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ATTITUDINAL STANCE BUNDLES IN SECONDARY STUDENTS FLASH NARRATIVES:
An Analysis of ESL Learners Written Register
Clark Dominic L. Alipasa
Graduate Student * DEAL * De La Salle University
I. INTRODUCTION
The importance of analyzing multi-word succession or recurrent expressions, first
introduced in the Longman Grammar of Spoken and Written English as Lexical Bundles (Biber et
al. 1999), has been extendedly noted in a great succession of studies wherein a significant
number was conducted by Biber with different colleagues (Biber & Conrad, 1999; Biber,
Johansson, Leech, Conrad, & Finegan, 1999; Biber, Conrad, & Cortes 2003, 2004; Biber &
Barbieri, 2007). These investigations are typically made within academic settingsin all
instructional and student advising registerswherein it has been proven in varied results that
these expressions have been very prevalent in spoken discourse, most greatly during classroom
teaching/management, and even more common in written registers, especially in course
designing or management (Biber & Barbieri, 2007).
Additionally, it is often claimed that learning to use these types of [lexical] bundles
appropriately and to maximize their functional roles in coherent discourse production are saidto be essential to achieve native-like fluency and optimal pragmatic success (Tanck, 2004).
Thus, these recurrent succession of words is one of the most important [yet disregarded]
building blocks of any written or spoken discourse. It is also counterclaimed that lexical bundles
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[anyway] are not the only central prerequisite in the creation of academic discourse/s (Hyland,
2008).
Most investigations are commonly done with non-native speakers- academic writings
and diploma theses (Navratilova 2012) because research into the interactive quality of
academic text has mainly been confined to professional writing rather than on undergraduate
writing which may not necessarily be seen as writing for an authentic academic audience
(OBrien, 1995).Furthermore, whereas there are various corpora used by researchers to
analyse written academic genres used by L2 graduate and post-graduate students, it becomes
questionable that almost none focused on the literary compositions of students, particularlysecondary learners and their fiction writing, since published academic texts were found to
exhibit a wider range of lexical bundles as compared to L2 student writers works (Chen &
Baker, 2010). Indeed, students may not have the professional content or discourse knowledge
that experts do, assignments given often require them to learn how to analyze and evaluate
content knowledge, how to position themselves in disciplinary debates and to articulate that
positioning in a congruent manner (Mei, 2007).
Written compositions may portray the best and most frequent ideas that a student uses
as an expression of his/her own attitude through the personalities of his/her characters in a
fictional work. Individuals find ideas and transform them into a creative output. Accordingly,
they begin retrieving information from [their own] memory, and these ideas are original
(Kaufman, 2013: 326). Therefore, students assigned to compose, e.g. a narrative, would express
things in a manner which is natural or spontaneous, especially through the use of direct
speechesenclosed in quotations marks, showing the persons exact words (STLCC, 2013), and
these also contain stance markers. Aside from using academic writings, recorded conversations
and professional essays, these [narrative] outputs may also serve as satisfactory subjects for
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evaluating how learners would possibly express attitudinal stance freely since direct quotes in
stories neither require strict rules in grammar, syntax and the like.
Apparently, a number of studies focusing on recurrent succession of words and even
speech acts sets often aimed to comparecite the differencesbetween native and non-
native speakersexpressions, and the corpora tested were mostly from professionals and
graduate levels (e.g. Tanck, 2004; Biber, et al. 2004; Biber & Barbieri, 2007; Doncheva, 2012;
Chen & Baker 2010). These experts tend not to stoop down to secondary-level outputs
probably because of the advanced level of proficiency possessed by published works in the
higher level. Nevertheless, stages of development in the adolescent period when learners startto ignite their passion and creativity in writing shall also be monitored to see and improve early
signs of progress and to identify the most basic sets of expressions they use that create lexical
bundles.
