work effectively and thinking carefully about vocabulary choices taken from things the pupil has read.
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At age related expection. Able to learn spellings – often scores 10/10 in tests but doesn’t always apply this in independent writing.
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At Age related expectation.
Learning objectives achieved and some advanced literary techniques however some sentences don’t make sense as not used correctly.
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Working towards: still working towards a basic level of independent work. All the work is heavily scaffolded or with adult support
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Working towards: able to use alliteration however sentences are not sometimes grammatically correct eg a/an etc
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