Analysis of Script Scenes one, two and three

We thought about doing it through the bedroom window because it seems like someone is preying on the girl. The window is from her bedroom so it shows where the action takes place.

We want to cut to the scene of the girl coming into the house, exaggerate that she’s alone. You’ll be able to see the girl walk into the house turn the lights on and walk up the stairs.

By having the scenes keep cutting to each other, it adds tension especially if we edit it together well.

Scenes four, five and six

We thought if we see the girl walking alone down the corridor, it would isolate her. But we didn’t want to add too much in like, extra characters or talking because we thought that it is supposed to only be the beginning of the film so their wouldn’t be much storyline anyway.

We’ve already done a lot of cutting from one scene to another, so we thought that this scene could all blend into one otherwise it could look like it’s trying to add too much tension and won’t be affective.

Scenes seven, eight and nineBy her sitting on the bed and no where else in her room, the girl is directly underneath the attic and also on the bed there isn’t much detail going on so you can focus of the acting.

We’re going to do the magazine flickering by using a hairdryer but cutting out the sound. We thought this would be a good idea because if we just did the banging from above it wouldn’t as been as effective on its own.

When she is going to pull down the ladder we’re going to go behind her so we can catch her walking up towards the attic and hopefully get it from different angles.

Scenes ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen and fourteen

Showing her pulling down the ladder, getting these shots from different angles will add to the whole suspense we’re hoping to build up.

Low angle from her feet show us using different agles and using them well hopefully.

These scenes in the attic are all going fairly slowly, very different and in contrast from before where the scenes are all cut together.