In addition, while Biber and colleagues examine native and non-native speakers, they
were not into classifying non-native speakers (1999;2001; 2004; 2007; and 2010), particularly
in countries in which the second language is English due to significant history, colonization
and/or acculturation. In accordance, there are two varieties of non-natives, and one of which
comprises the nativized speakerstho who grew up speaking the second language at home
most probably as a common means of communication. This term highly pertains especially to
those children of mixed marriages. Although nativizationis a term operationalized by Arends in
1995 to categorize these certain speakers, any first language used by the child at home
*regardless the nationality and the peoples main mode of communication] can also be
considered as his/her native (Richards, et al. 2004) since there is a clear distinction to those
students who regularly speak English and those who only use it for academic, professional and
other special cases. Nativized speakers also frequently talk and thinkcreate thoughts and
ideas in ones mindusing the colonial language even during times of metacognition.
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Thenceforth, the following are the questions the this present study seeks answers to:
1.What lexical bundles do high school students usually use in writing narrative to express theircharacters attitude?
2.Which modality stance bundles among utterances of desire, obligation, intention and ability
are most frequently used by English learners in an ESL country?
3.Which between the two groups of learners use a wider and longer variation attitudinal lexical
bundles more often?
4.Why do/dontstudents make use of other uncommon and orthographically lengthier lexical
phrases of stance in their fiction compositions?
Notably, several respects make this present study distinctive from other research on
lexical bundles:
1. It pays more attention to the learners whose progress must be tracked gradually to
measure their language achievement.
2. It compares, not only native to non-native speakers, but two groups of non-native
speakers within the same ESL context, however, differing in the context of how, where
and when the language is being used.
3. It uses genre-specific corpora wherein the discipline is not limited to student essays (e.g.
Aktas & Cortes, 2008; Loudermilk, 2007; Mei, 2006 and 2007), academic conversations
and writings (e.g. Samraj, 2008; Martinez, 2003; Cortes, 2008, Kwan, 2006; Bunton,
2005), but herewith, literary composition on how they express others (their characters)
attitude in their own point of view or narration will be extensively considered.
4. Attidunal, or also known as modality stance, bundles are particularized in this study
which also stresses the learners expression of certainty, uncertainty or their epistemic
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level through the use of phrases which are used more regularly and oftentimes
subconsciously.
Nativized and non-native speaker in an ESL country and their registers must be
subjected to juxtaposition to deliberately prove or disprove the common notion that speakers
exposed to the use of language early and more frequently develop greater proficiency and
language literacy. (Penfield & Roberts, 1959; Espinosa, 2007; Moyer, 1999). This may also be
hypothetically covering the issue of debunking the English usage as a medium of instruction in
early grade following the K-12 curriculum, yet could objectively conclude if being a
nativized/pidginized learner is truly a huge advantage especially in attaining/using the
knowledge on the various types lexical bundles and their importance.
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II. LITERARY REVIEW
Multi-word units constitute a significant percentage in any body of work. It has truly
been proven to be prevalent in different corpora used by researchers such as in Chen & Bakers
research wherein academic writing exhibited the widest range (2010). This recurrent word
sequences are nowadays more often addressed as lexical bundles as popularized in the
Longman Grammar of Spoken and Written English(Biber et al. 1999) and the same term was
also used by other colleagues as Cortes in 2002, Hyland in 2008, Conrad in 2004 and Barbieri in
2007. Nonetheless, little misconceptions and/or overlapping arise as other terms describing
word sequences are also used in other studies; these, accordingly, are also labeled asformulaic
sequences(Wray, 2000, 2002),fixed expression(Moon, 1992), lexical phrases(Nattinger, 1988),
multiword lexical units(Cowie, 1992), and N-grams(Cheng et al. 1992). Moreover, it is also
analogous to deictic expressions of time, space, personal, social and discourse under
pragmatics (Huang, 2007).
