Assignment27 final draft

Assignment 27: Timeline Final Draft

Patrycia ButrymEsere Simei-Akajagbo

Shivonne WeekesCourtney Buabeng

1. Kayla looking at girl -Mid shot -POV 2. Then shows Holly walking away -Long shot -POV

Then shows Holly running up the stairs -Tilt from feet to head -Low angle -Shows that she’s distressed -POV

4. Shows Holly’s hands tied up, tied feet, taped mouth -Extreme close up -Eyes wide open shows she’s terrified

5. Shows Holly tied up in the chair -Mid shots of her back, front and side

Story In 21 Bullet Points

Story In 21 Bullet PointsContinued

6. Shows Holly tied up in chair -Long shot from the front 7. Kayla picking up camera and opening it -Close up shot -Over the shoulder -Introduces POV

8. Kayla looks at Holly and walks around her in a circle -POV- 360 (Creates a sense of isolation/ sympathy.)

9. Kayla strokes Holly’s hair - POV - Close up shot (Shows that she’s obsessed.)

10. Kayla shows the knives that are laid out -Slow pan -POV


11. Kayla puts the camera down -POV - Shows knives - Shows Holly’s chest breathing at a medium speed

12. Kayla picks up a knife - Audience can hear silence - Shows Holly’s chest breathing heavily - Puts down knife dripping in blood

13. Kayla selects another knife - Hear Holly screaming - Foley- Flesh cutting - Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt - Kayla puts back knife dripping in blood

14. Kayla selects another knife -Hear Holly still panting and screaming -Foley- Flesh cutting -Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt -Kayla puts down knife dripping in blood, with tiny chunks of flesh and blonde hair


15. Kayla selects another knife -Holly’s breathing slows down -Foley- knife rubbed together -Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt -Holly’s stops moving

16. Kayla picks up knives -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV

17. Kayla looks back at the girl and walks away -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV

18. Kayla walks out of the house-(shouldn’t be room?) -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV


19. Kayla puts knives in the sink -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV

20. Kayla removes her overalls -POV -Heartbeat/Drums volume control increases -Climax is built

21. Kayla in the mirror with flesh wig -Freeze frame- screaming -Close up shot

TimelineT

Linear, Chronological Time

Non-Linear (Flashbacks)

Titles/Credits (On black)

Camera Shots & Effects

Mid ShotThen POV -

Kayla continuously watching Holly

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Long Shot- Holly walking outside of train

POV- Kayla’s POV of Holly looking back at her

Tilt – From Holly’s feet to head

Low Angle- Of Holly frantically running up the stairs

POV- Kayla’s POV of Holly

looking back at her

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Director and Casts

Distribution Company

Close Up Shots- Holly’s hands, feet tied and her mouth taped

Extreme Close Up-Holly’s eyes terrified and wide open

Production Company

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Mid Shots- Holly’s hands tied up shown from the back, front and sides

Long Shot- Holly tied up

Over The Shoulder-Kayla picking up the camera

Close Up Shot then POV-Shows Kayla’s hands opening side

of camera

POV (360 turning)-Kayla watches Hollyand walks around her

in a circle

POV then Close Up Shot- Kayla strokes Holly’s hair

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POV- Kayla shows the knives laid out on a table

Slow Pan-Kayla pans the different knives laid out

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TimelineTitles/Credits (On black)

Camera Shots & Effects

Linear, Chronological Time

Non-Linear (Flashbacks)

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Production DesignersMusic

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POV-Kayla puts camera down on table facing Holly’s chest pumping at a medium speed

Close Up Shot- Showing the knives at the same time

Close Up Shot- Kayla’s hand picks up a knife

Mid Shot- Holly’s breathing quickens with fear and she starts panting

Close Up Shot- Kayla puts knife down dripping in blood

Close up shot- Kayla selects another knife

Mid Shot-Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt

Close Up Shot- Kayla puts knife

back dripping in blood

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Close Up Shot- Kayla selects another knife

Mid Shot- Shows Holly’s breathing slowing down and blood pouring down on

Holly’s white t-shirt

Mid Shot- Holly’s stops moving

POV- Kayla picks up all the knives laid out

Close Up Shot- Kayla selects another knife

Mid Shot- Holly still panting, screaming and shuffling and shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt

Close Up Shot- Kayla puts down knife dripping in blood, with tiny chunks of flesh and blonde hair

POV- Kayla looks back at Holly and walks away

POV- Kayla walks out of room

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POV- Kayla puts knives in the sink

POV- Kayla removing her overall

Close up shot- Kayla n the mirror stroking flesh wig

Props and Costume

Edited

Changes From TimelinesPart 1

We were then able to explore:

• different special effects•props •camera shots

That would be appropriate for each scene.

Detail for some important scenes

•We added shots, inspirations from real films and instrumental beats after each frame

•This helped us with our next stage

• Which was taking our developed ideas- to create the final timeline

Developed ideas

We planned the timeline on paper

For each frame we roughly calculated the duration e.g. 30 secs

Changes From TimelinePart 2

This timeline has more detail

It explains the details within each frame

Before After

This timeline has more detail

It explains the details within each frame

It specifies how many flashbacks we have.

Also explains the features of the flashbacks

Pictures Of Group

Patrycia and Esere- Adding the credits into the timeline

Patrycia and Esere were drawing the timeline

Patrycia writing the script Courtney adding the seconds to the timeline

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