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Art Over Easy

...This writer, it must be said, is not unhip to the problem; his final stanza acknowledges, "Butthis is already too much." He then exits with a list of images that flesh out his summary remark,that "Life is rushing by like a mad, swollen river." It's a simile typical of Collins in being both

commonplace and readily replaceable. Not much would be lost here if life rushed by like arunaway train or like a Derby thoroughbred. "Victoria's Secret" might, on a good night, stir up a

bit of group hilarity (though at the reading I attended the mirth faded after the first couplestanzas), and we are all grateful for any amount of harmless laughter. My point is that the humor doesn't lead to fresh insight or observation: The poem doesn't go anywhere except on to another species of clich--the lugubrio-comical (to coin a Polonius-like categorization) as well as themerely ludicrous.

The standard Collins poem also calls for the presentation of liberal-arts, and especially English-major, credentials--but with an aggressively flippant, superior-to-all-that-stuffy-literary-stuff

attitude. Readers and listeners presumably (given the sales record, given the graph of laughter athis readings) adore this opportunity to feel in the know after being handed the easiest possiblereferences, and also enjoy feeling superior to any and all great dead authors. In Sailing Alone wecome across sophomoric sendups of Petrarch, William Wordsworth, Stevens--and notable others.

One of the more memorable examples is a signature piece from Picnic, Lightning : "Taking Off Emily Dickinson's Clothes." Here we find a liberal sprinkling of Collins 's pronoun of

preference and plenty of puerile humor, together with the use of a famous author as both sourceof authority and object of conquest. It begins with the speaker / seducer recounting how heremoved Dickinson's "tippet made of tulle," then her "long white dress," then released various

"Catches, straps, and whalebone stays." The striptease progresses through a series of unrelatedsimiles and metaphors--in a manner typical of this writer who seldom carries through on aconceit (e.g., Dickinson's body is compared in rapid succession to an iceberg and to a swan).Unlike another striptease poem, John Donne's "Going to Bed" (Elegy 15), in which a man speakshis frank longing and cheerfully presents his naked vulnerability before his mistress, Collins 'sverse remains self-protective and cold. After six stanzas, it ends with this:

What I can tell you is

it was terribly quiet in Amherst

that Sabbath afternoon,

nothing but a carriage passing the house,

a fly buzzing in a windowpane.

So I could plainly hear her inhale

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when I undid the very top

hook-and-eye fastener of her corset

and I could hear her sigh when finally it was unloosed

the way some readers sigh when they realize

that Hope has feathers,

that reason is a plank,

that life is a loaded gun

that looks right at you with a yellow eye.

Constructed upon "What I can tell you" / "What I can't tell you" rhetorical turns, the description

depends--perhaps too heavily--on the assumption that every virginal creature is just waitingfor B illy Collins to get her out of her clothes. And what risible clothes: we get to snicker atromance-novel "mother-of-pearl / buttons down the back, / so tiny and numerous that it takesforever." She's so laughably premodern, that Dickinson, so repressed, so ready for ravishment.By quoting from her most anthologized poems (the carriage from "Because I could not stop for Death," the fly from "I heard a Fly buzz--when I died"), Collins gives us to know his literarycredentials--we know now that he's read what's assigned on an undergraduate syllabus--andcompliments listeners / readers on theirs. By quoting more from Dickinson at theend, Collins may of course be attempting to acknowledge her powerful strangeness, but this

brand of homage feels more like appropriation. Dickinson, meanwhile, remains perfectly capable

of defending herself, and does not need more than a single, brief quotation ("reason is a plank")in order to make her bedroom intruder stand, somewhat pathetically, stripped before us. Still, the

poem is a little bit ugly, isn't it? It smacks of unexamined aggression, which makes it resemble arape. The listener at a reading who joins in the laughter (as I did, though I stopped not long after the "tippet made of tulle") is likely to be left with an unpleasant aftertaste.