Attitudinal Lexical Bundles
Most of the recurrent succession of words are used to create stance bundles. Hence,
attitudinal or modality stance bundles appears spontaneously in students' spoken and written
registers. With or without formal education and knowledge about sets offixed expressions
(Moon, 1992), native and non-native speakers alike use these bundles to express their attitude
or assessments of certainty that frame some other propositions (Biber, et al. 2004).
Corresponding to Biber and Barbieri's (2007) stance bundlesand Hyland's (2002)participant-
oriented features, attidunal bundles convey interpersonal meanings including expressing the
writer's evaluations/attitudes and addressing/involving the readers to argumentation
(Navratilova, 2012).
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There are five (5) functional sub-categories of stance bundles exemplified in Biber &
Barbieri's Lexical Bundles in University Spoken and Written Registers (2007). Succeeding are
some common examples:
Epistemic lexical bundles:
I dont knowwhat the voltage is here
There was irony in the fact that the Russian Revolution [. . .] proclaimed itself to be Marxist ...
Desire bundles:
I dont want to deliver bad news to her.I want you to take out a piece of paper and jot some notes down . . .
Obligation (directive) bundles:
All you have to do is work on it.
Intention/prediction bundles:
right now what were going totake a look at are ones that are [...] positive and beneficial.
Ability bundles:
I want you to be able to name and define those four curriculum category [sic].
Stance bundles are often used to express a writers evaluation of a proposition in terms
of certainty or uncertainty (epistemic) (e.g., seems to have been). They can also convey the
writers attitude about proposition (obligation/directive) (e.g., it is important to). If the writers
judgment on the ability to do something is involved, then they are grouped under ability (e.g.,
will be able to) (Chen & Baker, 2010).
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Nativization of English
The English language has been across cultures, languages and nations, yet thus
perceived as the international language [since the second world war]. Countries within the
outer circle--those who speak English as their second language, as the Philippinessee English
as a very remarkable and important element in the entire nation for numerous historical and
even political reasons. Now, it extensitively, taught, learned and spoken everywhere for
different purposes of globalization (Chomsky, 2009). Kachru's The Alchemy of English then
added that knowing English is similar to possessing the fabled Aladdin's lamp that can take you
to international business and linguistic success (1986). N. Hence, English has been playing an
extememly important role internationally because it is nowadays used as the global medium of
communication (Wiriyachitra, 2010) and a lingua franca (Fromkin et al. 2007). Most of these
are cited in Native and Non-Native: A Controversial Idea of an English Teacher which
emphasizes the importance of English in the modern time which not any longer just a mere
collegiate requirement but a vital prerequisite factor in everyday life; it is the international
medium of communication (Yang, academia.edu).
Nonetheless, ESL countries or nations within Chomsky's Outer Circle (2009) have
individuals who use Pidgins and Creoles as their first language or motherthe first language
they learned at home use to bridge people with uncommon or dissimilar native language,
especially most of the mixed marriages' offspring who grew up using a pidginized language.
Pidginization (Bakker, 2010) is the process of deriving a pidginlanguage from other different
languages. These are used by people, living together in a society, but not sharing a common
language. Hence, the pidginized language is what they use most often which is later on also
acquired by all other children and members of the same community.
Creoles , on the other hand, is the language that came into existence at a certain period
of time. Distinctive from pidgin languages, this creates its own native speakers through
linguisitic diversity and language concomitant reduction that extends the use of thepidgin
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(Mulshausler, 1986; Hancock, 1979; Baker et al. 1990:93). Nativization is how we will now
address the fulfillment of the process in its entirety whereby a language gains native
speakers.This happens necessarily where a second language used by adult parents becomes the
native language of their children (Arends et al. 1992).
Speakers across different countries which considers English as a second language have
been deliberately analysed in some studies (e.g. Dontcheva-Navratilova, 2012; Cammiciotoli,
2004; Biber, et al. 2007; etc.) while some of these have also compared NNS' registers native
speakers of English which are countries in the inner circle.
