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ADVICE FOR WAR POETSby Jendi Reiter
Each year our War Poetry Contest received many poems with striking images and
compelling stories that nonetheless didn't make it to the final round. Here are some of the
most common problems.
TOPIC AND VIEWPOINT
Subtlety wins points with us, and probably with most of the quality contests you'll
enter. The more straightforward and simple your message, the harder you must work to
make the language fresh and give real individuality to the characters and scenes. Poems
about such perennial topics as the loss of a loved one in war, the suffering of innocent
civilians, or the heroism of soldiers absolutely must rise above generalities. Your English
teacher was right: Show, don't tell.
Avoid ideological oversimplification ("we are good/they are evil" or vice
versa). This defeats the purpose of our contest, which is to encourage reflection about a
complex and important human problem that defies easy solutions.
Poems about specific events tend to work better than poems about war in the
abstract. Anecdotes and period details add originality and help the reader make a personal
connection with the poem's world.
Emotional complexity makes a poem more genuine. A poem that only expresses
one emotion, such as praise for fallen heroes or disdain for war-mongering leaders, may
not shed as much light on the human condition as a poem that shows the interplay of
conflicting impulses (within a single person or a society).
STRUCTURE AND STYLE
We have no stylistic bias against formal poetry, experimental poetry, or any
other aesthetic. Though free-verse narratives have dominated past winners' lists, this
primarily results from the mix of work we receive each year. Because this contest has a
theme, certain experimental poems may be at a slight disadvantage to the extent that one
cannot tell whether they are "about" war. The formal poems we've received often suffer
from archaic language or an overly sentimental message, which is why we haven't
published more of them. Aside from those cautions, we welcome all styles.
Longer poems, to succeed, must maintain consistent quality throughout. Shorter
poems, while they may be more tightly constructed, must have enough heft to compete
against the longer sagas. The ideal poem seizes one's interest right away, has something
substantial to say, and gets there without flagging. It could be half a page, or five pages.
Stick the dismount. An ending that falls flat can knock a poem from contention.
It's like a song that stops in the middle of a musical phrase, instead of ending on a chord
that resolves the melody. On the other hand, an ending that's too obvious is like the drum-
roll after a bad joke - it tries too hard and insults the reader's intelligence. The most
powerful endings add a new dimension to what has gone before, giving readers the sense
that they've reached the end of the journey. Where were you trying to take the reader?
Did you get there? The ending should leave no doubt about why the poem was written.
IMAGERY AND WORD CHOICE
Images that should be used sparingly: Certain phrases and metaphors
tend to recur frequently in the poems we receive. While it's possible to use them in a new
and interesting way, too often they are a substitute for reaching for a more original image
that would have a greater impact on the reader. Be alert for journalistic and rhetorical
clichés when writing war poetry, and ask yourself whether there's a fresher image that
could express your meaning. The following phrases and images have become hard to use
effectively:
Dogs of war
Winds of war
Fog of war
American eagle
Dove of peace
Word made flesh
Stock images of American political parties (e.g. fat-cat Republicans)
Common political catchphrases (e.g. "no blood for oil")
Boys playing with war toys (either as ironic/nostalgic contrast to real
war, or as criticism of war-making politicians)
Avoid ethnic slurs, even if the soldiers in your poem would actually have spoken
that way about the enemy. (This occurs most often in poems about WWII and Vietnam.)
We've never seen this enhance a poem.
Exclamation points should be used very sparingly. Your imagery and content
should be doing most of the work to build intensity; don't use punctuation as a crutch.
Also, resist the temptation to tack on an obvious concluding line that spells out the
message for anyone who didn't understand the rest of the poem.
CONTEST ETIQUETTE AND FORMATTING
Please don't put your names on poems when the contest asks for entries
to be submitted anonymously. That rule is meant to improve the fairness of the judging.
Many contests will simply discard improperly formatted entries, without notifying you or
returning your fee. We don't do that, but it takes us time to cover up the names and the
entry looks less professional.
Please don't include illustrations, clip art, drawings, photos, borders, or
titles in fancy fonts. Loud formatting makes us concerned that you don't think your poem
can stand on its own.
Please don't submit more poems than your entry fee covers.
Please spell-check your entries or, if you don't use a computer, ask a friend
to proofread for spelling and grammar. Watch out for common mix-ups such as it's/its,
desert/dessert, pour/pore.
Please don't write to the judge to ask "why didn't I win?" I wish I
could give individualized feedback on entries that didn't make the cut, since we get so
many poems with great potential, but it's just not practical. (If you do have comments or
questions, please be nice.) Read the winning entries at the links below and compare them
to your style of writing. Seek feedback from more experienced writers or teachers who
have read a lot of poetry, and consider revising your poem for next year's contest. This
contest is competitive, the distinctions between poems can be fine, and the judging
process is necessarily somewhat subjective, so don't be discouraged if you didn't place
highly this time.
Please notify us promptly if your poem is accepted
elsewhere. After our first year in 2002, we decided to require that War Poetry
Contest entries be previously unpublished, in order to advance the contest's goal of
encouragingnew reflections on this important theme. However, because of our long
response time, we do not impose a no-simultaneous-submissions rule. The reciprocal
courtesy we ask from our contestants is to notify us as soon as a pending entry in the War
Poetry Contest is accepted for publication elsewhere. Even if the deadline has passed, we
may be open to substitutions. Please do not wait to withdraw your poems until we contact
you as a potential winner.
Please don't resubmit poems or sections of poems that have
already won a prize in our contest, even if you've revised them. Also, if I
have given you feedback on a poem, you shouldn't submit (or resubmit) it to our contest
because that is unfair to the other entrants who have not corresponded with the judge.
However, feel free to resubmit other entries that didn't win last year, particularly if you've
revised them. A mix of old and new poems is usually a better strategy than resubmitting
an identical set from last year's contest.
SUGGESTED READINGS IN WAR POETRY
Poems
See Henry Reed's "Naming of Parts" and Wilfred Owen's "Greater Love". The
former is a masterpiece of irony and understatement; the latter is heartbreaking like a
Puccini opera. Owen (biography, war poems) and Siegfried Sassoon are two
leading poetic chroniclers of the horrors of World War I. For more contemporary work,
see the poetry and stories of Israeli author Elisha Porat.
Books
For work in a contemporary style, Mark Levine's book Enola Gay is an amazing,
surreal meditation on the apocalypse that we are now capable of bringing on ourselves.
Levine is also an example of someone with an excellent poetic ear, who understands the
sounds of the English language so well that his free verse has the inexorable rhythm of
formal poetry. Though not a war poet per se, Richard Hugo also shares this quality,
and for that reason is one of my favorite poets. He has an extraordinary ability to capture
the feel of a place. His poems are collected in Making Certain It Goes On.
Periodicals
War, Literature & the Arts, sponsored by the English Department of the US Air
Force Academy, publishes such notable poets as Richard Wilbur and Carolyn
Forché.
Click here for additional war poetry resources.
Click here to read winning poems from past War Poetry Contests with
comments from the judges.