AS Coursework Overall Marks

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AS Coursework Overall Marks Name: Harrison Radcliffe Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20 For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 56/60 Footage: Is appropriate for target audience, fitting genre conventions of a thriller well. Controlled use of camera throughout. Great use of mise en scene. Editing: Edited excellently to build to the plot. Great variety of shots used throughout. Good use of tracking shots. Sound: Great use of diegetic sound. Decision to have no non-diegetic sound is effective Overall: An excellent drama piece fitting the genre well. Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 14/20 Q1: PowerPoint/SlideShare Some understating of conventions/technical elements and how they were used in opening to conform/challenge to genre. Some audience expectation of genre recognised. Good reference to real products. Lacks good detail. Q2: Word&Images/SlideShare Some detail on how assassin represented – costume/performance/age. Lacks clarity – who exactly are you representing? Q3: Prezi Some detail on suitability of Warner Bros or Vertigo with some reference to real products but no conclusion and therefore question not answered??? Q4: Prezi Some info on potential audience but lacks good detail. No evidence of research – just because people wear a suit does not mean they will be an audience for a film whose protagonist wears a suit? Other interests included. Q5: Prezi Elements used to attract audience have been mentioned, but no feedback from audience. How do you know if you have been successful? No reflective analysis. Q6: PowerPoint/SlideShare Good detail (especially editing) on different technologies used. No mention of camera. Q7: Word&Images/SlideShare

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AS Coursework Overall Marks

Name: Harrison Radcliffe

Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20

For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet

Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 56/60

Footage:Is appropriate for target audience, fitting genre conventions of a thriller well. Controlled use of camera throughout. Great use of mise en scene.Editing:Edited excellently to build to the plot. Great variety of shots used throughout. Good use of tracking shots.Sound:Great use of diegetic sound. Decision to have no non-diegetic sound is effectiveOverall:An excellent drama piece fitting the genre well.

Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 14/20

Q1: PowerPoint/SlideShareSome understating of conventions/technical elements and how they were used in opening to conform/challenge to genre. Some audience expectation of genre recognised. Good reference to real products. Lacks good detail.Q2: Word&Images/SlideShareSome detail on how assassin represented – costume/performance/age. Lacks clarity – who exactly are you representing?Q3: PreziSome detail on suitability of Warner Bros or Vertigo with some reference to real products but no conclusion and therefore question not answered???Q4: PreziSome info on potential audience but lacks good detail. No evidence of research – just because people wear a suit does not mean they will be an audience for a film whose protagonist wears a suit? Other interests included.Q5: PreziElements used to attract audience have been mentioned, but no feedback from audience. How do you know if you have been successful? No reflective analysis.Q6: PowerPoint/SlideShareGood detail (especially editing) on different technologies used. No mention of camera.Q7: Word&Images/SlideShareGood detail on how improvement made within aspects of production – camera and editing. Good detail on what can still be improved. Reflection is specific to certain technical elements.

Overall:Work is good but lacks key detail. At times candidate shows good knowledge of conventions but does not show enough evidence to show a full understanding of topic. More variation of ICT needed.

Total 83/100 Level: Grade: A