Nevertheless, the analysis of speakers within one country shall be another [separate]
focus, for people in one non-native English-speaking country always has two groups or varieties
of speakers: those using English as their first or nativized language and those who spoke an
other language/dialect, considerably their mother tongue, prior to English which is just learned
eventually in school and/or during their early developmental stage. In this study, they, in their
latter group, are pertained to as the non-native ESL speaker/learners of English.
This is based on Liaw's citation of Richards and his colleagues' definition that [even] the
language learned after some knowledge of another language introduced by other older family
members or babysitters can also be considered a native language; this argues the majority of
linguistics' understanding or description of L1. It is asserted in their Dictionary of Language
Teaching & Applied Linguistics that native language is not limited to the language learned in a
strictly defined context and individuals can be native speakers of more than one language
(Richards et al. 2004).
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Henceforth, Filipinos and other individuals who were exposed to the use of the second
language starting at home, in the community, and in the school, all contexts wherein the
primary mean of communication is English, despite being born in an ESL country, certainly falls
to this categorythe nativized non-native or native speakers/learners. Yet, they manifest
several differences from the usual ESL speakers in the country especially in terms of fluency and
linguistic competence because they perform the use of linguistic authenticity more flawlessly.
Mousavi supports this centrality when one if his non-native participants in his research
also admitted that it occasionally caused linguistic inferiority and nervousness when
shetalking/dealing with his nativized or NS colleagues perhaps because of their determinable
eloquence and communicative competence (2007).
The nonnative speakers, indeed, are not [so] marginal to these nativized learners since
they will also be equipped with preferable pedagogic strategies especially when subjected to
formal school. Gradually, ordinary ESL students can professionally decrease language difficulties
which may also match or even surpass NS and nativized language proficiency and/or accuracy
(Auerbach, 1993; Phillipson, 1992, Medgyes, 1994 as cited in Liaw, 2004).
Henceforth, this uncertaintyfocusing on the two non-native groups' differences,
particularly in their fixed expression or word bundlesmay be tracked with the utilization of an
automated frequency-driven approach that simply distinguishes the most frequently occurring
sequences of words in a sub-corpus of texts from a single register, such as do you want toand I
dont know what in conversation (Biber & Barbieri, 2007) and even in story telling that could
stimulate spontaneity of ideas through the use of first-person narration and/or direct speeches
in addition to those previously-used corporas which are student essays (Aktas & Cortes, 2008;
Kwan, 2006; Bruce, 2005).
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III. METHODOLOGY
Corpora used in research
The corpora used in this study are thirty flash narratives two different groups of learners
coming from two different schools with different language contexts. Hence, the medium of all
aspects of communication used in the first school is the country's L2, English, and the language
regularly used in the second school is the L1, Filipino. Respectively, all the participants are high
school students [ages ranging from 14-16 years old] having English in their respective schools,
De La Salle Santiago Zobel School and Angelicum Primarosa Montessori School, as a regular
subject being offered under the 2010 Revised Secondary Education Curriculum (RSEC) of theDepartment of Education, Republic of the Philippines.
With the consent of Palmridge and APMS English subject teachers, each of the
participants were tasked to compose a flash narrative which should be restricted to 800-1000
words only. The theme that the students were requite to write should be about LOVE, POWER,
MONEY and SUCCESS which were commonly-used themes by prominent English-American
writers (Roldan, et al. 2014). Elements of short story, direct and reported speech, and first-
person narration were all introduced and refreshed to them [the students] prior to the
composition task so that they may be expected to apply this knowledge when they write.
