Audience Feedback

Documentary:This feedback tells me that the interviews followed conventions and that they were done in a professional standard. It also tells me that the opening sequence could be improved. I would do this by recording the footage instead of taking pictures to create a smoother stop motion.

Radio Trailer:This feedback tells me that the radio trailer was successful and would intrigue people if it were real. It also tells me that the voice used could have been more positive and lively. I would do this by telling the person doing the voice of the radio trailer, what was needed by them, in this case liveliness.

Print Advert:This tells me that all conventions were followed in the print advert as the audience was able to understand the topic and had all the information needed (e.g scheduling). It also tells me that the background of the image used could have been more interesting.

Documentary:This audience feedback tells me that the archive footage (adverts and video clips) were interesting to people watching. It also tells me that this topic might not have been the most interesting overall and that the opening sequence could have been improved.

Radio Trailer:This feedback tells me that the radio trailer was informative enough for people to be able to find to watch if they wanted to. It also tells me that the voice could be more interesting again.

Print Advert:This feedback tells me that it was interesting and informative about the documentary. It also tells me that it could have been more colourful. I would improve this by using different colours that related to sandwiches on the advert banners behind the text, instead of black. I would also make the white background more interesting. However, it was our target audience research at the start of the planning that helped us make the choice of the colours that we used.

Documentary:This feedback tells me that the documentary was interesting and entertaining enough for the audience and that the interviews and music choice was good. It also tells me that the opening sequence could have been improve like stated before. And that the sound on some interviews were obviously louder or quieter than others. To improve this iwould go through the whole documentary checking the sound and changing its volume if it was too different to others.

Radio Trailer:This feedback tells me that it followed conventions and was informative, which is partially what I aimed for. It also tells me that the radio advert should have included the ‘channel 4’ in it.

Print Advert:This feedback tells me that the advert was good enough to make someone want to watch it. It also told me that it could have been more colourful and eye catching, I disagree with this statement as the colours on the advert were chosen specifically from the target audience research we did at the start of the planning. The results from that told us to do it in these colours.

This audience feedback from facebook tells me that the people who watched it, did enjoy it. And the mise en scene was correct for the interviews. The main improvement found throughout the whole audience feedback is the opening sequence. And also, some of the footage’s quality could have been improved, to portray a more professional look.

Overall I think that the documentary and ancillary texts have been successful in following the codes and conventions.