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    ESSAY WRITING MATERIALS FORVIDEOS

    UNDERSTAND THEUESTION

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    BRAINSTORMING

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    All o9e# "he .o#l%, people live in countless !i+erent citiesC Less "h$& $ "hi#% o*

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      Wo#0 .@$ "e$8 (WHY)

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    :AGE 4@TO:I3 K

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    EDITING YOUR WRITING

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    somethin if have !istractions> 'lso, it is important bein orani5e! because "e kno"

    embe! v"here is every thin.>. To continue, !evelopin a routine it is important> 7or eample, it for memy v

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    REFLECTING ON YOUR MISTAKES

    ADJECTIVES

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    …people have differents ways to….

    …necessaries things…

    … constructives criticisms

    …humans beings….

    … goods professionals….

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    …work’s goals….

    … daily’s tasks…..

    ESSAY STRUCTURE PROBLEMS

    I assert that to produce our best work we must work without distractions, work alone, and work organized.

      Working without people around you is productive 

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    "o continue, to learn. It is a fact that, I learn better. inally, no distractions.

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    magazine mentions that all people who work alone work good.

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    (se the passive voice

      In conclusion, learners "oul! rather stu!y alone!ue to these reasons- concentration can be achieve!,learnin can happen "henever they have time, an!kno"le!e can be acuire! any"here. /ave you beenconvince! by my reasons*

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    It is "i!ely believe! that e!ucation is key to be successful. #essthan a thir! of my classmates prefer to stu!y "ith a roup of theirpeers. The majority of professional people an! $E%&s aroun! the"orl! stu!ie! by themselves at their universities. 's far as I amconcerne!, stu!ents prefer to stu!y alone because they can focus,they can learn at any time, an! they can stu!y any"here.

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    In conclusion, learners "oul! rather stu!y alone !ue to thesereasons- concentration can be achieve!, learnin can happen"henever they have time, an! kno"le!e can be acuire! any"here./ave you been convince! by my reasons*

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    'll aroun! the "orl! people are pro!uctive in !i+erent "ays. Somein!ivi!uals prefer to "ork in!epen!ently. The majority of manaersan! $E%s prefer to "ork "ith a roup. I sustain that roup "ork ise@cient because it enerates lots of i!eas, it reunites !i+erent

    personalities, an! it allo"s "orkin at !i+erent times of the !ay.

    %n the ?rst line, "he 8o#e 1eo1le, "he 8o#e i%e$sC 7irst, t"ohea!s think better than one. 'ccor!in to oo! companies.com, atleast seventy percent more i!eas are enerate! by a roup thanin!ivi!ually. 9oreover, "hen you have many i!eas, you can select thebest of the best. 7or eample, !urin teachers Bmeetin "e eneratelosts of teachin activities, an! "e evaluate them an! use the reatones in our classrooms. In a!!ition, havin many i!eas allo"s bossesto CsaveD some for later. It is a fact that by havin a CbankD of i!eas"oul! save your time. 's you can see, "he#e $#e #i+h i%e$s .he&.o#0i&' i& $ '#o1C