For easier assessment and to avoid flabbiness among students write-ups, the genre
introduced to them is a flash fiction. This would also encourage them to express themselves
more clearly and directly instead on focusing on very detailed plot sequences. Flash fictionis a
style of fictional literature orfiction of extreme brevity (Cohen, 2000). There is no widely
accepted definition of the length of the category. Some self-described markets for flash fiction
impose caps as low as three hundred words, while others consider stories as long as a thousand
words to be flash fiction. One of the first known usages of the term "flash fiction" in reference
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to the literary style was the 1992 anthology Flash Fiction: Seventy-Two Very Short Stories. Editor
James Thomas stated that the editors' definition of a "flash fiction" was a story that would fit on
two facing pages of a typical digest-sizedliterary magazine (Thomas, 1992). In China the style is
frequently called a "smoke long" or "palm-sized" story, with the comparison being that the
story should be finished before the reader could finish smoking a cigarette (Batchelor, 2011).
Satisfactorily, the high school students were able to complete this expectation in a period of
only three to four school days.
Data Collection
Among all the students in the selected classes are encouraged to write a good flashfiction. Their outputs were gathered by asking them to send a soft copy through electronic mail,
whereas they were also encouraged to submit a hard copy if possible. Only the top thirty
performing stories out of over sixty (60) were selected, based on a scoring rubric used by the
researcher: content, the information provided in the narrative; structure, the way it is
organized; style, how it is creatively said; and writing mechanics, the correct use of grammar
spelling and other conventions are generally the standards looked into in selecting the
satisfactory corpora, observing a 5-point highest rating for every criterion (Camorun, 2004).
Those high school narratives observing the use of first person point of view and a
number of direct speeches (enclosed in quotation marks for easier distinction) have also been
more preferabale since this triggers the presence of more expression of capabilities,
uncertainties and attitudinal words in their characters. Fifteen narratives are taken from De La
Salle Santiago Zobel high school and another fifteen from Angelicum Primarosa School wherein
lexical bundles will be tallied and subsequently compared to generate a conclusion and
recommendations. A quantitative, comparative approach is necessary to determine the
distribution of linguistc features across registers and in identifying the relative rarity and
commonness of those features (Biber & Conrad, 2001).
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Unit of analysis (sample parsing)
The unit that will be used by the researcher and also the intercoder to analyse and to
note the appearance and frequency of lexical bundles is the IDEA unit of analysis. When the
participant-writer aims to express the modality or attitudinal stance of the character/s, he/she
may make it only through writing semantic chunks of information which is viewed by anyone,
both the writer and readers, as a surface form which clearly and complete relays idea/s, and
this can also be relatedly psychological surface for our intercoder (Kroll, 1977:85). Ortographic
analysis may also be applicable on series of sentences or paragraphs that rarely display the use
or expression of stance bundles.
The following is the a sample parsing that will be applied to all the corporas, especially
during the expressions of stances and first-person narrations:
DESIRE"Yeah? What do you wan t?"
EPISTEMIC DESIRE"You look l ikeyou had an interesting life! You want totell me some stuff about it?"
DESIRE"Heh! What is i t to you, youngling?"
OBLIGATION OBLIGATION"I need to know whatit was like during the depression, I real ly need to kno wthe hardships you wentthrough."
INTENTION"Well...... Alright. Let methink for a moment...."
INTENTION/PREDICTION"Really? You' re going totry to remember?!"
INTENTION ABILITY"Please, Let meremember in peace for it is quite a story that you canlearn from!" (Arion, 2004)
Lexical bundles may incorporate verb phrases, dependent clauses, noun phrases and
prepositional phrases, and stance bundles may also be further classified as either personal or
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impersonal (Biber, Conrad & Cortes, 2004). a quantitative, comparative approach is very
necessary to determine the distribution of linguistic features across nativized and non-native
registers and in identifying the relative rarity or commonness of those features (Biber & Conrad,
2001). Hence, the multi-dimensional frequency-driven analytic approach will again be
operationalized (Biber, 1988; Biber & Conrad, 2001; Biber, Conrad, reppen, Byrd & Helt, 2002)
in this study.
