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Assignment 27: Timeline Final Draft
Patrycia ButrymEsere Simei-Akajagbo
Shivonne WeekesCourtney Buabeng
1. Kayla looking at girl -Mid shot -POV 2. Then shows Holly walking away -Long shot -POV
Then shows Holly running up the stairs -Tilt from feet to head -Low angle -Shows that she’s distressed -POV
4. Shows Holly’s hands tied up, tied feet, taped mouth -Extreme close up -Eyes wide open shows she’s terrified
5. Shows Holly tied up in the chair -Mid shots of her back, front and side
Story In 21 Bullet Points
Story In 21 Bullet PointsContinued
6. Shows Holly tied up in chair -Long shot from the front 7. Kayla picking up camera and opening it -Close up shot -Over the shoulder -Introduces POV
8. Kayla looks at Holly and walks around her in a circle -POV- 360 (Creates a sense of isolation/ sympathy.)
9. Kayla strokes Holly’s hair - POV - Close up shot (Shows that she’s obsessed.)
10. Kayla shows the knives that are laid out -Slow pan -POV
Story In 21 Bullet PointsContinued
11. Kayla puts the camera down -POV - Shows knives - Shows Holly’s chest breathing at a medium speed
12. Kayla picks up a knife - Audience can hear silence - Shows Holly’s chest breathing heavily - Puts down knife dripping in blood
13. Kayla selects another knife - Hear Holly screaming - Foley- Flesh cutting - Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt - Kayla puts back knife dripping in blood
14. Kayla selects another knife -Hear Holly still panting and screaming -Foley- Flesh cutting -Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt -Kayla puts down knife dripping in blood, with tiny chunks of flesh and blonde hair
Story In 21 Bullet PointsContinued
15. Kayla selects another knife -Holly’s breathing slows down -Foley- knife rubbed together -Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt -Holly’s stops moving
16. Kayla picks up knives -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
17. Kayla looks back at the girl and walks away -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
18. Kayla walks out of the house-(shouldn’t be room?) -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
Story In 21 Bullet PointsContinued
19. Kayla puts knives in the sink -POV -Heartbeat/Drums introduce next POV
20. Kayla removes her overalls -POV -Heartbeat/Drums volume control increases -Climax is built
21. Kayla in the mirror with flesh wig -Freeze frame- screaming -Close up shot
TimelineT
Linear, Chronological Time
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
Titles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
Mid ShotThen POV -
Kayla continuously watching Holly
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Long Shot- Holly walking outside of train
POV- Kayla’s POV of Holly looking back at her
Tilt – From Holly’s feet to head
Low Angle- Of Holly frantically running up the stairs
POV- Kayla’s POV of Holly
looking back at her
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Director and Casts
Distribution Company
Close Up Shots- Holly’s hands, feet tied and her mouth taped
Extreme Close Up-Holly’s eyes terrified and wide open
Production Company
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30 s
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35 s
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Mid Shots- Holly’s hands tied up shown from the back, front and sides
Long Shot- Holly tied up
Over The Shoulder-Kayla picking up the camera
Close Up Shot then POV-Shows Kayla’s hands opening side
of camera
POV (360 turning)-Kayla watches Hollyand walks around her
in a circle
POV then Close Up Shot- Kayla strokes Holly’s hair
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ecs
POV- Kayla shows the knives laid out on a table
Slow Pan-Kayla pans the different knives laid out
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TimelineTitles/Credits (On black)
Camera Shots & Effects
Linear, Chronological Time
Non-Linear (Flashbacks)
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80 S
ecs
Production Designers
Music BY
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ecs
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65 s
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POV-Kayla puts camera down on table facing Holly’s chest pumping at a medium speed
Close Up Shot- Showing the knives at the same time
Close Up Shot- Kayla’s hand picks up a knife
Mid Shot- Holly’s breathing quickens with fear and she starts panting
Close Up Shot- Kayla puts knife down dripping in blood
Close up shot- Kayla selects another knife
Mid Shot-Shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt
Close Up Shot- Kayla puts knife
back dripping in blood
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Close Up Shot- Kayla selects another knife
Mid Shot- Shows Holly’s breathing slowing down and blood pouring down on
Holly’s white t-shirt
Mid Shot- Holly’s stops moving
POV- Kayla picks up all the knives laid out
Close Up Shot- Kayla selects another knife
Mid Shot- Holly still panting, screaming and shuffling and shows blood pouring down on Holly’s white t-shirt
Close Up Shot- Kayla puts down knife dripping in blood, with tiny chunks of flesh and blonde hair
POV- Kayla looks back at Holly and walks away
POV- Kayla walks out of room
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2
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125
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POV- Kayla puts knives in the sink
POV- Kayla removing her overall
Close up shot- Kayla n the mirror stroking flesh wig
Props and Costume
Edited
Changes From TimelinesPart 1
We were then able to explore:
• different special effects•props •camera shots
That would be appropriate for each scene.
Detail for some important scenes
•We added shots, inspirations from real films and instrumental beats after each frame
•This helped us with our next stage
• Which was taking our developed ideas- to create the final timeline
Developed ideas
We planned the timeline on paper
For each frame we roughly calculated the duration e.g. 30 secs
Changes From TimelinePart 2
This timeline has more detail
It explains the details within each frame
Before After
This timeline has more detail
It explains the details within each frame
It specifies how many flashbacks we have.
Also explains the features of the flashbacks
Pictures Of Group
Patrycia and Esere- Adding the credits into the timeline
Patrycia and Esere were drawing the timeline
Patrycia writing the script Courtney adding the seconds to the timeline