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BETTER BUSINESS WRITING
MEA CONFERENCE APRIL 2010
1. Text language: Thx 4 yr txt
2. Informal: Got your note and liked it
3. Chatty: Thanks for your note. I’ve read it with interest.
4. Formal yet friendly: Thank you for your letter and the comments
you make.
5. Official: I have received your letter and noted the matters you
raise.
6. Officialese: Receipt is acknowledged of your recent
communication, whose contents have been noted.
7. Legalese: Acknowledgement is hereby made of your
communication (hereinafter “The Letter”) by the undersigned
who has apprehended its matter.
CHOOSING THE RIGHT STYLE AND TONE
1. Write like you speak
2. Strive for shorter sentences
3. Use personal pronouns such as I, we and you
4. Use simpler words
5. Cut the clutter
6. Choose the active rather than passive voice
TIPS FOR ACHIEVING THE RIGHT STYLE
In the initial days of establishment, the precedents are formulated
which will support the effective and on going management and
continuous improvement of our performance throughout the contract.
Our installation methodology will provide a straight-forward process
for planning and conceiving project scope and requirements.
WHY IT’S IMPORTANT TO WRITE LIKE YOU SPEAK
WHY IT’S IMPORTANT TO WRITE LIKE YOU SPEAK
When establishing relationships and working arrangements with new clients, we set up plans to ensure we can deliver outstanding performance through the life of the contract.
We have a straightforward process for mapping out the scope of a project and identifying its ongoing requirements. We integrate all relevant factors and clearly communicate the desired business results (not just technical details) in a format that suits
When establishing relationships and working arrangements with new clients, we set up plans to ensure we can deliver outstanding performance through the life of the contract.
We have a straightforward process for mapping out the scope of a project and identifying its ongoing requirements. We integrate all relevant factors and clearly communicate the desired business results (not just technical details) in a format that suits
When establishing relationships and working arrangements with new
clients, we set up plans to ensure we deliver outstanding
performance through the life of the contract.
We have a straightforward process for mapping out the scope of a
project and identifying its requirements.
Strive for short sentences
idea per sentence
Officialese: To give confidence to the view that the certified product
continues to comply with certification requirements, and to support the
renewal process attached to the certification, product is subjected to a
regular product verification audit and a review of the measures to control
quality of product. 46 words
Formal yet friendly: To give you confidence that your certified product
continues to comply with certification requirements, we conduct regular
verification audits and review quality control measures. 24 words
SPEAK DIRECTLY TO YOUR READERS
Keep it simple – choose the
shortest word
Additional Numerous
Approximately Prioritise
Ascertain Purchase
Commencement In the absence of
Concerning In the event of
Demonstrate Is reliant upon
Endeavour For the purpose of
Facilitate In order to
Hereunder In recent times
Identify In relation to
Legislation
Methodology
“Let us have an end to such phrases as these: “It is also of
importance to bear in mind the following considerations . . .”
or, “Considerations should be given to the possibility of
carrying into effect . . .” Most of these woolly phrases are
mere padding, which can be left out altogether, or replaced
by a single word. Let us not shrink from using the short,
expressive phrase, even if it is conversational.
Winston Churchill: memo to all civil servants 1940
CHOOSING THE SHORTEST WORD
Cut the clutter
ROI on the CMS HTML site is up by 30%.
I believe the inflation of the City Metro's business case is well
within the industry best-practice benchmarks for PowerPoint
slides produced by consultants to effect the greenlighting of
projects going forward. The Sydney Morning Herald, 27 October 2009.
Avoid jargon
“Adverbs are like dandelions. If you have one on your lawn,
it looks pretty and unique. If you fail to root it out, however,
you have five the next day … 50 the day after that … and
then, my brothers and sisters, your lawn is totally,
completely and profligately covered with dandelions.”Stephen King
CUT OUT ADVERBS (BASICALLY,
ACTUALLY, REALLY, CURRENTLY,
EFFECTIVELY)
Beware of repetition
I think, … like … like …
Use active verbs
USE THE ACTIVE VOICE
Active verb: The board considered the advice.
Passive verb: The advice was considered by the
board.
Nominalisation or hidden verb: The board gave
consideration to the advice.
KNOW THE
DIFFERENCE
BETWEEN
COMMUNICATING . . .
• Hypothesis
• Method
• Results
• Discussion
• Conclusion
. . . AND THINKING
MEDIUM
AUDIENCE
PURPOSE
AUDIENCE CHECKLIST
• Who will be reading this?
• How much do they know already?
• What questions will they have?
• How much can they absorb?
• How will I supply additional information?
IDENTIFYING YOUR AUDIENCE
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MAPPING YOUR DOCUMENT
What
medium
should I
use?
Who is my
audience?
PURPOSE
• WHY AM I WRITING THIS?
• WHAT’S MY TOPIC OR
PROBLEM?
• WHAT SHOULD IT
ACHIEVE?
What’s my
purpose?
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MAPPING YOUR DOCUMENT
What
medium
should I
use?
Who is my
audience?What’s my
purpose?
What
outcome do
I want to
achieve?
What actions
should follow the
reading of my
document?
What outcomes
do I want to
achieve as a result
of those actions?
EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION
• Structure it appropriately
• Pay attention to lay out
• Use tried and tested techniques to make it interesting
Provide important
firstinformation
VARIATION provides pace and rhythm
Give time to your head line
Showdon’t tell
SHOW DON’T TELL
Tell: Our directors take their responsibilities to good corporate
governance extremely seriously.
Show: All eleven directors purchased their holdings in the market
just as you did; we’ve never passed out options or restricted shares.
Charlie and I love honest-to-God ownership. After all, who ever
washes a rental car?
Illustrate with anecdotes
. . .tell stories
THE FINAL STAGE . . . . . .
time to practise liposuction
• Substantial editing
• Copy editing
• Proofreading
SUBSTANTIAL EDITING
• Does it work in the medium?
• Does the layout make for easy reading?
• Is my purpose clear?
• Have I included what my readers want and need to know?
• Is important info up front?
• Is there flow and logic?
• Am I happy with the headline?
COPY EDITING
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