The Intercoding Process
The same sets of data would undergo intercoding wherein a requested professional
counterchecks the identifications of sub-functions performed by attitudinal stance lexical
bundles in the corpora. Showing to the intercoder how the process is being done, including the
tallying of phrases [lexical bundles] used and the juxtapostion of those use by the two groups
[nativized learners and non-native learners], he is going to formulate his own findings as guided
by the table to presented below in the data analysis. The intercoder notes lexical bundles he
noticed and would identify if it is a stance expression of epistemic, desire, attitude, obligation
and/or ability.
The Data Sampling
To mitigate the intercoding process, only the first 300-400 words of every flash fiction
[submitted by respondents] would be presented to the intercoder. He could opt to choose the
only the most noticeable stance phrases; nonetheless, he is encouraged to determine not less
than five bundles from every story. Subsequently, he would classify the function of the every
lexical bundle he encircled, and these interpretations would be compared to the analysis of the
researcher to yield the percentage of agreement accordingly.
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The Intercoder
Our intercoder who will help us determine the stance lexical bundles and their
functional identification is MR. JEROME BENEDICT LILIA ALIPASA from Ateneo de Manila
University. Mr. Alipasa is a professional/licensed teacher who is taking up Master of Arts in
Philosophy in the above-mentioned university. He graduated Bachelor of Secondary Education,
Major in Sociology with Best in Reseach Awardfor his thesis entitled, The Phenomenological
Inquiry of Bullying Experiences among High Schools Students at the University of Perpetual Help
System Dalta where he impressively served as the Supreme Student Council PRESIDENT for
consecutive years. His consistent exposure to speaking, reading and writing engagements can
easily help us identify expressions of peoples attitude, desire, epistemic, intention, prediction,
etc. Presently, he is the outstanding Deputy Director of Angelicum Primarosa School, offering
complete Basic Education Curricula, and an active officer of ASMMEPPS and City of Dasmarinas
Association of Private Schools.
Percentage of Agreement
The same unit of analysis (Idea units) and noting would be used and subsequently
compared to results tallied by the researcher initially. The percentage of agreement noted is
approximately 80% (where 128 of the intercoders 160 responses agree to the initial coding
results). Yet, despite of the acceptability of the percentage agreement which transpired, there
are some items which are corrected and/or considered when the two coders concede to
establish functions of desire, obligation and ability to conventionalized subject-verb patterns as
I want to, I need, I can, etc. Whenever such of these popular lexical expressions are noted, the
proper labelling of category will be particularized immediately although modals may be used to
express attitudes differently. After all, all multi-word succession called lexical bundles falling
under the same category, in a complicated way, may overlap purposes [as desire and intention]
since all these are under one major classification or function, and that is to express attitudes or
assessments of certainty (Biber, Conrad & Cortes, 2004).
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IV. PRESENTATION AND INTERPRETATION OF DATA
Lexical bundles are widely used even in flash narratives composed by the student-
participants from either group. Numerous appearances were noted regardless of the style,
point of view and theme that the authors opted to use. Among the four sub-categories of
stance bundles, namely desire, epistemic, intention/prediction, obligation/directive, and ability,
the expression having the vastest variations of phrases are tallied under the intention stance.
How the students express intents and predictions greatly vary regardless which group they
belong to because each one of the participants has their own distinctive way on how to express
this attitude (please see figure 1 for intention/prediction stance).
It is apparent that learners from a non-native learning community use more varieties of
lexical bundles, most significantly when stating intentions and predictions. Certainly,this is due
to their preferred point of view which has usually been first-person view of narration.
Additionally, most of narratives from the second group talk about feelings like love. In view
hereof, intentions and predictions are mentioned very frequently since these emotions [as
being lonely, inspired, disheartened or overwhelmed] most likely lead to these certain
intentions and anticipations of eventual outcomes that would result from their current mood,
attitude or perception.
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3. INTENTION/ PREDICTION NATIVIZED
LEARNERS
NON-NATIVE
LEARNERS
they/you will...
I promise...
You shall be...
that would be...
He vowed to...