The final main ingredient in the Collins verse kitchen is the Romantically pitched you've-just-gotta- know -it's-a-poem ending. Interestingly, Collins has clung to this nineteenth-century practicedespite expressed antipathy for Romantic poetry. ("The Romantics killed off humor, and theyalso eliminated sex," he asserts in a recent Ne wsw ee k interview--a remark that overlooks, among

other Romantic exuberance, the comic brio and sexual worldliness of Byron but that does shedlight on Collins 's defiant embracement of the silly with the salacious.) He favors the resounding

pentameter ending--or, in contemporary style, the approximate pentameter--replete with time-tested references to nature and travel, as in these final lines from assorted poems in T he Art of

Drowning :

"... of a road we can't help traveling together."

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"... lost for a while in the home of the rain."

"... and to the vast, windless spaces between the stars."

"... offering a handful of birdsong and a small cup of light."

"... and pick out the dot of a hawk lost in the blue."

"... watching the light on the water, light in the air."

"... and a passing cloud darkens my page."

"... as wide awake as I will ever be."

And these, from Picnic, Lightning (I've bracketed the extrapentameter first syllables of eachline):

"... as one hour sweeps into the next.""... deep into the glittering white snow."

"... as the moon climbs high into the night."

"... [or real,] floating on the darkness of the water."

"... [even] the heavy, leafy trees along the shore."

"Across the pale parabolas of joy"--but no, that's P. G. Wodehouse's toss-off in L eave It t o P smi th.

Not every one of Collins 's conclusions is iambic and determinedly poetical, but he can generally be counted on to exit with a flourish, the operatic tenor in a velvet cape. In his new poems, thatcape still occasionally swirls on its way out the door (e.g., "with no end or name, some boundless

province of water"). In these more mortality-obsessed verses, which also have showy referencesto Asian poetry and to jazz artists Sonny Rollins and Thelonious Monk, he seems a little less

preoccupied with glancing over his Anglo-American literary shoulder--although Petrarch's"crazy tights" (noted above) do make their appearance in this most recent group, as do "coffeeand oranges," lifted again, in a different poem, from Stevens. On the whole, though these new

productions include the humor ingredient, they drag a bit, mechanical and weary. In a passageof "Pavilion" that's fresher and less erratic in its figurative language than usual, Collins admitsto growing tired of his own bag of tricks:

I find a word in a dictionary

and copy it onto the back of an envelope,

the piano heavy in the corner,

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the fan turning slowly overhead.

Such is life in this pavilion

of paper and ink

where a cup of tea is cooling,

where the windows darken then fill with light.

But I have had enough of it--

the slope of paper on the desk,

books on the floor like water lilies,

the jasmine drying out in its pot.

In fact, I am ready to die,

ready to return as something else,

like a brown-and-white dog

with his head always out the car window.

Then maybe, if you were still around,

walking along a street in linen clothes,

a portfolio under your arm,

you would see me go by,

my eyes closed,

wet nose twitching,

my ears blown back,

a kind of smile on my long dark lips.

The goofy, familiar canine-cruising-the-highway image is appealing, even charming. The reader--glimpsed as that dressed-for-summer-success "you," drifting on the raft of his single stanzaamong a sea of first-person pronouns--is invited to smile back at the reincarnated dog/poet whohas actually--get it?--taught an old dog a new trick. And it's a good bet that most of us will smile

back. After all, he's man's best friend--or is he?

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B illy Collins has a reputation as an unusually reader-friendly poet; and that's certainly the case,in the way a jokester/charmer strikes everyone as a friendly sort of fellow, or in the way we say"user-friendly" about a piece of computer software, meaning that it doesn't require too much of us. But if we ask whether Collins demonstrates consistent affection, good will, and regard for hisreader? It's easy to see his ambivalence toward poetic predecessors, his way of biting the handthat feeds him lines. What about his living audience?...