We decide to...
how is one supposed to...
I still I believe that the...
looking forward to ...
He would...
He was also fond of...
this eventually led toIm hoping you to
I want you to know that
Im not interested in
we started
he keeps on
he was going to
I thought
We may be
I decided that
She already complained about
It's been fine to her
She is starting to be
they're going to
they're going to have
It was easy to
I really hope that
I could be
I should be really
Im not doing this forIm doing this to
it will never
I see
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FIGURE 1: Intention/Prediction Stance Bundles in all examined Flash Narratives
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Hence, this intention/prediction category garnered the most number of lexical
expressions noted, followed by the attitudinal stance bundles of epistemic and desire (see
figure 2). These are the sub-functions of lexical bundles, wherein writers are able to derive
more syntactic forms of expressing; whereas on the other hand, the remaining two (2)
categorieswhich are obligation and abilityfairly consist only of common word successions
that are observed to be often identical in both groups of corpora.
FIGURE 2: Quantitative Distribution of Lexical Bundles in all 30 literary texts
ATTITUDINAL STANCE BUNDLES
Epistemic Desire Ability Obligation/Direction Intention/Prediction
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FIGURE 3: Attitudinal EPISTEMIC Stance Bundles
(comparing nativized and non-nativized noted expressions)
To classify, there are two types of expressing
epistemic stance according to the certain pronoun
used: It may be personal or impersonal. There is a
significant percentage of impersonal stance usage
on how they express epistemicity (refer to the
underlined bundles in Figure 3). Students, as they
would not prefer to express their epistemic level directly, likely to avoid being misterpreted or
upsetting the interlocutor, make wise use of impersonal epistemic phrases as It is indeed true,
Ill be sure that it is, when you feel like, etc.
INTERPRETATION:
= 3-5 times per ten thousand
words
= 10-15 times per ten
thousand words
= 16-20 times per ten
thousand words = above 20 times per ten
thousand words
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Likewise for desire stance lexical bundles, some phrases have evidently been so notable
due to their numerable frequency of repeated appearances (Figure 4). Some of these are I could
[appearing 16-20 intances in all 30 fictions] and They wanted to[which is repeated usedabout
25 times per ten thousand words] which are both common expressions/phrases in expressing
ones desirescertainly, these are the most sensible, appropriate and convenient to use
especially when you purposively do not look for other unfamiliar yet ambigious words just for
saying your or your characters wants.
FIGURE 4: Attitudinal/Modality Lexical Bundles noted for expressing DESIRE/S
2. DESIRE NATIVIZED
LEARNERS
NON-NATIVE
LEARNERS
We shall...
I want to...
I will...
He had wantedto...
I would...
Ive...
I didnt...
I could be...
i do not...
he loved doing...
he usually...
He was fond of...
He began...
I would rather...
I swore to myself to...
You look like...
They wanted to
You're going to...
What do you want
I/She want you toI want you all to
it is my choice to..
still longing for
to make sure
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As presented in the chart (Figure 2), obligating others or expressing ones own
obligations yielded the most countable stance-expressing phrases and frequencies. Students at
this adolescent stage may not be used to express or acknowledge obligations, especially when
these are to be described in speech or writing; thus, most of their attidunal expression are
merely intentions and/or expressions of desires. Epistemic stances, too, are comparatively
much greater in number compared to these words/phrases of desire (in Figure 5) and ability
(found in Figure 6).
FIGURE 5: Attitudinal/Modality DIRECTIVE Bundles
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Expectedly, ability bundlesthough not as numerous as the leading three stancesposed a
significant number of instances wherein commonly-used expressions from the other group are
also used by the learners in the other. They are considerably, as to these results, universal.
Frequency-wise, it is not questionable that shorter two- or three-word lexical phrases would
appear very often. They are easily noted and spontaneously used by writers, especially the
expression You can, although other forms or revisions of this popular combination must also betried in order to purposefully enrich students creativity in the usage of words as well.
5. ABILITY NATIVIZED
LEARNERS
NON-NATIVE
LEARNERS
you/he can
I could not
I have never
He also learned how to
They soon learned to
The incapability of to
he gets tired to
I went to
I ask if he could
I had
I cant
All I can do is
Ive ever had
I managed toIt can never be
It easy for me to
I have
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FIGURE 6: Attitudinal/Modality ABILITY Bundles
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FIGURE 7: The Frequency-Driven Comparison between the Nativized and Non-Native Group
In conclusion, it is remarkable that non-native learners [students who are enrolled in a
school wherein primary language used for communication is the vernacular] have recorded a
greater number of attidinal/modality lexical bundles compared to the nativized ones. They are
truly maximizing forms and variations of expressions to signify their stance. This is only a little
different from nativized speakers who rely to their usual rich English writing register and to
selectively use the most-often used sets of lexical phrases, most likely, to minimize ambiguity,
peculiarity and confusion that unfamiliar sets of words/phrases may bring to general types
readers usually found in their nativized English-speaking community.
0 20 40 60 80 100
Nativized
Non-NativeEPISTEMIC
DESIRE
ABILITY
INTENTION
OBLIGATION
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V. DISCUSSION
Lexical bundles, characterized by conventionalized and prominent vocabulary or
formulaic sequences of words [as addressed by Nattinger in 1988], are certainly prevalent even
in literary texts. Hence, previous researches have significantly proven the regular effective
usage of in classroom settings (Dontcheva-Navratilova, 19; Biber & Barbieri, 2007), including
class discussions, students' group conversations and even in their written outputs and registers.
Epistemic and intenion/prediction stance bundles display the most varied syntactical
structure of phrasesrecurrent word successions. These are two of the five distinguished
major categories of attitudinal or modality stance which is best described as conveyances or
expression of interpersonal meanings which include the writers/speakers/ evaluation and
attitude towards a certain condition or circumstance (Dontcheva, 2012). On the other hand,
bundles of obligation and ability which are often known to be the easiest to use or express
garner only a very few variationsvarieties of lexical phrase composition. This is due to the
most popular word combinations and phrases that are most frequently and conventionalized
used as a standard or universally-accepted utterance as I can and I shouldappearing several
types in almost all texts.
Summing all the modality bundles subconsciously used by learners from the nativized
and non-native groups, those who are not having English regularly in their community (learning,
peers and residence) made use of more lexical bundles (about 20% greater in number)
compared to how often these are used by nativized English-speakers from another community
or society. This counteracts usual notions and outcomes from other studies that native
speakers know and use more of these conventionalized phrases or speech act sets (e.g. Tanck,2010); but it supports another stud/ies regarding the most proper and effective usage of these
discourse markers [which is also recognized as one major and most important role of lexical
bundles in discourse] among non-native guest lectures, as compared to L1 guest lecturers from
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whom was recorded a lower frequency of discourse structuring during Morrelsand
Camicciotolisstudy wherein they delivered interactive lecture to EFL students (2004).
The use of discourse markers, as well as lexical bundles, facilitated more
comprehensible outputs and could have more positive effects on producing more cohesive and
meaningful compositions. This is one certain pedagogical impact that these lexical expression
have recorded through students writings (Tehrani & Dastjerdi, 2012). Accordingly, other lexical
bundles categories pointed out by Biber and his colleagues, which are multi-functional
referencing, discourse structuring and ___ text-deixis may also be focused. On subsequent
further studies regarding the same discourse analysis concern, other separate groups to
strengthen the claim about nativization (introduced by Arends et al. in 1992) shall be added to
extend the benefits beyond the selected communities of students. With due respect, a
quantitative, comparative approach is still necessary to determine the distribution of linguistic
features across registers and in identifying the relative rarity or commonness (Biber & Conrad,
2001) that could improve pragmatic and discourse competence achievement of our
differentiated ESL learners.
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